Imtihaan - Short tell p6 updated on pg6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya guys, m back with something fictional/reality short tell this time.😳

*****~~~~~~Plot: DK is treating Viraaj ~~~~~~*****

Day 1:
At the clinic
DK: "Viraaj tell me what u think about the people around you? what's the first thing that comes in your mind? You want to keep the closed ones to ur side or u want to send them away as u can't stand imperfaction of any form? tell me about your father Vijay how was he? who's ur best friend from school? Viraaj u have to be answering me in this room and that is a MUST and this rule can't be broken"
Viraaj annoyed by the question..facial expressions and it's transitions: anger, sadness, anxitey..becomes restless and upset at the questions bombarded at him..doesn't know how to answer it..don't know where to begin..
Jhanvi looks at Viraaj and his expressions...she seems worried...and scared...how he is going to say what he hasn't said to anyone before..
a slight pause from Dr.Rana as she is observing him..
Viraaj leaves from her clinic in anger...Jhanvi follows him... DK told Jhanvi it isn't going to be easy...please give him this medicine tonight he will feel releaved and better after med. and sleep. She promiced that she will make sure he takes his medicine.😳
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E_mtmnptlTA[/YOUTUBE]
At RajVi Palace
Jhanvi: Viraaj please take this medicine, Komolikaji told me that this medicince should be taken twice a day after meal. 🤓
Viraaj: I don't want to take anything that she gives. I am fine. Just turn off the lights and sleep.🥱
Jhanvi: I am not listening to u if u won't listen to me and do as I say. U have promiced me that u will do as I say and then only I will stay with u in this house. Else I'm leaving. 😆😆😆
Viraaj: alright alright...why are u giving me same speech everytime.. { in his mind: as soon as i become slight reluctant she stand on my head..uff..Viraaj Dobriyal what more I have to do for her love?😕} give me the medicine now, i am feeling sleepy.
Viraaj takes his medicine and tell her to sleep on the bed besides him..😳
Jhanvi sleeps besides him..in the middle of night..she is looking at him..and slight smile on her face..{she thinks I hope this time u really change for good Viraaj..I am there for u and i always be there for u...as I promiced..}
sowwiiee ppl i couldn't find her smiling pic in the gallary so bear with this one.
(more soon...)
Story have approximately 5 days..will be updating good pictures..and good video songs with it..till than laters...hope u like it..P.S. Like button click please!😊
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Day 2:
RajVi Palace
Beautiful shiny morning...Viraaj is still in the bed..Jhanvi's up early and opens up the curtains..and looks at the sky optimistically..
Jhanvi in the kitchen prepares tea and breakfast for him.
Clock hits 7 a.m. Viraaj is up and sees that Jhanvi is not besides him, the tea breakfast are by the table. He call "Jhanvi!!" where are u Jhan??
She didn't answer. He looks at the picture by the table.
A minute later Jhanvi said "I am in the kitchen with Geeta". Your breakfast and tea is by the table Help Urself. (yah she is kinda mean today...😆 pretending😆😉)
He thinks "now this is weired..i took the medicine..i am following her instructions..fir bhi ye ese kyon behave kar rahi hai!?"
Nyhow I am getting late..rushes for shower and went to kitchen to check on her. She gives him medicine, "here ur morning medicine!"
Viraaj: "Didn't I took medicine just few hrs back?? why are u giving me this again?" he looked annoyed..
Jhanvi: "Yes but Dr. Komolika said you have to take it twice a day! Now no more arguments Viraaj take it, aren't u getting late look at the clock!"
Viraaj took med.again..and walked out in fumes.. as this time he has no option but to do whatever Jhanvi wishes..else he will loose her forever..
Geeta watching his car..and smiles at Jhanvi.. She said, "First time I am feeling that he is changing, someone other than himself is controlling him and I am very happy to see this change. My son is very fortunate to have u Jhanvi. God Bless You Beta"😳
In the Office
Viraaj is still confused at Jhanvi's behavior..He is thinking "If I am changing for her will she still love me? The way she is behaving now is puzzling me..Everything will be according to her if I keep following her instructions..Is she really interested in changing me or she has other plans? what could be that? who knows Ma is also part of her plans?"
Viraaj: " i must do something with this changing circumstances..else these women will rule in my house!"😎 He is looking at Jhanvi's picture..
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhhooo !!...Nice concept krishh...n nice pix too..!!!! Eager to know more 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manipadma

ohhhooo !!...Nice concept krishh...n nice pix too..!!!! Eager to know more 😃

Thank you Mani 🤗
i had to go through other forums OS posts to see what kind of format they use..and how the story is conveyed..and i tried following the same..so that i don't look stupid😳
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Quite nice Krish..pls do continue 😊
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Originally posted by: --Flora--

Quite nice Krish..pls do continue 😊

Big Hug dear..thank you for encouragement. yup will be posting more😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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why don't you join the cvs!! You are better than them!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Muahh Krrishu.. Im loving this. Jaan ke liye Viraj is doing so much 🤣 bechara.. 🤣 🤣
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Originally posted by: scent_flower

why don't you join the cvs!! You are better than them!

awww thank you SO MUCH.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Muahh Krrishu.. Im loving this. Jaan ke liye Viraj is doing so much 🤣 bechara.. 🤣 🤣

😳😊 Thank You!!! ha ab pyaar kia hai to nibhana to padega na...he has to change for her..atleast in my story😉

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