Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 47

So sad shona.Get well soon dear

ur update was awesome as everytime it is😉

how r u feeling now???????????

** TEJASVI**

RAJAT TOKAS -TOKEN OF LOVE &FRIENDSHIP

U R SO cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee RAJAT

ur smile makes my day..so keep smiling

Thanks for the update Shona great scripting 👏 👏 👏 Keep up the good work...pls. add some romance between VV after their engagement in the next part & hmmmmmmmmmm Angi jealous wow ek phot jazoor add karna uski 😆

that was gr8 Shona 👏
Nice 2 know u r back in action 😊 WAiting 4 engagement 😃 Wud luv 2 c Agni dancing in Veer's engagement 😉

HEY SHONA !!! tum to chhaa gayi ho yaar awesum part.. 👏

that was perfect part thanx shona

ok heres the next part:
Credit for pics to Vinisha-im having problem with some of the pics so bear with me...will get them as soon as i get them sorted 😳

Vishva clicks her finger in front of veer

Vishva: kya hua...kahan khoye ho

Veer: kuch nahin...chalo haven shuru honewala hai

all go over to the haven and sit around it


once the haven was done then all got up n turn by turn all bowed to the huge murti of god that was at the front
Veer and Vishva were last as they were the youngest



as Veer approached it Agni looked at his men and gave the nod for go ahead

men were hiding behind the murthi...they cut the ropes which made the murti unstable

Veer and Vishva were still praying when the murti lost balance and began falling on them

It caught Dharam's attention

Dharam: VEER!!
he pushed veer out of teh way and in the process knocked vishva out of teh way too

Everyone looks on shocked whereas agni looks angry n Jai looks fustrated

Everyone rush to Veer n Vishva...Vishva is looking very scared for veer...she makes sure he is ok

Veer acts as though it was a coincidence but he knew that it was a planned attack like the previous ones

After a while the atmosphere gets calmer and soon the engagment begins

Nivi does the arti of Veer n Vishva n Sunaina does Dharam n sia's arti and tehy do all teh other rasams

Vishva touches Nivi's feet who says

Nivi: bas isse tarah mere veer ka hath tameh rakhna...har dukh mein har sukh mein...haan ye thoda ziddi hai...aur thoda sa shetani bhi par itna bhi bura nahin

Vishva thinks "Veer mein mujhe toh koi buraya nahin dikh ti"

All give their blessings and with taht ends the engagment on a more positive note

all through this Veer is unable to look away from Vishva

(Sorry guys i dont know any engagement rites from taht time so its a lil pathetic 😳 )

All four are sitting in a room that night pondering over suspects

Vishva: woh jo koi bhi hai mere haath mein ah jaye toh zinda nahin choodungi

Veer: aur agar woh Dharam nikla toh

Vishva: par dharam kaise ho sakta hai...woh tumhe kudse ziyda pyar karta hai

Veer: bas is he tara mein kisi pe shak nahin kar sakta...ye mera parivaar hai...koi baat nahin baas jab tak tumhara saath aur Dharam ki dosti aur Sia bhabhi ka prathnayein mere saath hai mujhe kuch nahin hoga

the girls leave as Sia has to conduct the cooking in the kitchen today and Vishva wanted to go to the mandir

in the mandir:


Vishva: ye kyun ho raha hai veer ke saath...woh toh khabhi kisi ka bura nahin karta...koi kyun uski jaan leh ga...bhagwan uski raksha karna

on the otherhand DV are sitting together

Veer: Dharam mein janta hoon ke woh kaun hai jo meri jaan ke peeche hai


Dharam: kaun

Veer: agni...par jab tak humare paas sabut nahin hum kuch nahin kar sakte

Dharam looks amused

Dharam: par agni ye kyun karega

Veer: singasen ke liye...aur vishva ke liye aur waise aisi kayarta aur kaun karega

Dharam: mein abhi pitahji

Veer: nah...maharaj ko tab tak nahin paata hona chahiye jab tak humare paas sabut na ho...

Dharam: ageh ka kya socha hai

Veer: usko todha jalaun ga toh khudh sab kuch ugal de ga

both smile

the following day Veer goes into Vishva's room very early in teh morning...he sits on her bed and looks at her...shes lost in a dream world...Veer was hoping she was dreaming of him...with teh smile that she had on her face

Slowly she opened her eyes and looked shock to find him there

Veer quickly puts his hand over her mouth before she can make any noise

Veer: shhh

there is a pause n then Veer remembers why he had come here so early

Veer: meri baat dhyan se suno

He explains his plans to Vishva who smiles cutely...she looks very excited

Veer n Vishva proceed towards the sword fighting pit late morning


both do a little sword fighting when Veer sees Agni in begins to put his plan into action

Veer loudly says

Veer: Vishva...talwar achi chalaleti ho

agni hears Vishva's name n so goes to see what is happening

Vishva: par tum se behtar nahin

Veer: tum janti ho agni bhi achi chalaleta hai

Vishva: woh chahundar jo ghade ki poch lagta hai...usse toh tum chuki mein udah doh ge

Veer and vishva continue fight when accidentally Veer cuts Vishva on her toe

Vishva: ahh

Agni is shaking with anger as he sees Veer walk towards Vishva

Veer apologises n picks up Vishva and takes her to teh side and touches her feet to examine the cut

Agni cant bear to see Veer n Vishva so close together

Agni enters n Shouts

Agni:BAAS


Precap: DV find out Jai is also with Agni n tehy are planning to kill Dharam after Veer n eventually Aryavardhan too-boys decide to do something fast


enjoy

shona

Thanks Shona for another Lovely part 😊
finally unki engagement ho gayi 👏
loved the scene when VV were teasing agni 😆
keep writing this typr of cute scenes 😊

Hey thanx shona... i really liked this part too....
It's really good!

Please contineu 😉

thanks for the update lovely part.... 😳 as usual...Agla part jaldhi bhejo....though veer ne vishwa ko jaan bhuj kar nahi mara lekin...I didnot like that part.... 😃

wow!!
such a wonderful part shona!!
sorry i didnt read ur ff nor commented, it is bcz i was busy
but i readed all, today, and i have to say that ur story is getting better day by day!! 👏 👏 , aur haan, i have to agree wid the member who said, that the story is poori filmy, its true! 😳
sia and vishwa going to their respectives guys room, was very original and lovely
nice to see sia wid brains, and dharam saving veer, and da engagement part was very good 👏
and veer vishwa making vows...loved it!
thanks god, here they know who is behind all "accidents" 😃 ..because its so obvious
the last part, was very cute, veer going to vishwas room, and then both having a sword fight 👏 😳
in that moment in ma mind came vishwa as jodhaa and veer as akbar fighting wid sword 😛
hope ur hands are fully recovered now, plz take care,
ff ke liye nahin, to tumhare liye aur jo tumki parvaa hei
thanks, for ur effort 👏
👏 👏 👏