Thy Effigy (Chap 2 updated Pg:3)

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ElMystique

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: dazzles
Short one yet meaningful...
Very interesting yet very lovely. ...

Waiting to unfold the story...

Thank you! Frankly I haven't thought any further but yes I hope I can do justice to the characters if they meet..

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ElMystique

@ElMystique

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Dear the matter of the fact is that if a person writes a technique ... There is emotion attached more than practicality in expression ... Please write more ... I put forward an ardent request ... We are never ever going to get such an Omie in the show ... And more than anything else ... You are weaving magic ... I really want you to describe the depth of the emotion ... Once two artists collide ... Looking forward

Now! That's little challenging because I don't want to compromise an ounce on it!! I will try my best to give a perfect meeting. I hope it turns out well..

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ElMystique

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
so om has a secret admirer...interesting
waiting for the next update

Thank you!! 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Aparajita2210

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Oh my dear mystique ... I am stunned ... Omkara so much soaked in your essence, this composition turned out to be a perfect balance of technique and emotion ...

Yeah we do know who can be his inspiration ... But the way you made him believe that it has to be a woman ... Not even a girl lively drenched in art was full of wonder. 😳

He got his inspiration, he felt her ... The way he brought her to the canvas from his heart was beautiful to imagine ... Not to forget ... The mention of material and technique here ... Your own knowledge of art is really helping this piece of art to be good.

What is more notable here that you bring back the refreshment of the art of letter writing ... Here me and Omkara being on similar terms that how are you able to deliberate it so precisely 😳 it was like inspiring a soul to get back to the old-school ways of romancing ...

The kind of flattered he is ... His modesty in expressing his non-ability to face her ... Is such a natural characteristic of any artist ...

He named her ... So in some way he owns her ... So A-musing ❤️

I am happy that Om has found his inspiration and is going to work so elegantly with it. She is the much needed charm ... They have to meet soon ... Where and when ... That I know 😳

This piece of work even though short in length has managed to speak volumes about Gauri as well As Om and their emotions for each other ...

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

You are commendable ... Dear artist ! The way you are trying to work out through a story leaving embellished intricate details is so heart melting ...

You have so very well described her mad kind of love for the artist ... This is something realistic 👏 ... Now that he is longing to see her, I am in love with the way ... His canvas does the speaking ... 😳

His response to her romantic approach is something I can die for The way he tries to reply back ... After realizing the depth and detailing of her message ...

You are very well able to bring out an important problem - the long forgotten ... Art of letter writing ... As the mailbox was just supposed for courier ... Now I am quite sure that people will want to regret it ❤️

His self confession ... Doubting his abilities to see her, bear her presence ... Is the remarkable trait of a good artist ... Especially the ones who are adored to the core of emotion ...

Saying ... He does not have confidence if he can share any mutual feeling or not ... He has fallen ... Deeply fallen for her ... Remarking her to be his ... Inspiration for time being 😳

Now that I know the time and place ... I am more than eager to see ... What exactly will happen when he will recognize her ?

Most importantly mentioning that even your titles are perfect ... I am madly, deeply, crazily in love with the story ...