Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16 - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
Woow...i just loved Veer and Vishva moments....how romanticc....šŸ˜..i wonda y Vishva stoped him from kissin heršŸ˜•.....buh the shyari...was fabulaus....(sorry if i spelled dah rong)...lo0ol..pls update soon...w8ting fro ure next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
Very sweet update shona...really liked it when Vishwa stopped veer from kissing her & yah your shayari was also very sweet like your fanfic...Pls. continue & post the next part soon.😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
tis is my vry 1st reply 2 u shona,read all the prts jus luv ur fanfic,its so different!all of thm married!the romance is so mature,dialogues n situations r so beautifully writtn,every dialogue is so much wid feel,damn xpressive,i hve enjoyd it especially veer n vishwa,the couple in deep luv n respect 4 eac othr,well dne!
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update and your shairy is really good
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Posted: 16 years ago
shona dear
love u
just mindblowing fantastic
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update shona, ur dia were so romantic and even ur shayari. it was a splendid update nothing to criticise abt itšŸ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww...Shona..ye kya hai sab???
itna romantic part..??? kya baat hai??šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
ok back to the topicšŸ˜‰
ohhh so Vishva is worried for something...but our Veer knows that she is worried for some thing...but ye kya??kya soch rahi hai Vishva ki Veer ke footstep bhi nahi sunayi diye???hmm..there is something very serious ....!!! Veer knows thatšŸ‘..gud going veer...n shona also.šŸ˜‰
ohhh so finally Veer ki pyar bhari aawaz ne usse puchh hi liya...nye kya??ohhh...so she is thinkin abt pratapsingh, his attack on rajgarh n why he dont want yudhh now....so many things r going on her mind..!!!poor vishva.... abb ek aur tension..but koi baat nahi mera veer hai na...sab kuchh thik kar dega...hahahah...shona veer yaha par bhi mera nonu baby hai!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
but wait..ohhh...veer happy to hear this..why?? ohhhhhh he knows the reason behind it.n because of this veer will get some more time for the preparation...gud point shona..
he remebered guruji's words..ha ha..gurukul me bahot masti ki hai..chhup chhup kar vishva se milne aana..but bhai saab ne padhai bhi bahot dil se ki hai...wowwwwwwwšŸ‘
achha to guruji's words...jab yu dhh na kare koi to woh samne wale ki praja ko uske khilaaf kar dete ha...so woh apne aap hi kamzor h jaaye...
Visha ko vishvas hai ki veer ne uske pitaji n dadaji se jyada chhi tarah rajya ko sambhala hai n praja ko pyaar diya ahi so.. woh logo ko veer kabhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta...aawwww vishva...so true!!!gud gud
now vishva came back in her original mood...hmm...humne aapki itni taarif ki n aapne hamare naye llahege ke bare me kuchh nahi bola???hahahha..cishva tumbhi na...!!!! in sab baaton ke bich me achanak se lehnga kaha se aa gaya??🤣
hey shona...i lke the shayari dear..tumne khud likhi hai??arre iss scene ke mood ko pura catch kiya hai tumhari shayari ne..gud onešŸ˜‰
chand ka guroor ho tum
in taaro ki shaan ho tum
is kamre ki aan ho tum
par sabse pehle Vishva meri jaan ho yum

wow..abhi bhi veer ke compliments vishva ko saatve aasman pe le jaate hai...soo cute couple..or ideal couple!!!!!!!!
they were standing in each others arms...Veer moved closer to kiss vishva but she puts her fingers to his lips to stop him...veer seems a little puzzled at his wife's behaviour.
why??????????
What happened to Vishva???šŸ˜•
ohhhh precap...hmmm to fir se koi mission pe ja rahe hai VV?/??? thik se aaram bhi nahi kar pate n ek aur mission ready hi hota hai..but sukar hai VV saath me jate hai.....!!!
hey shona thanks dear ki tumne meri baat rakh li..n hume kuchh aur VV moments diye...n as u said u will add VV moments in every part...i will wait for it dear....Thank sooooooo much..!!!!!šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
Soooooooo Romantic part....i like it so much when VV understand each other without saying a word...too gud...i love this couple!!!!!
Romantic, lovely, fantastic part...gud going..shona..waiting for the next partšŸ˜‰šŸ˜›šŸ¤—
Edited by jigs_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

woooow....shona...brill update! u have made ma day! omg..VV r sooo adorable! n der love...woow...da heights! i tell ya!

