FF:Pyaar Mill Gayya Part3&4Upd8td Page 4

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Hey guys. ive been wanting to write a FF for a long time. I wrote one now. Its my first one. I hope yuu guys like it! Well the storyline is at:

Armaan & ridhima hav told everyone about their relationship except for ridz family (thats not including Angie). Muskaan and Rahul are married, they love each

now but stll fight. Atul and Angie, just getting to know each other. Dr. Keerti & Dr. Shubankar (Senior Doctor lol) no progress, Shubu still v.shy. Well lastly,

im a v. big fan of Karan & Sukriti so the character of Ridhima will be played by Sukriti.

A: Armaan

R: Ridhima

An: Anjali

At: Atul

M: Muskaan

Ra: Rahul

K: Dr.Keerti

Shu: Our one nd only Dr. Shubankar

Sha: Dr. Shashank (STRICT Sasur.ji)

P: Padma

Here we go then:

Its 14th Feb.. *! Valentine's Day !*

Sanjeevani

*! Locker Room !*

Armaan walked in the locker room and found Anjali, Atul and Muskaan there. As usual Atul was talking to Anjali and Muskaan was standing by

her locker talking to her self.

A: Hey guys (walking to his locker)

An: Hey

A: Hey Muskaan

M: Hi, er hero. tune rahul ko kahi dekha hai?

A: nahi kyun? kya hua?

M: woh, aaj na valentines day hain na

A: haan to?

M: woh kya hua na, sube se mera mood kuch theek nahi tha aur raul pe barak gayi. mujse use sorry kehna tha.

A: hmm

""Sabi interns apni duty pe report kare""

Atul, Anjali and Muskaan all leave and go to their duties.

Armaan takes his lab coat out and wonders to himself "Yeh Ridhima abhi tak nahi aayi."

Just then he heard payals and he quickly turned around. Armaan flashed his dimples with a Big smile as she walked up to her locker.

She looked beautiful. She was wearing a red and pink salwaar kameez. (like the one she wore wen atul caught them, but the length of the top was a bit long)

R: Hi Armaan

A: Hi (he walked up to her)

R: happy valentines day (she kissed his forehead)

A: same to you. kya baat hai? aaj tum bohat khush dikhai de rahi ho?

R: haan khush to hoon. Aur main nahi ho sakti (raising an eyebrow at him)

A: Ridhima

R: hmm (looking up at him with love)

A: tumhare ghar mein baap bhai nahi hain kyaa? (jokingly, to tease her)

R: Armaan (angrily, she turned the other way to ignore him)

A: Ridhima (lovigly)

Ridz just ignores him, so he tries again but ignores him again. So he put his arms around her waist from the back and pulls her closer to him.

Ridhima gets all shy and looks down.

A:Suno na ridhima

R: kya hai?

A: main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon.

R : kya? (she turns to look at him)

Armaan moved closer to idhima. Her eyes dropped with shyness. He was two-inches away from her lips.. He slowly drifted his lips to her cheek and kissed her.

Ridhima looked up to him and smiled. He then pulled out a heart pendant from his pocket. Armaan pulled ridhz duppata down and put the pendant on her bare neck.

As he tied it from the back he kissed her neck. He turned around to look at her and held her hands close to his face.

A: i love you ridhima

R: i love you too (she put her head on his chest and hugged him)

"Sabi interns Dr.Keerti ko report kare"

A: Areh yaar! (he said sighly, as he aparted from ridz)

(Ridz laughed)

R: Aaj doh naye interns ah rahe hain

A: i know. abhi tak nahi aye, Dr.Keerti ko jaante nahi hai na isi liye!

(They both laughed)

" Dr. Armaan, Dr.Ridhima nurse station par report kare"

A: haan ah raha hoon. acha Ridhima suno

R: hmm

A: Aaj raat?

R: kya aaj raat?

A: main tumhare ghar ao ga ok

As he says this he quickly made a move to aviod listening to ridz' answer.

R: kya? hmm, shayad mazaak kar raha tha. (she smiles and leaves)

*! Nurse Station !*

Anjali, Atul, Rahul and Muskaan with (Angry) Hitler.

Armaan rushes and stands with his head down.

