Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 49

Originally posted by: aandhanika

Hey thanx shona... i really liked this part too....
It's really good!

Please contineu 😉

thanks aandhanika for reading n commenting
im pleased to know u liked this part
will continue 2morrow

Originally posted by: meghaparti

thanks for the update lovely part.... 😳 as usual...Agla part jaldhi bhejo....though veer ne vishwa ko jaan bhuj kar nahi mara lekin...I didnot like that part.... 😃

thanks megha
im glad u liekd it
yup agla part coming 2morrow
ok i will keep that in mind....actually the whole purpose was making agni jealous

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

I luved the sword scene.It reminded me of Jodha Akbar.Agni is going 2 b a very big villain someday,the way he said "baas".I think u will make a very gud scriptwriter sumday,(perfect 4 masala bollywood movies).I wish u were here in India.who knows,maybe sukmday u wud work with RT and VIkrant as well(tab mein Vikrant ka autograph lene aa jaungi,haan 😉 )
keep it up 👏 and update soon 😊
U didnt reply 2 ne of our comments 😭 .

thanks
yh i though the scene mite make some think of JA-actually the foirst VV scene in Vishvaas is very much like that

haha lol he wont be like his dad..veer has to only give one look n agni wud wet himself

thank u...wow what a compliment...amongst one of the best i've been given recently

actually my friends also say that...n that one day i will go india n work with rajjy n vikky 😆 yup u can get vikky's autograph then 😆

i will update 2morrow
yh actually by teh time i finished updating it was 11:30 at nite n i had work the following day so no time to reply to comments then...sorry hun

Originally posted by: ektay11

thanx dear
fantastic 👏

tahnk u ekta 😊

Originally posted by: hiri

that was brill shona

thank u esha
im glad u liekd it 😊

wowow shona i kept missing it but read it today morning, its awesome i am completely hooked now 👏 👏 👏

Shona...I'll have to catch your ff from the begginning.......I waz busy..couldn't read it so... Will definitely read everything from the first part and post in feedback too in a few days! 😳

hey shona next part kaha hai...i am waiting subah se 😳

ok next part:
Credit for Pix goes to Vinisha
Agni: BAAS!

VV look at him...Vishva wants to laugh very hard at agni's expression
Veer opens his mouth to speak but Samar entrys

Samar: tum teen yahan kya kar rahe ho

His eyes fall on Vishva's wound

Samar: arre Vishva tumhe choot lagi hai beta...Veer usse jaldi kamre mein le kar ao hum sainik se bol kar vaid ji ko bulate hai

he leaves

Veer n Vishva look at each other...Vishva winks at Veer n he understands

He puts his hands slowly around her n picks her up
Agni notices this n rolls his fist into a tight ball...shaking slightly as Vishva slowly moves her hands across Veer's shoulders so Agni notices it
Veer begins to walk slowly with vishva in his arms and passes agni n gives him a slight nudge...agni is furious
but he cant do anything coz samar might come and see

In the room the vaidji comes and applies medicine on Vishva's cut which was very minor

Samar turns to Veer

Samar: veer humme tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Veer: ji kahiye

Samar: akele mein...

Veer: teekh hai...Vishva tum yahan araam karo...maharaj ap mere saath chaliye

Samar looks at vishva as though saying "take a rest"

Veer takes samar into another room

Veer: kahiye maharaj


Samar: Tum toh jante ho humari sirf ek he beti thi Sanvi jiske jaane ke badh humme ek aur beti mili,Vishva...humara koi utar adhi kari nahin aur is baat ka humme koi afsos bhi nahin...par ab hum Saumaiya ke bhavishya ke bareh mein soch rahe teh...aur humare dimag mein tumhari chavi ayi

Veer: mein kuch samja nahin maharaj

Samar: tum humare honewale damad ho aur is nateh se hum tumhe Sumaiya ka uttar adhikari bana na chate hai...tumse behtar aur koi hamare hisab se hai bhi nahin

Veer: maharaj mein kaise

Samar: kyun Veer...tumme sare guun hai ek raja ke...aur tum gurukul mein siksha bhi le rahe ho...Veer hum tumhare samne sirf prastav rak rahe hai...jab tum soch samaj ke faisla karlo tab humme baata dena

with that Samar leaves leaving Veer deep in thought as to what he had said n what he shud do


Niviriti comes and sees Veer standing there alone

Nivi: arre Veer tum yahan ho aur hum tumme har jaga dhoondh ke aye hai

Veer: haan ma woh..

