Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 30

that was so sweet and romantic... 😳 u'r getting better and better with each part... 👏

Awee that was choooooo romantic...thank u so much shona for making veer jealous 😳 & haan can wait for the next part just imagine jab veer aur vishwa ko pata chalega ki unki shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai toh dono ktna blush karenge 😍 Great job Shona 👏 👏 keep up the goodwork & post the next part soon 😆

Very Very romantic part 😳 😳 😳 Yeh scene to hume serial mein toh dekhne nahi milega😆 . u had made briliant use of pics 👏 👏 👏

A big applause to you Shona for being so fluent in ideas😃, consistent 😊and providing readers nice piece of FF 👏 every week.

Loved ur couples and their gurukul..... how much freedom they have there😉 Wow that part where u wrote Shera's feelings of being in love "Shera running around happily and Veer watching her" is so beautiful.... i was smiling while reading that and u nicely wrote for Shera that how happy one is... when one is in love or its such a beautiful experience when we know someone loves us dearly. 😳

Sia-Dharam are cute and simple couple unlike Veer-Vishwa who are naughty and natkhat..😆 loved it.

Ahh that romantic scene between VV was beautiful.....

and jealousy ...😆 Hey is sandy a bad girl? If yes let her join hands with Agni.... like this Sandy ko Veer aur Agni ko Vishwa milne jayenge... na na... i making sound like K-serial ideas.

Hey itne jaldi unki shadi fix mat karo... abhi umar hi kya hai unki....

and my request to u too..... Agni ko koi acha plot do..... let him be the proper and takkar ka villian for all four.

That last part is so romantic..... awww.... when Veer teaches her to dance😳

Keep it up and i ll waiting to read more and more..... 😃

this time I am not going to praise u as I will run out of adjectives if I continue doing so. 😉
All I will tell u is Ur story makes my day.Everyday I make it a point to update myself with Viswaas.Today I went to school without reading ur story and I felt like a clumsy fellow at school 😕 (all I could do was to fume at the shortage of time 😡 ).But u r amazing with each and every part 👏
1 request:Dharam pics plzzzzzzzzz 😊

plzzzzzzzzz continue soon shona
cant wait 😳

wow shona loved it!!! 👏 👏 👏
it was sooo romantic nice and beautiful!! specially last part 😳 😳 😳
thanks for making veer jealous, and its consequents reactions 😆
aw, and ppiyu is right, dharam sia are so cute, innocent and simply couple while veer shera, are always meeting each other, making jealous and romancing 😆 😳
keep that way, the contrast is very nice 👏

hi everyone
thank u so much for ur comments 😊
im extremely busy today so will reply to all ur kind comments and update next part tomorrow

hey shona next part kab aayega 😆

hello shona,ur tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!! i jus started to read ur ff and jus cudnt stop!!! omg u rule!!!!!!!!! and plzzz post the next part soon,m sooo damn exited to read it 😊