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Posted: 13 years ago
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Day 2 eveningClock showed 4:55 p.m. but there is no sign of Viraaj's car. Jhanvi and Geeta are in the drawing room. Jhanvi is worried. Geeta: what's wrong Jhanvi? why are u look tensed? Now everything is going smooth as it suppose to be.
Jhanvi looking out from a window to the parking spot.
Jhanvi: There is no sign of him Ma🤔, I wonder where he is. He should've parked his car by this time now. But i can't see any sign of it. Wonder where he is stuck.😕 Hope he is alright, this morning he was so angry and I ignored him deliberately. Hope he didn't do anything reckless as before to himself.😭
Behind the door
Viraaj: "Tumhe humse pyaar kitna..ye tum nahi jaante...magar ji nahi sakte humare binaa...Big 😃 and sign of satisfaction on his face"
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He is extremely happy to see her worried for him.. and slight tear came out from the corner of her eye..He got closer to her and tried to wipe it...
but Jhanvi stepped back wards..
Jhanvi: don't come near me and don't touch me. Looked at him with rage.
Viraaj to that 😲: Why Jhan? U were worried about me na? Why do u do this to me... i know u too suffer when u punish me like this.. i know u r also hurt when u talk to me like that..i can sense ur heart beats Jhan coz ur heart beats in me..
Jhanvi looking away on those lines.. {trying hard on controlling her facial expressions and she wipped the tears came out quickly} she walks away from him towards their room.
Viraaj watch her walk away...pause...sadness covers his face...emptyness feels within...he doesn't know how to make it up for his deeds..💔
He remembers the day he bring Jhanvi home...how happy they were and how beautiful she was looking...The carying Jhanvi..organized Jhanvi..Happy Jhanvi..their icecream date..and then...
how each day passed and things became unconventional...he hurt her sooo much...he is in tears😭...he felt guilt...he felt how i wish i have never harmed her😭..i never wished to take out my pain on her...what is her fault after all...it's not her who is responsible for whatever happend to me🥺...he is sitting on the floor...😭
Geeta witnessing the pain and regrett in his eyes..she feels sad and helpless for him..
Jhanvi in her room watching birds flying in the sky...and she thinks how happy she was before her marriage..how choti and her used to play hide and seek...the red and blue bangles that she bought for Sia..and how Dadi used to make her favorites ladoos..How her parents were overjoyed by Viraaj's and hers engagement... Viraaj's promice that he will always keep her happy no matter what...
She thinks about the pain he has given her..everytime him doubting her...tortures...scars...unbearable pain...loneliness caged in his big house..every corner in this house is witness of my pain she thinks..
Thoughts disturbed by Geeta's words on how she left him behind..how Viraaj's dad used to behave same..the broken marriage...she remebers the breaking down of Viraaj in her arms..saying.."Whoever I loved left me..😭💔"
She is looking at their picture on the wall.
Tears came out again..she wipes it off and decides no matter what i am going to cure him..i will make my marriage work.. Viraaj need me...I want to take away his pain...no matter how he is..I am better than him..i won't be doing the same as Geeta did...i won't leave him behind.. He is my husband.. we are married in presence of earth, water, fire, wind and sky. I will do anything to save him from his self distruction. she said to herself.
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
OK day 2 done..
will be updating day 3 tomorrow. (which is RajVi tuesday meeting with DK! 😊
please hit the like button and give me ur thoughts on part 2 as well. I really hope u guys like it the way i am showing it..the process is both ways..it's tough for both, RajVi ka pyaar kasauti pe hai isbar.😳
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ths s so nice. i saw d epi yday nd man i did felt bad fr viraj whn he tels hs mum dat achhi yaadein yaad aati nahi aur buri yaadein bhulai nahi jaati...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb dear...👏 👏
love it... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zee10

superb dear...👏 👏

love it... 😃

Thanks a lot zee but LIke button me kanjoosi kyon hai bhai please like it na! bechara mera chota sa dil rakhne ke lie like kardo na😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update Krish..like it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 😭 Krrishuu 😭 😭 this is so beautiful. Why do they have to suffer so much? Why cant my divine RajVi live a life without any trouble. Two ppl who are so much in love with other.. All I want to see is my RajVi happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Flora--

Nice update Krish..like it 😊

Thank u for always appreciating dear!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life

😭 😭 Krrishuu 😭 😭 this is so beautiful. Why do they have to suffer so much? Why cant my divine RajVi live a life without any trouble. Two ppl who are so much in love with other.. All I want to see is my RajVi happy

Love has to find their way dear..and after going through their worst phase of life only if their Love survives then it's a TRUE LOVE.. Deep Love..and Love involves pain...that is why saying is.. "Love Hurts"
I am glad that my post has some sort of emotional affect..as I was in tears while typing those words..
They will..and this time they will be together forever..for each other..as they belong to one another only and EXCLUSIVELY.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow,I say it again please replace the cvs so we could see the depth of RajVi's relationship!!!☺️

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