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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooooooooohhh!! looking forward to it.. pls pls pls PM me!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey av added yuu guys as buddy,add bck dn i will pm yu. thanks shyam & maitri505! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys. upd8n in hour! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys..sorri didint update yday..ws v.busy! Heres d nxt part!

It was 11:13pm. Armaan's House

Armaan was sitting on his chair thinking..

A: kya mujhe ridhima ke ghar jaana chahye..

As hes thinking, theres a knock on his bedroom door, he gets up and opens it.

A: Ridhima! Tum! (very,very shocked) tum yahaan is waqt?

R: Armaan...ghar aiye mehmaan ko aise welcome karte hain? main andar ao? (cheekily)

A: haan..ye ofcourse (letting her in his bedroom)

Ridhima is wearing her purple (usual) suit with a shawl wrapped around.

R: hey kaise ho?

A: Ridhima, tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

R: kyun? main yahaan nahi aa sakti? Armaan..(putting her arms around his neck) akhir ek din to main issi ghar mein ao gi..hain na?

A: (flashing his dimples) Oyye.Hoyye... kya baat hain..kya baat hain..(Armaan walks extremly close to ridz)

R: Aaj valentines day hain, mummy papa lonavla, aur di, atul ke saath dinner pe gayi hain. Toh maine socha main tumhare saath thora time spend kar lo.

A: Rite (he laughs)

Ridz goes one step away from Armaan.

R: armaan tumhare liye kuch layi hoon. (she unwrapped her shawl and pulled out a beautiful packed gift)

A: (xcitdly) yeh mere liye?

R: haan..tumhe kya laga ke main tumhare liye kuch nahi lao gi..lo ko lo..

Armaan opens his gift. It was a watch and book underneath..

A: (looking up at ridz) wow..thats nyc..

Ridz smiles.

A:(picking the book out) aur yeh kya hain?

Armaan opened the book and there was a picture of two on Dr.Shashank's wedding.

R: (resting her arm on his shoulder) yeh hamari album hain..iss mein hamare sare photos hain..

A: thankyew ridhima (pulling in for a hug)

Armaan huggd ridz and gave her a kiss on her forehead)

R: pata hai, mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha (coming part)

A: kis bare mein?

R: tumhara gift...woh acturali last tym woh comic diye the to ..

A: i love you ridhima

R: i love you too my sweeto (she pulls his cheek)......Acha ab muhje (ridz starts to walk off but armaan grabs her hand and stands extremely clse infront of her)

A: Apni aankhein band karo

R: kyun?

A: tum sawaal bohat poonch thi ho basket

Ridhima closes her eyes and armaan quickly runs out of the room..After about a minute the lights go off!

R: Armaan!! yeh Lights!! Tum Kaha Ho???

A: ek minute main ah raha hoon..

Ridz starts walking and knocks a few things..

R: Armaan muhje bohat dar lag raha hain..kaha ho tum?

A: main candle doond ne ki koshish kar raha hoon..

Then suddenly ridz steps on something and screams!

R: ARghhhhhhh!!!!! Armaaaaaannnn!!!!! Arghhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

She runs out screaming and sees armaan in the kitchen holding a candle ..She runs up to him and hugs him tightly..

Armaan starts laughing!

A: tum bhi na basket..maine socha koi tumhe maarne aaya hain! (still laughing)

He puts the candle on the table and hugs ridz back.

R: haan haan..has lo..jab main mar jao gi nah

Armaan puts his hand on Ridhimas lips..

A: aisa kabhie mat kehna

R: kyun?

A: kyunki agar tume kabie kuch ho gaya to hpir mein to mar jao ga..tum meri zindagi ho..armaan apni ridhima ke behgair adoora hain..

R: (very gently and smoothly) Armaan.

A: hmmm

R: hum papa ko apne rishte ke baare mein bata de?

