Thy Effigy (Chap 2 updated Pg:3)

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Hello people!!
It's been long I have posted here. Without speaking much about my self I would like to come to the point. Since the CVs have given us Artistic O who is lost since forever , the crazy fangirl in me is dancing joyously . So here is a short OS which is a token of recognition and appreciation for artistic endeavours of creative minds .


Prologue

Omkara takes up a new project to depict theories from different mythologies and religious practises in this process he appoints a lot of creative enthusiasts on a full time work basis. Some of the recruited members are people who make instant sketches out of dictations, while others are for designing 3D graphic imaging. Yet, after days of relentless dictations and several images formed ,Omkara isn't happy with the way things are shaping up. He is somehow not able to find the substance he wants people to see in the sculptures evidently depicted. He is getting impatient trying his best whilst he receives a letter.What does the letter say? Will it help him bring out the traits or not ? This One shot revolves around that letter and the consequences of it.

INDEX

Chapter 1 : Haze - Page 1
Chapter 2 :Villanelle - Page 3


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept
Would love to read more
Update soon
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HAZE

"It's been ten days since I have asked you people to make changes in the assignments submitted .Where are they? " asked Omkara adjusting the lens of his spectacles.
"Sir, here are the Greek Gia related sketches." said Anirvan in a nervous tone mentally praying to get an acceptance since he had worked really hard on the sketches.
Flipping through the pages Omkara quietly replied " It is pronounced Gaea and spelt Gaia , when you will present this board in your corner I want you to bring out the essence of the Greek. So here I would want to you to include water and all the elemental forms of nature with a greek twist to it ."
Omkara stood up and called all the ten panel members present and started speaking.

"GUYS, I would like all of you to disperse for a tea break but before that there is a short briefing.
This entire project which I haven't yet entitled is to depict one thing that religion is like a habit every individual has an inherent right to follow any religion and by religion I don't mean any practise. WE ARE NOT HERE TO propagate religious PRACTICES but to bring out the rich heritage.This is not about any widely acknowledged leader.It is about the spirit of humanity and the diversity of the spirit. To bring out the uniqueness and oneness is the core aim and to celebrate it.
So there is a slight change in the presentation. I would like to divide our project into Greek, Roman, Egyptian, Pure Western and pure Eastern departments and I would like all of you to sketch personalised articrafts which have a common theme. Before we proceed into further details I would like all of you to break for tea and come back with your ideas to develop this further.

Thank you ."
saying so Omkara sat down worried about conveying his idea in the purest form and dubious about the fact that there might be alterations because of different artists and their personalised taste .Yet he was helpless because he had the Paris Summit ART exhibition project up in a month and he couldn't complete it all by himself. He started feeling that he should have trained himself in dealing with people but thanks to his straight forward approach people are taking him for granted.Sighing to himself he was flipping his to do list whilst he receives a letter.
A miniature dark purple box was handed to him by his servant.

He opened it to take break from the constant work pressure . The letter read as follows


I wish I was that dormant submissive clay that lay before you,
Being pierced by your glance.
Moulding along the direction of your whims,
Melting in all directions under your breath.
Forming eloquently in your determined arm,
Breaking reluctantly whilst you loosen your palm.
Whining mute spanked roughly under the tool,
Pining for the aid of your touch like a fool.
Caressed articulately by your finger's mystique,
Brushed mercilessly by thy magnificent technique.
Coloured lovingly with a tint of your smile,
To witness the splendour I can walk a mile.
Finally, noticing "myself" ironic it might sound, in the reflection of your spectacles,
I wonder should I accept the failure of losing myself completely to you?

- Not Yours yet
Anonymous photographer


Omkara gently placed the piece of paper on the table lying next to him and tried to compose the Great Wall of emotions that were waiting to evade him.
"Is it a woman?" he questioned himself.

...To be continued


PS: People I wanted to keep it one shot but seems like it is turning into a two shot.I would like to continue this and post the final part soon.Do leave your comments and thoughts.
Edited by ElMystique - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Nice concept

Would love to read more
Update soon

Hi!
Thank you.
I actually planned for a one shot but it is becoming too long so will write it in two parts.
Hope you will like it and surely will keep you updated
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Omkara has a team
But results are not what he is expecting

In midst of all this tension
Who is this secret admirer
Poetry was awesome
That too from a photographer

Waiting eagerly to read more
Glad u have decided to make it two shot
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

Omkara has a team
But results are not what he is expecting

In midst of all this tension
Who is this secret admirer
Poetry was awesome
That too from a photographer

Waiting eagerly to read more
Glad u have decided to make it two shot
Update soon

Thank you so much Vrinda
Yup the admirer is a photographer and plays a key role in the art exibition
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great concept, waiting for the next update! Love to see the artistic Om n an admirer
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

Great concept, waiting for the next update! Love to see the artistic Om n an admirer

I am glad you liked it. This one is purely artistic om and his thoughts/ work.😊
The secret admirer is my personal favorite not more than O though.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Artist Omkara is such a dream.. totally worth treasuring.. n here he's all worked up oho n then thats one heck of an admirer .. wow .. n that letter had me grinning.. :)).. so many emotions rolled into one.. can't wait for his admirer to come forth in the next chapter now.. it's a great read.. n thanks for it ..
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Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Artist Omkara is such a dream.. totally worth treasuring.. n here he's all worked up oho n then thats one heck of an admirer .. wow .. n that letter had me grinning.. :)).. so many emotions rolled into one.. can't wait for his admirer to come forth in the next chapter now.. it's a great read.. n thanks for it ..


I am glad you liked it!! Thank you so much.
I love artistic Omkara like he'll. He is worth more than a trillion bucks ⭐️

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