Nivi: tumhare liye ek khush khabri hai...tumhare dadaji apni yatra se lot te samay aryanagar ah rahe hai tumme aur vishva se milne

Veer: kya dadaji ah rahe hai

Veer looked really happy...he would be meeting his grandfather after so long


The following morning:

Somebody opened Vishva's bedroom curtains
the sun's rays disturbed Vishva's sleep

Vishva: sone do naa...kaun hai

a female voice replied: hum hai

Vishva opened her eyes

it was Sanchi


Sanchi was one of her maids who was about the same age as Vishva. Sanchi was a naughty and bubbly girl and a loyal friend

Vishva had really started to form a close bond with her over the last few days and over the few days she had become really good friends with sanchi

Vishva: sanchi itni jaldi kyun jagaya

Sanchi: kyunki subha hogayi hai...

Vishva yawns

Vishva: par tum aaj itni jaldi ah gayi

Vishva washes her face in the basin on the otherside of the room

Sanchi: aaj Shiv Parvati vrath hai...maa ne tayari karne ke liye jaldi oothaya

Vishva: ye kya hota hai

Sanchi: har suhagan ye vrath rakhti hai taki uske pati ka saath usse har janam mein mile

Vishva thinks to herself when she and Veer took vows

Vishva: aur iss vrath mein karna kya hota hai

Sanchi: subha ooth ke Shiv parvati ki pooja aur phir pura din upvaas
aur phir raat ko apne pati ke haathon vrath todvana


Vishva thinks about Veer

Vishva: Sanchi jaldise humari Shiv parvati ki pooja ki tayari karo...hum ye vrath rakhenge

Sanchi: ap Rajkumar Veer ke liye pura din nahin khayengi...

Sanchi leaves to make preparations

Veer on the otherhand had heard the conversation betwwen Vishva n Sanchi as he paased Vishva's room n stopped to hear them talk...he decides that if vishva is fasting for him he will also fast for her


He goes to the Shiv Parvati mandir in the Raj mehal and does his pooja n then leaves to go n see whether his grandfather had arrived

Shortly after he reaches the gates where Nivi,Arya,Jai,Sunaina and Agni n Dharam and Sia were Samar and Vishva joined

a little whie later Veer's grandfather Maharaj Samarth arrived

he was an elderly man who took good care of his health...he was a gd king n a brillient father in law n grandfather

Arya greeted him first followed by Nivi who touched his feet and then it was Veer who touched his feet and gave him a hug...then Dharam

Samarth: arre bhai koi humme une rajkumariyon se toh milao jinone in dono paglo ko raaste pe laya

Both Sia and Vishva come n take his blessings

all finish greeting and go inside

Veer takes his grandad to his room to reast

Samarth: Veer humme tumse kuch kehna na beta

Veer: ji boliye dadaji

they both sit on the bed

Samarth: beta ab humari umar pak gayi hai...ab humme lagta hai humme Rajgardh ko surakshit haathon mein sopna chahiye

Veer: ji

Samarth: mein tumhe apna utar adhi kari ghoshit karna chahta hoon

Veer is shocked....this morning samar had offered him n now samarth n he was in the race for aryanagar's throne too

Veer: dadaji humme sochne ka waqt chahiye...

Samarth: tumhare paas waqt hai...sochlo...ab ye bodhe kandhe Rajgardh ka boj nahin utaah sakte

Veer left from there

As he walked down the corridoor he wondered what to do...when he heard footsteps

It was Dharam

Dharam: kya baat hai Veer

Veer: mujhe nahin baata...Dharam ek taraf hum Aryanagar ke singhasen ke liye ji-jaan se mehnat kar rahe hai gurukul main aur dusari taraf maharaj Samar chahte hai mein Suamiya ko un ke badh sambhalo aur dadji chahte hai ke mein Rajgadh ko sabhalo...mein kya karo



Dharam thinks for a minute

Dharam: apni dimag se socho ke tumhe kya karna chahiya aur kya karna chahte ho

the boys are walking when the hear noise from Jaiwardhan's room

Agni: NAHIN pitahji ab mein aur bardash nahin kar sakta...woh Veer meri samne Vishva ko choo raha tha aur mein...

