Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey shona... fantastiche start.... waiting for the next update....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ aandhanika-thank u 😊

@ vini- lol yh wud love to see ur reactions on veer scenes 😆
"knew it....hw can u lev ur pRem behind...aakhir aa hi gaya na script mein..." - vini abhi script mein kahan aya hai...this is onli in the comments....dont worry script mein bhi jald he ponch jayega 😆

lol yes DS have a janam janam puran rishta wid dasis 😆

asar bura nahin hai...like kekta serials hopefully my twists will be more sensibly 😆

of course PKDSW Shona has left u no other options 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Shona**



@ vini- lol yh wud love to see ur reactions on veer scenes 😆 ya sure i will send u instant smileys of my reactions...😆

"knew it....hw can u lev ur pRem behind...aakhir aa hi gaya na script mein..." - vini abhi script mein kahan aya hai...this is onli in the comments....dont worry script mein bhi jald he ponch jayega 😆 ...ooo ''abhi toh shuruaat hai...aage aage dekho hota hai kya....''🤣....ryt shona....😆

lol yes DS have a janam janam puran rishta wid dasis 😆 Poor DS...!!!😆

asar bura nahin hai...like kekta serials hopefully my twists will be more sensibly 😆

of course PKDSW Shona has left u no other options 😆

Lolz...Nao...jus hav 2 w8 ....w8 n w8...!!!

aur kitna tym lagega shona...???🥱....😆😆😆



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ vini-yes yes do send ur reactions!!!

"ooo ''abhi toh shuruaat hai...aage aage dekho hota hai kya....''....ryt shona...." lol yes cudnt be more correct...u'll lose count of how many times Prem pops up in each part 😆 😆 😆

lol yh poor DS-kya kismat hai yaar

ok i'll wait 2morrow- was lil busy today and waise bhi sabra ka phal meta hota hai...u'll love next part im sure 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys firstly Thank u for the response u guys gave me with part 1 🤗

Heres part 2 of Vishvaas 2...


nways for those who have read part one heres the link:
Vishvaas 2-part 1


ok moving on heres what happens next:

Veer and Vishva have set of for Ashtik gaow...they were accompanied by only one other person-Parth-he was one of Veer's most trusted man and he was one brave warrior. Veer didnt like taking soldiers with because he thought he could protect himself but he took Parth with him because he couldnt be sure of anything...anything can happen n veer only trusted Dharam and Parth afterhimself when it came to handling the sword(oh n vishva of course)

however when they reached near Ashtik they saw an injuried person lying on the floor and went over to examine

Veer: arre ye toh Sambha hai

Vishva: sambha kaun

Parth: humara senik...ek kaas guptachar

Parth takes an injured sambha into his lap

Parth: kya hua Sambha

Sambha: maharaj veer

Veer: sambha hum yahin hai...bolo...kisne kiya ye

Sambha: maharaj...Ashtik mein...Sashtik Rajya ke koi....sainik Rajgardh ke jankari le ke...hum pe akraman karna chahte hai...Ashtik pe kabhsa karna chahte hai....woh kuch badh karne wale hai…puran massi ke raat ko

With these words Sambha passed out.Parth checked his pulse

Parth: maharaj saase abhi chal rahi hai par saar pe kaafi chot lagi hai

Vishva: yahan paas mein Vaidji hai…wahan hum inhe leh ja sakte hai

The three of them pulled Sambha with them to vaidji's house

The vaid examined him and gave medication

Outside in Vaidji yard Veer,Parth and Vishva all think about Sambha's words
Parth: maharaj app kahe toh apne khaas aadmiyon ko bol ke hum is ke jankari kare

Veer pauses to think

Veer: nahin…mein is barre mein kudh baata lagaon ga…kudh apne dushmaan ko dhudh lunga…..Parth tum ek kaam karo…Aryanagar joa…aur wahan Dharam ko khabar kar do ke hum nahin ah rahe aur kyun who baata dena…aur haan Sambha ko apne saath le jana…wahan usse aaram milega…yahan uski jaan ko khatra hai


Parth: par maharaj app ko toh woh pehchaan lenge

Veer: haan par who Vansh ko nahin pehchaan payenge….

Parth understand that Veer is taking disguise and smiles at him

Veer: Parth jaldi humare liye kuch aam kapdo ka intazam karo

Vishva felt somewhat leftout

Vishva: rooko Parth

She stands infront of Veer

Veer: par is mein khatra

Vishva: shh Veer bohat bolta hai…Veer hum apke saath reh kar apni praja ke liye kuch karma chahte hai…hum apko akele nahin chodh sakte..ye log kaun hai…kahan se aye hai…iske bari mein humme kuch nahin paata…who kitne hai who bhi nahin paata…hum kuch nahin jante sirf itna jante hai agar hum jayenge toh saath mein varna humme mein se koi kahin nahin jayega

Veer smiles at her
Veer: App kabhi nahin bhadlengi….Parth maharani Vishva ke liye kapdo ka intazam karo

Parth: ji maharaj

Parth sets off…smiling slightly…this was not the first time he had encountered his queen and king like this…he had seen them like this before as well….fighting for one another's well being.

Sometime later Parth returns with a bundle of clothes, some fruits and water and simple jewellery
Sambha had also regain conscious and was ready to set off with Parth

Minutes later Vishva and Veer had taken a new disguise of a Rajeshthani couple…Veer tucked his knife in his belt and looked at Vishva


Her eyes spoke for her…they reflect Vishva's love for her husband…for her people and the will to fight for them

VV depart from Parth and Sambha

VV are walking in a deserted path…they wanted to reach the main Ashtik village fast and this was a short cut known to only a few

It was getting dark when suddenly Veer was struck from the back….

Veer: AHH


Vishva turns to defend themselves but isn't able to because her hands get tied up and so does Veer's …both are taken into captivity….

They are bought into a cave after being badly beaten and robbed
Inside the cage a man throws water on the'r faces to revive the lifeless couple

Man: Kaun ho tum…yahan kya kar rahe ho..

Veer: mein…Vansh…vapari hoon

Man looks at the jewellery that he had robbed of Veer

Man: eh ladki…kya naam hai tumhara

Vishva: vi

Veer gives her a "don't-say-it"look

Vishva: vi…vinisha…mein inki patni hoon…humme chood do

Veer: hum vepari hai….choodh do humme

The man takes all their money and jewellery and asks his men to free "Vansh n Vinisha" these are Veer and Vishva's names when they are in disguise for this mission

VV are thrown to the floor

Veer looks at Vishva and smiles

on the otherhand in Aryanagar Nivriti was out visiting other women who were helpless and poor as she walked around she felt as though somebody was following her...it felt strange....she feels uncomfortable and keeps looking back but sees nobody...finally she decides to ignore this feeling and just do her work...as she leaves a lady is revealed to be standing behind the tree

It was an elderly mid-wide called Vrinda...she wanted to reveal to Niviriti a 17-year old secret that she had been hiding but she was feeling scared to do so

Precap: Veer: vinisha...arre suno...roko...mujhe maaf kardo

People look on as Veer trys to ask Vishva for forgiveness


Shona


NOTE: my computer is having problem with uploading pix so wasnt able to add pix even though Vinisha found some gr8 pix...sorry will try to sort this out soon and start using pix agen soon!

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol for those who sed last part was short- i tried to make up for it by making this part longer 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 thnk u..was w8ting long for iit 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupode

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gud work!!!!!!!!!



thank u hun
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: heaven princess

👏 👏 thnk u..was w8ting long for iit 😃



aww..thankoo hun...sorry for the delay 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Waw.... amazing part dear...
Pls contineu 😃

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