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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

awwwwwessssommmme 👏 par as usual meri tumse ek hi shikayat......y no Dharam 😭 Veer Akbar ka 4runner tha kya 😉 UNIFICATION AND CONSOLIDATION OF EMPIRES 4 POLITICAL INTEGRATION 😆 Saari intelligent ideas Veer ko hi aati hai 😕 Where is Agni??........usne Vishwa ko chodke kisi aur ko pakad liya kya 😛 ? Plzzzz update sooonnnn



dear ab Dharam he nazar aye ga after all uski bhi shaadi hone wali hai
lol i never thought that veer cud be akbar's 4runner

dear agni has left Aryanagar and gone far away into exile
he's left vishva-he doesnt feel worthy of her
i'll update tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

great work once again shona...hmmmmso next part we get to know when u r planning to get VV & DS married....Great VV Romantic moments keep up the good work..>Will wait eagerly for the next part 😳 😃



thank u megha...yh all problems in the way of VV wedding to do with astrology will be solved through a maha shani pooja n then DS and VV wedding will take place

im pleased that u like VV scenes
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

an amazing part shona!! 👏 👏 👏
especially vv scene 😳 so cute and sweet... 😳
waiting to see shadi and rajjya abishek 😍
but if im not wrong, this will be the last part na? 😭



thank u archana dear
yup i liked VV scene also...it wasnt planned i just made it up on the spot n it turned out to be gd i guess

shaadi will follow in the next part n rajya abhisheks in the last part

nope 2 parts left
story ends with part 51
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Rekha**


shona-hi reakha 😃
the fanfic iz
awesome! thank u
undescribable u say that all the time...in skool
its excellent:)
but i think it iz too longgggggggggggggggggggggg i think u should have some rest man 😃 😃 yup i know it gets long sometimes n thats why im taking a break...i get knakered b u see that in skool

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007



long? kahi ki long yaar...her ffs are good as they are now

thank u archana...im glad u like vishvaas so much...as for length...well onli 2 parts left rekhz so u wont have to bear with it too long
and as for the rest, she will write few parts and then rest for about 2 months (2 very long months for me)aww archana yup i will have my break for sure and then she will upload vishvaas 2😆

yaa, her story is very good,yh will come back with season 2-lol fantastic...undescriptable, agreed in that

thank u hun...
@Shona: sorry di, i cudnt resist, hope u dont mind😕😳archana sweety i never mind anything u say

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Posted: 17 years ago
once again... awesome part.thanks shona [:)
I like the scene betwn VV the most. because vishava pahele se hi veer ke mann ki bat samaj gayi jab veer ne use kuchh bataya hi nahi tha 😛 that scene was sooooo lovely.kitna pyar hai dono me kuchh kahe bina hi samaj jate hai ekdusre ke mann ki baat 👏
I m feeling bad for agni.I know he helped jai to hurt DV but it was his fathers influence on him!!may be this is his fate!!
n finally we'll see VV n DS marriage 👏
pls put some cute,romantic and lovely n also a long scene betwn them befor marriage!!! 😉
thanks again Shona dear 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
next part shona we are waiting 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok next part:

Credit for pics goes to Vinisha

Samar and Vishva were about to leave when Vishvanathji maharaj came…there departure was postponed

Vishvanathji maharaj was a holy priest who could see the past, present and future

VNM=Vishvanathji maharaj

VNM comes in and the whole royal family take his blessings, he looks at vishva suspiciously

Arya explains to VNM about the rajyahishek and DS wedding and how VV wedding had badha

VNM: in dono ki shaadi ho sakti hai...sab badhaye tal jayengi...jab MahaShaani puja hogi

Samar: humme ye pooja jald se jald karani hai toh

VNM: teekh hai…

He closes his eyes for a second

VNM: kal shani vaar hai…aur subha ka mahurat bohat acha hai…

He gives nivi instructions to buy certain saman

V-V are given instructions to show VNM his room
Inside the room
VNM: Tum ek Dakoo ho na

