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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is love, happiness and peace ... Dear mystique ... The way you portrayed om was phenomenol ... His ways of working, the working of his ways ... The way you bought in secularity as the main concept before romance being was so perfect ... Om not being able to find solace in his work was a strong indication that she is yet to arrive ... And the poetry in the end ... The artist has an admirer I see 😳 The composition is magical even though at first I was a bit dissapointed with gauri not being there but then till the end ... You just nailed ... I can get over this soulful, artistic zulfi Singh oberoi ... You have managed to keep his character strong and intact 👏 ...
You know from the very beginning I really wanted to see his lady falling, madly falling for artist Kara ... This piece of writing is dreamlike for me please update soon I am dying to know ... That how and where will they meet ... Plus how will he get the inspiration to finish his project ... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Os waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

This is love, happiness and peace ... Dear mystique ... The way you portrayed om was phenomenol ... His ways of working, the working of his ways ... The way you bought in secularity as the main concept before romance being was so perfect ... Om not being able to find solace in his work was a strong indication that she is yet to arrive ... And the poetry in the end ... The artist has an admirer I see 😳 The composition is magical even though at first I was a bit dissapointed with gauri not being there but then till the end ... You just nailed ... I can get over this soulful, artistic zulfi Singh oberoi ... You have managed to keep his character strong and intact 👏 ...

You know from the very beginning I really wanted to see his lady falling, madly falling for artist Kara ... This piece of writing is dreamlike for me please update soon I am dying to know ... That how and where will they meet ... Plus how will he get the inspiration to finish his project ... 😳

This is heart warming! Thank you so much. I am very glad that you liked it. Now after your comment I feel like making it an FF. Initially I was skeptical because I wanted it to be very technical but a lot of technique and theories would make it boring but now I feel I should elaborate and explore more of his thoughts on his work.
Surely will update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Beautiful Os waiting for next part.

Thank you!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ElMystique

This is heart warming! Thank you so much. I am very glad that you liked it. Now after your comment I feel like making it an FF. Initially I was skeptical because I wanted it to be very technical but a lot of technique and theories would make it boring but now I feel I should elaborate and explore more of his thoughts on his work.
Surely will update soon.

Dear the matter of the fact is that if a person writes a technique ... There is emotion attached more than practicality in expression ... Please write more ... I put forward an ardent request ... We are never ever going to get such an Omie in the show ... And more than anything else ... You are weaving magic ... I really want you to describe the depth of the emotion ... Once two artists collide ... Looking forward
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
so om has a secret admirer...interesting
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Composing his train of thoughts Omkara stood up and walked towards the window pane .He has learned that this anonymous photographer is smart enough not leave a clue about her which leaves him with no option and there was no point questioning the maids of the Oberoi mansion.

"But am I desperate to meet her?"
"What makes me conclude it is "her"?."
"But I know for a fact that it is her. Beyond every logic is an intuition which strongly says it's a woman rather a girl who is an arty hipster. The royal blue ink that fuels every curve of her words written in a perfectly etched calligraphy speaks volumes of her persona."
Omkara couldn't concentrate on anything but her.He quickly took his HB pencil kit and scattered them on the canvas supporter.Taking a light lead pencil he roughly started sketching. Firstly, he sketched long straight tresses falling half way on the canvas, this was followed by an oval shaped face, half way through the face he sketched an outline of lips. He felt as if he was ruining something. He quickly erased it. He then threw the pencil and picked up his water colours.He began painting without outlines with a thick brush. He mixed dark coffee brown with magenta and defined lips. Black with a hue of grey defined her eyebrows and hair with streaks of cremello. He then painted a teal short vintage frock and drew a camera in her hands. As he completed he saw his own picture and was awestruck. A woman standing with one leg 60 degrees away from another , body tilted, holding camera recklessly in one direction and looking at opposite direction , gaze fixed on something ardently, streaks of hair shining crisply as the rays of sun cover half of her face whilst other half lays shadowed with streaks on other side gently raised by breeze was his sketch in last half an hour.

"It seems like she found something serendipitously .Before she could actually celebrate and react or even smile it seems like that one moment of bewilderment I have captured." he thought to himself.
He picked up his smartphone to capture a picture of this woman laying on the canvas.
He then picked up a paper and began to write

Cherished Anonymous Photographer,

Why would people write letters while technology around is always available at the touch of your finger? I was questioned several times. I often replied that one's hand written letters soothe eyes and speak the sound of their heart. But, as I read your letter I understood that it can not just speak words of heart but present the entire aura and enigma of a person. I do not know where you saw me or how you know me but all I can say is that this is the first time I felt that there is someone out there who adores me. Trust me it's a very special feeling . I can speak volumes about deep human emotions and values but I am not able to convey what I feel at this point of time. Maybe some things are better felt than expressed. Language I believe ruins the best of feelings. I cannot say that I share the same kind of feelings for you but I must say I am impressed by your attitude and charm. More than all I am intrigued by your world. I am not good at capturing pictures but this my depiction of you. Beyond any personal feelings I have a sense of gratitude prevailing as you have given me my theme . I have found my motif and inspiration for one the most important summits of my life. Now, I am assured that I shall convey my take on the theme in the most exemplary manner. I do not think I am ready to meet you for you in my eyes is a bundle of amazingness. It takes a lot of strength and composure to actually meet an eye with you. Yet, I have a request to make do check out my piece of work in the Paris summit. Little had I known that by the end of this letter I would find a name for you dear Aria. It means a solo song in an opera.
Thanking you,
Aria,
Omkara

Omkara rolled the letter and went and placed it in the letter box of Oberoi mansion which these days is only meant for certain couriers.


Edited by ElMystique - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
It was so romantic

Omkara found his inspiration
He would canvas her picture
Just by Reading the Letter
That's a true artist

The letter Omkara wrote
OMG so heart touching
Words were showing his feelings so well
The name he gave her Aria

Hope they meet soon
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short one yet meaningful...
Very interesting yet very lovely. ...

Waiting to unfold the story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Superb update

It was so romantic

Omkara found his inspiration
He would canvas her picture
Just by Reading the Letter
That's a true artist

The letter Omkara wrote
OMG so heart touching
Words were showing his feelings so well
The name he gave her Aria

Hope they meet soon
Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Thank you so much!!
Omie is a star we know right😳
I don't know about meeting but I thought this is the end of two shot but since I am finding more substance and since people are interested I would like to continue...
Thanks once again.

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