FF:Pyaar Mill Gayya Part3&4Upd8td Page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
hi
luved d 1st part..... plz update asap.... can u plz pm me wen u do so????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
its great i like the AR part n RM part specially dinner gandhi baat hoti hai
toooo good
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
upd8 in hour x thnks 4 d comments! 😳 a wil PM d ppl hu hv requestd x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Hey guys thankyeeew soo much 4 d lovly comments. Heres the next part!

Same Day! At the Nurse Station.

A: so guys.kaisa laga Sanjeevani?

Su: Nice. lekin hum ne abhi tak theek se dekha bhi nahi.

R: no problem. main aur armaan dekha dete hain.kyun armaan?

A: kyun nahi. Chalo.

Later..Locker Room

Armaan, Ridhima and Sunaina, Saahil sitting on the benches talking.

Sa: Sunaina...aaj raat dinner pe chale?

Su: i dont mind. soch lo? kaane ka bill tum do ge. (she laughs)

Sa: mujhe pata hain. like always. (he laughs too)

R: kya tum dono ki shaadi?

Su: nahi, abhi nahin. hum dono sirf engaged hain. Aur tum dono? tumhari shaadi to huyi hain.

A: nahi

Sa: Nahi? rite so you engaged too?

R: nope.

Sa: defonatly lovers rite?

AR: rite (they laugh)

Just then Atul,Angie Muskaan & Rahul walk in.

Atul walks up to his locker.

At: Anjali, main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.

An: phooda laye ho?

Atul: nahi kyun?

Angie is shocked to hear that (hehe) Atul takes out a Roses bouquet.

At: yeh tumhare liye hain Anjali. Main tumhe hamesha plant deta hoon to isi liye maine soch kuch different.

Angie makes a innocent face.

An: thankyew atul! thas very sweet of you!

At: tumhe pasand aye?

An: bohat!

Theres a sudden knock on the locker room door. Its a man holding a BIG bouquet, full of Red roses and lillies.

Man: Mr.Rahul Garewal

Ra: yes (rahul makes a confused face as he didnt order the bouquet)

Man: yeh aap ki liye hain. aap ki wife ki taraf se.

Everone starts cheering and shouting "Wow Muskaan"..."Choow Chweet!".

Rahul takes the bouquet off the man and walks up and puts it on the bench. Everyone decides to let hus/wife have their moment. They all make

a excuse and leave.

Rahul walks up to Muskaan.

M: pasand aye?

Rah: bohat thanks.

Rahul takes two more steps and stands extremely close to muskaan.

Ra: i love you muskaan.

Muskaan embraces Rahul

M: i love you too!

Muskaan kisses Rahul's cheek and runs off. As she leaves Rahul has a big smile on his face!

Thats it yuu guys! I know its short but ive got lots of College work too doo! Sowii i ope yuu guys like it & promise nxt part will be long!

Lots of Love,Kisses & Hugs*

*! Sonii Nee !*

xxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx a lot 4 pming........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
amazing!!! love it!!! please continue soon and PM me pls if you can!! thanks!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing starting.....loved RM and AR......plzz could u pm me when u update next......excellent FF!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hey guys thnx, erm if yuu add me as buddy dn itl mke it alot easier 4 me. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
hey awesom prt yaar muski hs gvn flowrs 2 rahul how cute yaar n nw lts see wht r wll do
cont sooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
thnks, i will beee upd8n 2mrw!

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