Vishva: thi…(she seems disturbed)

Veer: kyun…aur waise bhi insaan janam se kuch nahin hota…karam se hota hai…aur ye apni karam se rajkumari Vishva hai

VNM: bohat suna hai apke bare mein aur inke bhi

Veer: ji

VNM: humme apke bare mein Rajkumari saanvi se suna hai

Vishva: saanvi…

Veer: to hap the jinhone usko sab

VNM: haan mein baataya tha

Veer fights back his tears when he recalls Sanvi last moments

Veer: maharaj kya ap sab ko Vishva ke bare mein

VNM: ye apka pyar hai jis ne ek dakoo ko rajkumari banaya hai aur mein iske bilkul virudh nahin…

VV take his blessings

To veer he says "Vijaybhava" and to Vishva he says "Akanda soh bagaya vati bhava"

Vishva smiles


The following morning all come down to the pooja hall ready for the pooja…they all sit around the haven and VNM starts the pooja

The pooja and haven is carried out and after the pooja VNM says DS n VV marriage ka shubh mahurat hai agli pooranmasi ki raat ko aur rajkuamr Veer ka rajyaabhisek iske teekh dus din badh aur uske do din badh Rajkumar Dharam ka.

All look exceptionally happy…especially Veer and Vishva who were trying hard to control their happiness

Sia is in her room packing to go back to Avail where her wedding preparations would be starting
She was searching for her cream lehenga…which she has sent to the dhobi to get it washed…she forgot that …

Sia: kahan hai humara lehenga

Dharam entered and saw her search for it frantically

Dharam: Rajkumari Sia

Sia: kya hai

She turns around and sees Dharam

Dharam: aur kaun...

Sia: tum…who humme laga ke…

Dharam: ja rahi ho

Sia: jana padeh ga…hum toh chahte hai ke hum hamesha sirf yaheen rahe

Dharam: Sia ek baat kahoon

Sia: hmm

Dharam: ji karta hai ke tumko yahan se kahin dur bhaga kar le jaoon…jahan sirf mein aur tum ho…nah he ke ye sab dasiyaan

Sia laughs at that

Dharam: par shaadi mein abhi ek mahina hai toh itni jaldi kya hai jane ke

Sia: bohat sari tayari karni hai aur

Dharam: tayari sari humko karni hai

Sia: jaise ke

Dharam: waqt ane par sab paata chal jayega

Sia gazes into Dharam's eyes…wondering what her love had planned for her when Sanchi walks in

Sanchi: rajkumari ji

Sia breaks the eye lock…Dharam again is annoyed at being disturbed by dasis

Sanchi: maharani prateeksha apko bula rahi hai

Dharam: Sanchi tum jao…Rajkumari bas abhi aah jaye gi

Sanchi exits feeling slightly guilty for disturbing the future king and queen of aryanagar

Dharam: Sia woh tum jo lehenga dhoond rahi thi who…humare pass tha…lo

Sia: tumhare paas…par kyun

Dharam hesitates n then stutters

Dharam: haan…who..woh galti se humare kapadon ke saath ah gaya tha

Sia knew the reason was something else but she decided to go with the flow

Sia: aacha toh hum chalet hai

Dharam: Sia…

He pulls her right close to him

Her heart starts racing as to what he will do next

Dharam: humari shaadi se pehle hum apko is tara mil rahe hai…isliye ek gustaki kar rahe hai…


She just looks on into his eyes…which were just centimetres away from her

He goes on to kiss her…


On the other hand Veer enters his room to find Vishva waiting for him…

Veer: tum…

Vishva: Veer hum apse milne aye the
Veer: kya?

Vishva: who kya haina kea b ek mahine ke liye hum apka chehra nahin dekh payenge

Veer: tum vishva hi hona…aur ye app app kya laga rakha hai

Vishva: shaadi ke bad hap he kehna padeh gana

Veer: naa…sirf Veer

Both laugh….