A: muhje nahi lagta tumhare papa..Dr.Shashank Gupta! Sanjeevani ke head...maane ge (armaan puts his hands on ridz' waist & pulls her closer)

R: kya hum maa ko pehle bataye?

A: yes..thas a good idea..padma aunty ko pehle bataye ge..She can probably help us uno..

Thats it Girliess//Boiess! Lol Hope yuu Liked It!! x

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys..I know yuu must bee thinking huh? Update agen..Well cos i ddint update yday..am giving yuu a treat! Another Part!

Here It Is....

Next Day in Sanjeevani!

It was 8:45am..Locker Room!

Atul was talking Muskaan about his dinner with Anjali...Rahul was looking at a new pateint's file and Anjali was talking to Armaan..

"Ridz Hadnt Reached Hospital Yet!"

At: Aur pata hain, anjali raat ko kuch zaida achi lag rahi thi..

M: toh phir...kya anjali bhi tujhse?

At: haan..(he said shyly)

Anjali Overheard..

An: Atul..

At: haan anjali..tumne bulaya?(anjali interupted)

An: atul ye tum kya keh rahe ho?..

Angie Walks off!

At: Sharma gayii..main jaat hoon..

Atul runs after Anjali and the rest start laughing..

A: yeh atul bhi nah..

Ra: haan ye atul (he laughed)

M: Waise armaan, tumne aur ridzi ne kal kya kiya??

Armaan thought of the wonderful nite he has wth ridz..And Just Then Rahul nudges Muskaan..

Ra: Tu bhi nah muskaan..Usne humse poocha? nahi na to phir tu kyun nosey ban rahi hai.

M: sorry yaar armaan..woh main to sirf

A: its ok muskaan..kya rahul...chill...Waise speaking of Ridhima, yeh ridhima hain kaha? aaj phir hitler se daant kah ne ka mann hai..

""All Interns Dr.Keerti ko breifing session ke liye report kare"""

*Nurse Station*

K: Dr.Anjali..Dr.Atul Path lab

At: Thankyeww m'am :)!

K: Dr.Muskaan, maternity ward.

M: yes ma'am

K: Dr. Rahul aaj aap Dr.Shubankar ko surgery main assist karege..

Rahul was too busy looking at Muskaan and thinking about the passionate nite they spent together..After a full year of their marriage they got that close

and made love.

K: Dr.Rahul (frowning)

K: DR.RAHUL main aap se baat kar rahi hoon..

Muskaan nudges Rahul.

K: Dr.Rahul!

R: yes ma'am

K; lagta hain aap rectal examinations ko bohat miss kar rahe hain..(angrily)

R: yes ma'am (not knowing what she just said)

K: What?

The rest started laughing..

R: Mera matlab..jee..nahi ma'am.

K: Dr.Armaan aap aaj lonavla jaa rahe hain..

A: yes dr.keerti

An: dr.keerti, saahil aur sunaina??

K: woh dono general ward main hain. Kuch naye cases ko attend kar rahe hain....Get to Work.

Atul & Rahul Leave..

A: err angie, ridhima kaha hai?

An: i dont know yaar, fone karke pata laga lo..main duty pe jaa rahi hoon. cyu

M: fikar not armaan, shayad ridzy auto mein aah rahi hain isi liye late hogi..

A: hmm..main usse fone karta hoon..

M: bye

*Locker Room*

Armaan is sitting on the bench, trying to fone ridz when hes disturbed by Sister Loveely!

L: Dr.Armaan

A: Yes Sister Lovely

L; Oh ji, kya baat hai? aap itne udhaas kyun hai?

A: woh aap ne Ridhima, i mean Dr.Ridhima ko kahi dekha?

L: ha ji..woh to abhi reception pe thi.

A: Ridhima hospital main hai..(xcitdly)

L: haan.

Armaan quickly walked up to Sister Loveely and hugged her..

A: Thankyew!

*Reception*

Armaan reached there and saw there was no sign of Ridhima. He gets confused thinking where she could be, so he decides

to ask the nurse at the reception.

