Thanks guys...and sweesugar, sweetie i dont think u need tips! U write well as it is...ok so where we now... 😊
So Rahul picks Muskaan up and puts her in the car! It takes them about an hour to reach Muskaan's place.
Rahul (to himself): Abey yaar...iska ghar kitni jaldi aa gaya? Shit...mujhe aur dheere chalana chahiye tha...
Muskaan: Oh hum pahunch gaye...
Rahul (chuckles): Tu poonch rahi hain ya bata rahi hain....haan pahunch gaye! Kyun aapna khudka ..sorry Dr Keerti ka ghar pehchana nahi jaa raha!??
Muskaan suddenly realises that Dr. Keerti had gone out of Mumbai for some conference and she would be home alone for the night. She swallows hard and has a sullen expression on her face.
Rahul: Oye..Muskaan kya hua?...Shakal se aise lag raha hain jaise koi bhoot dekh liya...
Muskaan: BHOOT...Kahan hain? Kidhar hain? ....
and she qucickly latches her hand on Rahuls arm vowing never to let go!
Rahul(taken aback): AREY...Relax yaar relax....kuch nahi hain!
Muskaan(back to her senses): Oh haan...nahi hain..kuch bhi toh nahi hain!...Uhhh ok....buh buh bye Rahul.
She opens the door and is walking off. Rahul really wished she didnt have to....but ah well!He gets out of the car and waits to make sure she reaches the entrance safely. While on the other hand Muskaan is taking slow and tentative steps .....when she suddenly turns around.
Muskaan: RAHUL....Coffee???
Rahul who is about to dejectedly sit in the car turns arnd the immediately responds with sudden enthusiasm...
Rahul: Haan...haaan...chalo chalo coffee peete hain!
Muskaan looks at Rahul with a mixture of surprise and amusement and then giggles slightly while Rahul becomes aware of his sudden outburst of joy and sheepishly stares around...lol.
Muskaan walks back to Rahul and holds onto his arm...:: Chal!
...Ok im done...Next writer...please just dont send Rahul home!....Anyways its like 4 am in the story so no point in him going anyways...😆
Edited by ~srk_abhi_apu~ - 16 years ago
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