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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
loved it.. but its better that u make this a dream... becoz its really early for all that
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
heya osam update
well i also think u should make it a dream seq
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
the part was great
i guess it should be a big dream sequence..which would shock both of them a lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Armaan-Shilpa staying at RM house coolplz don't make it dream its most romantic moment of ArSh i wish he realize he love her but what is last like Ridhima-pinnochio plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
hey vaani nice update..
loved arsh romantic moments
bt yes i think u shud make it a dream seq..
it happened to early..bcoz in ur last update u showed arman has nt 4got riddhima..
first show little bit more care 4m arman's side towards shilpa
special moments,beautiful dinner,etc..... scenes so dat there closeness luks natural nd more attractive..
wat say????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hey loved ur update dear it was supperb keep it up continue the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
nice ff
update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LATEST UPDATE

ARSH's room

As they entered the room, shilpa rushed into the bathroom to change her clothes.

When shilpa returned from the bathroom wearing a hot blue nightgown, she noticed armaan sitting on the bed with moist eyes.

S- kya hua armaan? (Keeping her hand on his shoulder)😕

A- (Immediately pushed her away & shouted) stay away from me?.tum samjhti kyun nahi? ... Na to meri zindagi mein tumhare liye koi jagah hain, aur na hi mere khwabon mein😡

S- (Crying) apna jeevan sathi mujhe tumne khud hi chuna tha? aur kin khwabon ki baat kar rahe ho tum armaan?😕

A- wo mein?(was not ready to accept the fact that he had started having feelings for her)

S- haan haan bolo na? kehdo ki jab tum mere paas aate ho to tumhe kuch pharak nahi parta?

A- nahi parta (he was looking down, trying to hide his emotions)

S- Look into my eyes & say that again

He looked into her eyes & could no longer control himself. He pulled her into a tight hug & started sobbing.😭

a-I'm sorry?. I'm really sorry for all the wrong things I've done, I'm sorry for the times I've been rude with you? plz mujhe maaf kardo ?. Yes??.yes, I have started having feeling for you shona😳

Shilpa was not ready to accept his apology as she had had enough of his rude behavior but the last line completely melted her. She pulled back from the hug & held his face in her hands.

S- Really, have you? ..(Still crying)😳

A- yes? but I don't know whether it is love or not. But one thing is for sure, I'll no longer be harsh with an angel like you. I'll try to give our relationship another chance..

S- Does that mean, no more shouting on me?

A- I said na I'm sorry? now can we start our relationship all over again

S- Sure, we can be be friends, right?

A- Yup? shilpa, thanks foe understanding me. I promise you, I'll no longer let my past come between our present. 😳

S- Okay?. Now can we sleep? .... aur der karenge na to iss cute dimpled doc ko dark circles ho jayenge.

Both of them laughed at this & armaan realized that he had been neglecting such an innocent wife of his, for a girl who actually never understood him. 😳

As shilpa turned to go, armaan pulled her back.

S- ab kya hua?

A- kuch bhool gaya tha?.. (He gave shilpa a slight peck on her forehead)

A huge smile came on shilpa's face & finally both of them dozed off - armaan on the carpet & shilpa on the bed.

Though they were not physically close, but their hearts were now with each other.😍

PROMO- Arsh explore Paris.

Edited by vaaniKSGmallik - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
wow the part was awesome continue soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

edited**************

it was a good part and thanks for making it a dream sequence

do continue soon

Edited by shona_lover - 15 years ago

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