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Namrata_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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somone continue pleasee great start aisha!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thsi is my first time aswell so wish me good luck!

So rahul sees muski kiss armi! rahul thinks about all the past memories they had & the dmg sad title song is running in the background.

Muskaan turns around and finds rahul right behind her , she mimics 'rahul'. Rahul says ' i never knew you can stoop so olow'. Then Anjali comes along and says ' Kya hui rahul ? sab teekh hai na? Muskaan?.
Muskaan shrugs her shoulders. Anjie goes away to Atul. Rahul- ' tum kaha ti? Muskaan - Oh no! sorry rahul mai tu bul he gaye actually na ami ka match ta tho....... Rahul - To tumko Armaan ka boxing match zyaada important didka hai ya humara relationship?......... Rahul - Muskaan , Tum kabi nai badal sakti.......... Muskaan stares at him and then rahul justs walks away staring at Muskaan. Muskaan goes teary & leaves!]

hopes its good!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part.
hopefully someone continues soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Mansi thanks for telling Sonia and Sonia thanks for opening new thread!...Great start peoples...i;ll take it a bit further for now!
Muskaan stares at him and then rahul justs walks away staring at Muskaan. Muskaan goes teary & leaves...
Muskaan feels really bad thinking how she could forget she had to meet Rahul. But she couldnt understand why he behaved so rudely and why did he say "Tum kabhi nahi badal sakti"....! Muskaan gets really irritated and just walks off to sit with Anji and Atul. The match starts but Muskaan is still thinking of Rahul and she keeps telling herself that she didnt do anything! But in the end she realises it was her fault and it was her who should be making up.
She calls up Rahul...
Muskaan: Hello...rahul?
Rahul: Kya hai Muskaan?
Muskaan: Rahul please...tu aise kyun baat kar raha hain!
Rahul: Muskaan please agar kuch kaam ki baat hai toh bol...mere paas faltoo time nahi hain!
Muskaan: ...ok ok im sorry, mujhe pata hain ki meri galti hain ..par tu itna gussa kyun ho raha hain!..Rahul please i want to see u? Aur tune aise kyun kahan ki main kabhi badal nahi sakti?...
Rahul (lets out an exasperated sigh): Forget it Muskaan....just forget it...
And he hangs up!....Muskaan just stands there now even more sad and confused than sshe was before.
Muskaan: Ab kya karu...?...Patah nahi isse kya ho gaya hain?....(thinks fr a while)..
Goes back to Anji and Atul and picks up her bag!
Atul: Arey Muski kahan jaa rahi hain??
Muskaan: Rahul ke ghar......
Muskaan leaves....
So what happens next..???
Edited by ~srk_abhi_apu~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome part!!
somebody please do continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sana..that was really good..Ill continue!

She leaves from the place and goes to Rahul's house. She was standing at his door for 10 minutes. She was breathing hard..and scared to even ring the door bell. As she was finally about to , automatically the door slid open and Rahul stepped out.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho Muskaan?"

"Woh main..tum kahin jaa rahe the kya?"

"Main.."

"Lagta hai main galat waqt par aa gaye..main tumse baad main milti hun. Bye." She hurried to leave. Her ego letting her move. Her ego telling her that she shouldnt be the one to bend down first.

"Ruko Muskaan." He caught her wrist and pulled her back.

"Rahul Im sorry main tumhe disturb kar rahi hun."

"Andar chalo Muskaan." He said as he noticed all his neighbours staring at them.

She walked clumsily inside. They were both silent for a long time.

"Tum kaunse match ki baat kar rahi thi."

"Woh..Dr. Modi aur Armaan main phir jhagda ho gaya..is liye woh match..."

"Ye Armaan bhi na!!"

they were again silent.

"Hum yahan shayad apni baat karne aaye hai?" Muskaan mumbled.

"Tumhe hi mujhse kuch baat karni thi na?"

"Haan. Woh..Rahul ab ladke koi fayda nahin hai..ye main samajh gaye hun ke main tumse dur nahin ja sakte."

Rahul looked up at her relieved to hear those words.

