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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ka7eela

my God i am speechless!!..i am so overwhelmed!..this is amazingly beautiful!...very well written!๐Ÿ‘i loved it!..keep on the good work.. ๐Ÿ‘

Thank you so much K7 ( gotta get your name) for reading through my OS and liking what i wrote. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ


this is the most logical and sensible progress of the Sid, Arman and Rids characters and the relationship that bonds them!..this is how it should be!...according to the previous events that were shown in DMG!..this goes so well with the track!..not the nonsense and BS that the CV's want to show us!..and unrealistically impose upon us!..

I feel the same, sweetz. I don't know what they have thought in the long run but the journey is making stooges out of SRA. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†



thank you poco!.. ๐Ÿ˜Š i think if i decided to stop watching the show due to the currant idiotic track!..then i will remember your creation!..and convince my self that this was the happy ending of Sidma in DMG.. ๐Ÿ˜Š




Love and luck to you always,

GOD bless you.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

hey!
came here to say that you write really well and i like the way all the emotions came out....
you must write in the ff section too i'm sure you'll be a hit!
i am not actually a sid rids fan, honestly i'm a die hard AR fan but still i read ur shot and i thought i must tell you that you have good talent!
love
sumedha



Hi Sumedha,

Thank you so so so so so much for reading my OS even though we are not on the same planes. ๐Ÿ˜†... it is really very sweet of you and am genuinely grateful. I can only write OS as I don't have the time to write a proper FF.

Thank you once again and am touched.

Love and luck to you always,๐Ÿค—

GOD bless you.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: MagicalKash

I am still crying I cant see the screen now,I will comment properly after a little while.

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Nitzzzzzzzzzz!! I could feel the pain of all the two character eventhough I am not such a great fan of Armaan now,but I could imagine himm breaking down in the end and it reallyy made my heart Ache ANd Sid 's desperation,confusion,anger was So beautifully potrayed that I could feel all he was going through.I Simply LOved ITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘



PS: Can you plz write a follow up one shot to this when SR meet plzzzzzzzzzzz??



Parul!๐Ÿค—

Stop crying, whacko. I have not married Sid yet and i am yet to run away with Armaan.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.... I am glad that what i wrote was in sync with both the characters. Thank you so much for reading through and liking my OS. I will write a SR OS follow-up soon.

Love and luck to you always,

GOD bless you.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Lucky_me, mandy, buffy! Thank you so much for reading my OS and commenting. I am glad you guys liked it.

Love and luck to you all always,

GOD BLESS YOU ALL FOREVER.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: nm21

Pocahontas.....this post has actually hurt me deeply, because it was that good, so realistic I could imagine their voices speaking the words..

Armaan ( smiles sadly)- Fool. Yes, Sid . You have been a colossal fool and more than that I have been such a giant fool...( shakes his head) ....First you and Riddhima fooled me and then, i fooled myself ... but it is over now ... because I can see everything clearly.....( looks at Sid)...You are a strange man , Sid. When I first met you, i saw a reflection of myself in you.....you were so endearing.... and then, i shared my heart with you.... not knowing that the man am talking to is my basket's husband.... trust me ... i had no idea what the weight of marriage is until i came to know that you and Riddhima were married... (laughs at his self and shakes his head).... and you.... you are a greater fool than me. ... what were you trying to do, Siddhanth Modi? Handing over your wife to me?.... Do you even realize the magnanimity of what you were trying to do?.....

Armaan ( runs a hand through his hair and tears well up in his eyes)- Isn't it so so strange, Sid? You have always taken decisions for Riddhima or waited for her decisions... yet... yet you never tried to find out what she wanted or how she felt? I kept loading her with my affection and you kept loading her with sacrifices... fantastic! .... Sid, i was trapped in time that was long gone , I knew nothing! But you! You were in real time and in reality , how could you not see?

Sid ( puzzled)- What do you mean,. Armaan?

Armaan ( holds Sid by his shoulders)- Sid.... I....oh, how i hate to say this...I ... I am .. I am long gone, Sid... I mean... I am on the other side of time... time that WAS... time that could not happen. What me and Riddhima shared was beautiful and will always be special... but the fact is that our past , our present did not make it into the future.... I am still the Armaan that i was... but you and Riddhima are no longer the people that you were ....

All the way through yesterdays episode my heart was going out to Armaan because he was not at fault and what you wrote today just built on those emotions that were brewing inside...the whole post, was incredible, and what you have written is exactly what I have wanted the script to have replicated in the episodes...but it wasnt. My eyes were brimming with tears at the simplicity of your writing, Armaan is the past and time has brought a change which is reflected by Sid and Riddhima. together.
I am Armaan wailing in the night as he slowly opens his grasp around something as he finally comes to terms with that fact it never belonged to him, wholely relinquishing his love. And his loss hurts me deeply, such a great guy, such a great deed. He deserves greatness only.
I am Sidhanth relieved that the person whom I have been pining for feels the same for me. Relieved that she has made her choice and her choice was me. Relieved that he wont have to lose her...His goodness finally paid off...

Wow. Your best writing as of yet! Compliment considering every post is outstanding!

Round of applause! Good luck god bless....please continue writing, try getting a job with cinevistaas maybe, they need to take some lessons from you! x



Hey NM,๐Ÿค—

Have i ever told you that you make me feel like singing. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ... because you look from the same window as me and it is usually easy to identify with your thoughts. What can i say except a heartfelt thank- you.If I was able to convince and convey what Armaan and Sid feel at this moment , then , my job is done.

I cannot get a job with CVs ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†... my current PH will kill me and I am happy writing there because i get to keep my freedom without any cuckoo channel team telling me what to do and what not to do.

P.S- I am yet to read your post that you PMed me but I will go through it ASAP.

Love and luck to you always,

GOD bless you.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Ah! esto asombraba. espera ....no. ..it's asombrosamente asombroso! ๐Ÿ‘



Wowie! poco! this was fabulous piece of writing! You're one of my favorite writers!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
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Oh my word. I am speechless at the moment, and I am in awe of the way you have written this.
All I can do is stand up and clap for you. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
The intensity, the passion for their woman, the love, the dialogues, the thoughts beween the two men is inexplicable. Thank you so much for this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rapunzel84

MY GOD!!!! U shud be a writer man!! AWESOME....i could so imagine the scene yaar! You should definitely send it to star one and cinevistaas..i d bet my life they will hire you...it was STUPENDOUS...BEAUTIFUL...HEART WRENCHING! Uff no words ๐Ÿ‘

Take a Bow my friend!!!



Hi Rapunzel ( one of my favourite fairytales ever) ,๐Ÿค—

Thank you so much for reading through and liking what I have written. I am hired already ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†, somewhere else but in the same profession.

Love and luck to you always,

GOD bless you.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Ramy

Badtameez Posh Janaani. Love you for reading my OS but do you mind explaining what you have written in that foreign language?

@Zenzie.

Thank you for reading the OS after receiving my dhamkeez. I am glad you saw what I saw and am chorying Sid as my grand prize.

Love and luck to you both always ,

GOD bless both of you always.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome writing yaar, I loved how you make us feel the pain of the characters and written their dialogs keeping their traits intact, Superb writing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I might not watch DMG anymore but definitely coming back to read your posts!!!


Keep writing!!!
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