A: err sister, dr.ridhima abhi yahi thi?

S: yes, woh abhi maternity ward main gayi hain.

A; thank you..

Armaan ran to the maternity ward & found ridhima not there either..he saw muskaan and walked up to her..

A: hey muskaan

M: armaan, tu yaha hain?

A: (sarcastly) nahi muskaan, main general ward main hoon.. ofcourse yaar mein yaha hoon..kyun? kya hua?

M: tujhe ridhima doond rahi thi.

A: Are yaar! main bhi usse kab se doond raha hoon. ab woh kaha hain?

M: Mujhe kya pata?

Armaan walked off and went to the nurse station, she wasnt there either..

Then he thought..theres only one place he hadnt checked! the fire escape!!

Armaan walked to the fire escape and peeped through the door and saw ridhima sitting on the stairs. He opened the door and sighed!

A: Thank God ridhima..main tumhe kabse doond raha tha..

Ridhima turned around..She looked quite upset, as armaan saw her with an unhappy face he sat next to her and his arm around her.

A: kya hua ridhima?

R: tum kaha the?

A: tumse chup raha tha..(he smiles)

Ridz smiles at him and put her head on armaan's chest.

R: armaan

A: hmm.

R: mat jao.

A: kya? (armaan raises his eyebrow)

R: chaar din? tumhare behgair..nahi tum nahi jao ge..

A: ohh! (he holds ridz' face)

A: to meri basket isi liye udhaas hai..

R: hmm..

A: dont worry basket, main jaldi aa jao ga..

R: haan.. lekin main tumhe bohat miss karo gee uno..

A: i know, main bhi tumhe bohat miss karoga.

R: kab jaa rahe ho?

Armaan looked at his watch ( d 1 ridz bought)

A: in about 20mins.

Ridz made an unhappy face, seeing this armaan came close to her face and kissed her cheek..Ridz looked at armaan's eyes which were

full of love for her..As armaan came closer to her lips ridhima closed her eyes..Armaan loved when she did that...Like everytime they had great passion

for each other. She was enjoying his touch alot..Armaan slowly moved her lps to ridz' neck and kissed it.. They were in beautiful moment for 2-3mins when

they were interupted by a Pager! It was Ridhimas..Ridz stood up & checked her pager..It was Dr.Keerti, she wanted to see her!

R: armaan mujhe jaana hoga

Armaan grabbed ridz' dupaata..

A: nahi ridhima...mat jao

Ridz smiled and kissed his forehead.

R: Sorry armaan, Dr.Keerti ne mujhe bulaya hain..

Armaan let go off her dupatta and stood up..

A: ok..main bhi chalta hoon..raat ko fone karoga..ok bye!

R: theek hain bye..

Oki Guys..I hOpe yuu liked it! Next i will write about how much they miss each other & how padma finds o8!

Take Care* Love yuu

*SoniiNee*

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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
thanks! cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.....why Riddhima is not going to lonavla as well? I really hope if she go.....
plzz update soon....waiting for next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey..
awesum ff..
do continue soon..
n if possible could u plzz pm me wen u update...
thanq...
sonal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sory gvng u late reply didn't know tht u updated nd wow yaar u updated aftr soooo mch time nd wo w2upddates thts grt nd it ws mindblowng yaar ar ws thnkng abt ridz nd ridz came nd she gftd him awwwwww chooooooooo cute yaar lvd it sooooo mch nd arridz cute baatein as ridz ws upset he's goi fr 4dys awwwwwwwwwwwwww dnt wrry he'll be bck sooooooooooooon hehehehe.......cnt wait
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnks every1, d thng is on ma computer av gt 14parts of ma ff, iv bn wrtn loads. av stpd writing nw so i cn upd8 u guys til wer av stopped.
yachna huni,😳 thnkyew 4 d lovely post
lov Sonii Nee xxx

oh nd sona, i will pm yuu, js add me as buddy dn il pm u,k x
Edited by SoniiNee - 17 years ago

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