"Hume ache se baat karke iss problem ko slove karna hoga."

He nodded. "Muskaan please mujhe thoda time do..main tumhe..."

Suddenly Rahul's phone rang. It was Atul's phone. He said the fight became serious and Armaan was seriously injured.
Rahul sighed. He and Muskaan got up to rush to Sanjeevani. While they were just leaving , Muskaan caught his arm and pulled him into an embrace. her head rested on his chest. She felt relieved of her fears for the first time. She was taking deep-breaths. Rahul was taken aback. He calmy consoled her and promised her that he would never leave her ever again. They got out of the trance remembering they had to go to Sanjeevani.
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Edited by -Mansi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw loved the last bit Mansi! guess very few oof us are still writing out here....but we'll keep WWRM going till we can! 😃
Rahul and Muski both rush to Sanjeevani. There they find out that Armaan just had a fracture and both cursed Atul continuously for making it sound as if Armaan was hanging between life and death. But being friends they stayed around for a while.
Later...
Anjali: Hey guys....i think ab hum sabko chalna chahiye. Its pretty late! And anyways kal tak toh Armaan hume kood tah hua milega so i guess we all can chill for tonight!
Everyone smiled and decided to retire for the night. Rahul and Muskaan walked out of Sanjeevani with their hands entwined in each others.
Rahul: Chal tujhe ghar chod doo..
Muskaan(as rahul was moving ahead): Ghar jaana zaroori hain kya?
Rahul turned around and saw her sweetly staring back at him with an expression that anyone would give into!
Rahul (walks back to her): Nahi...(kisses her on her forehead)...raat ke paune DO baje ghar jaana bilkul zaroori nahi hain!...
Muskaan(sensing sarcasm): Teekh hain...tu ja...ghar jaake doodh peeke ache bache ki tarah soja! (hmph)
Rahul catches hold of her hand which she managed to shove off before!
Rahul: Ohooo nakhrewali ....chal mere saath!
They both sit in the car and drive off. Muski doesnt even ask Rahul where they were headed...maybe because just being with him at that moment was all that mattered to her!
Rahul: We're here!
Muskaan: Where? (seeing nothing intruguing in sight)
Rahul: Uf pehle utar toh sahi meri jaan!
Both got out of the car. Rahul lead Muski to a beatiful walkway in a serenely lit park..(like that pathway in i think Tumhi Dekho Na (from kank)).
Muskaan didnt have to say how much she loved the spot...her smile said it all. Taking Rahul by surprise Muskaan leaned in and kissed him on the cheek and mouthed "Love You"! They began walking together hand in hand in the serene light of the beautiful moon.
Edited by ~srk_abhi_apu~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely parts aisha , tina ,mansi ,~srk_abhi_apu~ ....its going great...plz sumone cont fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Muskaan rested her head on Rahuls shoulders as if just wanting him to stays HERs for ever ...they kept walking and none of them had said a single word...Rahul kept glancing at muskaan now and then..... she was in some deep thoughts.... he could sense tat something ...somewhere is disturbing her
Rahul - Kya soch rahi ho muskaan?
muskaan wasnt sure if she wanted to answer tat question of his...she thought may be tat it wasnt the correct time for her to say anything to Rahul ...she just wanted to change the topic
Muskaan- rahul mera bahut maan kar raha hai ki main ABHI Baskin robins ki icecream kaho
Rahul - muskaan abhi.....abhi kaha se kha sakte hai its gonna be 3 am ...tujhey ab Baskin robins kaha se lakar do...
Muskaan - mujhey nahi pata ...kahi se bhi la kar de ...i wanna have it right now..
Rahul - arey muskaan .....yeh kaisi zidd hai ...hum kal duties k baad jayegey icecream khaney ...paka promise par abhi tu ghar chal
Hey guys this is the first time i have attempted to write sumthing ...its not all tat great but i just wanted to write sumthing ....plz feel free to skip the part and comment criticize how it was
Edited by sweetsugar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME PARTS aisha , tina ,mansi ,~srk_abhi_apu~ ., sweetsugar, IT'S going great guys...keep going!!!!!!

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