Veer quickly responds: app is lehenge mein bilkul pari lag rahi hai jo asmaan se utaar ke meri zingadi mein roshni barne ayi hai...Vishva...
chand ka guroor ho tum
in taaro ki shaan ho tum
is kamre ki aan ho tum
par sabse pehle Vishva meri jaan ho tum
fab shyri! loll so cute!
y did Vishwa do dt...y stop him! update sooon! looks like DS, VV on a mission lol...wow cnt wait! cheers
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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 11

Vishva puts her fingers to his lips to stop veer from kissing her...veer looks puzzled at his wife's behaviour, reading his expression vishva explains
Vishva: bohat pyar hogaya ab kuch raj niti ho jaye maharaj...humara apni praji ki taraf zimadedariyan puri karni chahiye
she walks back into the room and opens the map out while veer follows her in...slightly uncomfortable
Vishva: maharaj humme lagta hai ke humme pratap singh ki chal uspe hi istamal karni chahiye aur uske liye humme uski praja ko uske kilaf karna hai...veer..apka dyan kahan hai
Veer: nahin kuch nahin...ap...ap teekh keh rahi hai...
veer stared at the map and starts pinpointing routes and places where they can go...vishva looks at him...
Vishva: veer
Veer: hmm
Vishva leans over and plants a kiss on veer's cheek who blushes n gives a very cute smile
Vishva: pyar khabhi bohat nahin hota aur uske liye hamesha waqt hota hai...hum shayad ye bhool gaye teh
Veer: haan shayad... toh hum kahan teh...
Vishva: hum idhar se jayenge (she points on the map) aur Ujjain ka khazana pehle loot lenge aur uske saath saath hum ganpati ki sone ki murti jo pratap singh itne saalon pehle choori kar ke leh gaya tha woh leh lenge
Veer: hmm...hum parth ko saath leh jayenge aur ap yahan...
Vishva: hum wahan pa jahan...veer hum apke saath ayenge...is baat pe behes karne ka koi fayda nahin
Veer: teekh hai...par ek baat to hai...ap khabhi nahin sudhregi...hamesha khatron se khelenge
Vishva: so toh hai
both laughed at this
the following morning they informed Nivi and Dharam and Sia
Dharam: ye toh achi baat hai...kitne dino badh mehel ke baar kisi katre ka samna karne ko mile ga
Vishva: kya matlab hai apka dharam
Dharam: ye he ke mein apke saath ah rahe hai
Sia: nahin Hum apke saath ah rahe hai
Veer: nahin Dharam tum nahin ah rahe ho
Dharam: hum ah rahe hai Veer
Veer: dharam meine kahan na hum akele jayenge...tumhe ya Sia bhabhi ko ane ki zaroorat nahin
Sia: nahin dharam teekh keh rahe hai...hum tumhare saath chalenge
Vishva: bilkul nahin
Parth: agar agya ho toh mein kuch kahoon
Veer: haan ab tumhi dharam ko samjao
Parth: nahin veer...maharaj dharam teekh keh rahe hai...agar woh ate hai toh is mein harz hi kya hai
Veer: parth tum bhi
Parth: maharaj veer ap suniye...dekhiye agar maharaj Dharam aur rani Sia ayenge toh shayad acha hoga kyunki humme maharaj Dharam jaise yudha ki zaroorat kabhi bhi padh sakti hai...aur jaise Vishva did apko akele nahin jane deti mujhe pura yakeen hai ke rani Sia bhi maharaj Dharam ko akele nahin jaane de gi
Veer: par..ye..nahin..
Vishva: Veer behes karne ka koi fiyda nahin...Parth teekh keh raha hai
Veer: haan haan...tumhara bhai jo hai
Vishva: haan woh toh hai
Dharam,Sia,Veer,Vishva, Parth along with Sanchi took Nivriti's blessings and left the following morning
Sanchi felt akward that Parth was going...she also heard Veer and Parth and Dharam talk about how dangerous this mission was and so she decided to convince them that Sia and Vishva would need a maid to help out...she alsoinformed them she had visited Ujjain often for her maritial granparents were tehre and she knew some shortcuts
As they set off Veer said
Veer: savdhan rehna Pratap Singh...Veer ah raha hai
Vishva puts her hand on his shoulder to indicate her support...both smile.
this journey was surely going to be an adventurous one which none of them would be able to forget....
Precap:
Parth: apne itna khatra kyun mol liye
Sanchi: ye prashna mein apse bhi kar sakti hoon
Parth: acha ye toh bataye apne jab apne maa baap ko bataya ke ap ah rahi hai oh unhone apko roka nahin
Sanchi: hmm woh samaj te hai mein nana nani se milne ja rahi hoon
Enjoy,
Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago

it was amzing update plz cont...

esha

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