Jai: Agni, agni, agni...tum kab samjo ge...Vishva ko bhool jaoi...woh tumhe nahin pasand karti...

Agni: nahin agar Veer nahin hota toh woh zaroor karti...pehle hum uss Veer ko mar dalenge...phir Dharam ko

Jai: phir usse Aryavardhan ko...phir singhasen humara

both laugh evile

DV are both in shock

Veer wants to go in but Dharam stops him...he grabs him n start walking fast away from there

Jai has doubt someone is listening so goes n checks but DV have already left

in another room

Dharam: humme pitahji ko ye sabh bata na he hoga

Veer: par sabot

Dharam: kya matlap

Veer: rajya sabha sabot mange gi maharaj se jo hum nahin de payenge...bas hum sidha jai mama aur agni ko mar dalte hai

Dharam: nahin veer thande dimag se socho...hum kaal pitahji se baat karenge...aaj toh woh daan baatne gaye hai Aryanagar mein

it is nightfall n neither Veer or Vishva had eaten anything

Vishva has gone to Shiv Parvati mandir to do final prayer before breaking her fast

Veer tells Sanchi to prepare a plate of food for Vishva for she hasnt ate all day-it shud be done by the time Vishva returns

Veer also goes to the mandir...he is just behind Vishva
he looks at her...unable to divert attention else where



Veer comes to reality and faces God's idol and begins to pray
Veer prays to god to keep his and Vishva's love alive forever and to show him the correct path now and also to remove Shani of there kundali so tehy can get married

Vishva is praying to god to help her fulfil all the vows she made to Veer...she prays to god that Veer remains by her side always and that keep all evil eyes of their relationship



Back in the palace when both arrive Veer takes the plate of food for Vishva

he tells her to eat as she has starved all day...she replies he must break her fast

both sit down

He takes a small piece of chappatii and dips it in the daal and feeds Vishva and breaks her fast

they both share a few good moments then

Vishva: veer kya baat hai...kya pareshani hai

Veer: dadaji chahte hai mein Rajgadh ko sambhalo aur Maharaj Samar chahte hai mein Sumaiya ko sambhalo aur yahan sab chahte hai mein aur Dharam mein se koi aur aryanagar ko sambhale...mujhe samaj mein nahin ah raha mein kya karun

Vishva: woh he karo jo tum hamesha karte ho...apne dil ki suno...tumhara dil jo kehta hai...woh he sahi hai...ye humne tumse sikha hai...tumhara dil kya kehta hai

Veer: mera dil is waqt keh raha hai ke ye tummhe bohat chata hai

Vishva: veer!

there is a noise of somebody clearing their throat...its Sanchi

Veer leaves the room reductantly

Vishva: kya hua...

Sanchi: kya ap janti hai Rajkumar Veer ne aaj upvaas rakha hai...apke liye...jaye aur ye thali le kar unhe khilaye

Vishva: kya...veer ne humare liye upvaas rakha 😳

Sanchi nods

She takes the plate and asks Sanchi to come with her...and stand outside teh door...if anybody come near Veers chamber then warn her

Sanchi and Vishva go to Veer's room with food



Sanchi stands outside while Vishva goes in

Veer: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho

Vishva: chor ne bohat koshish ki chupane ke par tumhari chori kapdi gayi...mein janti hoon ke tum aaj upvaas kar rahe ho

Veer: acha...

She makes him sit down and feed him...not just the first bite but the whole meal....he looks at her romantically...she blushes slightly...his plate has been emptied...Vishva is about to leave


Veer grabs her hand

she blushes

Veer: tum ye janti toh ho par phir bhi...mein tumse bohat pyar karta hoon

he lets go of her hand

she blush n runs out of the room

there was something special thought Vishva about the way Veer said "i love u" to her

Precap:
Dharam: pitahji veer pe ye jo hamle ho rahe hai...ye jan bojh kar kiye ja rahe hai...isske peeche jai chacha aur agni ka haath nahin

Arya: nahin woh kyun aisa karenge

Dharam:waja toh woh hi hai jis ke upar ap birajmaan hai

Arya think for sometime

Arya: veer ko bulao


Enjoy

Shona