A: sorry dr.keerti

K: no no, Dr. Armaan its ok, 10 minute baad aana tha na (angrily & sarcastly)

A: sorry dr.keerti

Just then Ridhima comes running

R: sorry dr.keerti

Dr.keerti looks at the with anger then just turns to the others.

K:neways guys aaj doh naye interns humain 4 baje join karege.

All interns: Ye ma'am

K: Dr.Armaan, Dr.Ridhima, cancer ward

A + R: Yes ma'am

K: Dr.Muskaan, Dr.Rahul

M: Jee ma'am

K: General Ward

K: Dr.Anjali aap Dr.Shashank ko surgery mein asist karegi.

An: yes ma'am

K: Dr.Atul, aids ward

At: Kya yeh hitler bhi nah! Armaan,ridhima,rahul, muskaan ko duty ek saath deti hai aur mujhe aur anjali koalag! :( (whisperingly to himself)

K: aap ne kuch kaha dr.atul?

At: nah...nahi ma'am main to

Dr.keerti walks off. everyone go to their duities except Rahul and Muskaan.

M: rahul

Ra: kya hai?

M: tu mujhse ghusa hain?

Ra: nahi to muskaan, Main...Tujhsa...Ghusa?? nahi nahi (sarcastly)

M: im sorry (pouting)

Ra: its ok (not looking at her)

M: tu paka naraaz nahi hai?

Ra: nahi...(looking at her and standing pretty close to her) aaj..raat ko

M: Rahool..sharam nahi aati, hospital mein ghandi baatein karte hua. Chi! (Muskaan walks off)

Rahul lowers his eyebrows and puts an confused face on

R: dinner ghandi baat hoti hai?

*! 4:00pm !*

""All interns Dr.Keerti ke cabin mein report kare""

The interns enter Dr.Keerti's cabin. They see two new faces. One's a female intern and other a male. The female intern was wearing a royal blue salwaar suit

with curled hair. She was very pretty. The male intern was wearing casual blue jeans with a black shirt. He was very handsome (not betta dn armaan ofcourse hehe).

K: Interns...inse miliye..(pointing to the new interns) ye hai Dr.Sunaina

Su: Hi (sunaina=mouni from KSBKBT)

Interns: Hi

K: aur yeh hai Dr.Saahil

Sa: Hi (iqbal khan, hus dznt knw hiim :).. )

K: Dr.Sunaina, Dr.Saahil ye hain hamare interns. (pointing at the interns)

ye hai Dr.Armaan, Dr.Ridhima, Dr.Anjali, Dr.Muskaan, Dr.Rahul and Dr.Atul.

K: kyunki aap dono naye hai Sanjeevani main, main chahti hoon app group main kaam kare. (She looks at the interns)

umm, aaj aap Dr.Armaan aur Dr.Ridhima ke saath kaam karege. Ok?

Sa+Su: Yes ma'am

Okay guys that's it. Please tell me how it was...If you think it's rubbish i wont contine.. Please Do Comment/Critisize!

ThankYew!

Lots Of Love, Kisses & Hugs*

*! Sonii Nee !*

xXx

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AshiYuvi4life thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Beautiful! Bechaara mera Rahul. lol.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyaa....arey plz do continue ur ff 😊...
it was really very interesting....👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wowwwwwwwwww u updated wow yaar it ws fantastic yar ar gftd ridz pendnt how cute yaar chooooooooooooooo chweeeeet nd new interns hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm intrestng yaar poor tul hamesha angie se lag grt yar cnt wait fr d nxt prt ar wll cm in ridz house nd she thnkng he's jokng lts see
cont soooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys thankyeww AshiYuvi4life,Pankhuripg17,Shazaad and yachna! Thankyew! xx Lots of love,kisses &hugs*😳
*! SoniiNee !*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur wlcm awwww 2 u 2🤗
acha nw tll me whn r u gonna cont bcz i amd yng 2 know wht gonna happn nxt
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awespme plz pm me !!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it's too sweet plz continue soon
n it would be great if u pm me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow.....that was great part.....i just luv it
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome.....im waiting 4 next part..its really gud......👍🏼👏

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