Veer: bahgwan ne bohat nain saafi ki mera saath

Vishva: kyun

Veer: mein ab tumse itne dino tak nahin mil paunga

Vishva: isliye hum ye yahin chood jaa rahe hai

She takes one anklet and gives it to veer

Vishva: ek tumhare liye ek humare liye…jab humari yaad aye toh baate kar lena

Veer: ab toh isse kaam chalana hoga…par intazarr hai us din ka jab tum iss kamre mein aogi…dulhaan banke…meri zindagi saver dogi…aur tum Veer ki vishva ban jaogi

Vishva had to leave now but before doing so she hugged Veer tightly…he did not want to let go but he had to…

she walked away from him and his room and walking back down to the entrance hall where all were waiting for her

She took everyones leave and just then Veer appeared…he bid Samar farewell and waved at Vishva…Dharam stood by who had just seen Sia off…Veer continued to wave even after Vishva was bearly in sight

Dharam saw this

Dharam: veer who chali gayi

Veer drops his hand and both brothers go off inside

Later that night DV were in the palace gardens

Veer was looking up at the sky

Dharam: kya baat hai Veer

Veer: Dharam tummhe nahin lagta ke hum pe jaise zimedariyon ka badal cha raha hai…humme ab rajya chalane hai aur bohat kuch karma hai …humari shaadi hone wali hai…kya is mein humari dosti zinda reh payegi


Dharam: VEER!! Tum jante ho kuch bhi ho sakta hai par humari dosti nahin toot sakti…arre tumhari dosti ke liye hazaaron singhasen aur Sia kurban

Veer: reh paoge Sia ke bina

Dharam wonders
Veer laughs

Veer: humare pass kuch din bache hai azad panch banke jina ka toh in ka maza utah he lete hai

The both smile

Over the next month the wedding preparations were on full swing
Everyone was so excited and everything was going so well…

Even both prince were busy…while Veer had planned and taken ages to model out an architect model of a new garden and palace in Vishva's name in Sumaiya, Dharam had spent a lot of sleepless nights embroiding Sia's wedding dress himself…with of course Sanchi's help and Veer's funny remarks

Finally after days of waiting it was the night before the wedding
In Sumaiya it was Vishva's mehendi ki rasam and in Avail it was Sia's

In Aryanagar it was the haldi ki rasam for both boys who were covered with haldi

Everyone went to sleep peacefully that night awaiting the morning when the barat would leave for Rajgardh(this venue had been chosen so both weddings can take place together-see the kingdom was in between both Sumaiya and Avail and was next to Aryanagar also

Niviriti went into her room…she opened a big box….she pulled out a set of red bangles and a kajra and a pink lehenga and a painting

A tear trickled down her eye as she examined the painting. It was here late husband Prince Ajaypal of Rajgardh

Nivi looked at the red bangles which Ajaypal had gifted to her (it was the first ever gift she had received from him)

Her fingers ran through the pink lehenga…he had gifted her that as Mu dikayi ka toofa

The kajra had been made by Ajaypal himself when Nivi gave him news of her pregnancy-it was the last thing he had given to her

She hugged the painting and more tears trickled down her eyes

Nivi: Ajay aaj mein bohat khush hoon…humara Veer raja bane ga…Rajgardh ka…aur uski kal shaadi hai…kitne sapne sajaye the humne…humare bache ke…kaash tum hote yahna pe…apni niviriti ke saath…kal Veer ke liye itna kas din hai par uska pitah uske saath nahin…



She wept more…she was feeling lonely and missing her husband dearly though she had not expressed this for many years…she didn't want to break down…if she broke down who would look after Veer

Precap: Vishva is doing Veer's arti just before he goes into the raj darbar and his rajya abhishek takes place

Dharam also takes charge of Aryanagar

Enjoy

Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
brillaint update!!!!

plz cont soon!!!

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