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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys im really sorry-
its my assessment week n i have a science assessment 2morrow n need to prepare so next update will be on saturday

me planning to end Viswaas in 15 more parts
Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

hey guys im really sorry-
its my assessment week n i have a science assessment 2morrow n need to prepare so next update will be on saturday

me planning to end Viswaas in 15 more parts

koi baat nahi shona

god knows how will i wait but ur work is the most imp😃

and dont end in just 15 parts😳

Edited by ektay11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

hey guys im really sorry-
its my assessment week n i have a science assessment 2morrow n need to prepare so next update will be on saturday

me planning to end Viswaas in 15 more parts

aw, dont be sorry 😊, ur work comes first, good luck!

u are ending viswaas in only 15 parts??😲,😕 as ur wish, its ur story...

waiting for saturday😍😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
15 parts? but you promised to show their marriages 😭
best of luck with your science assignments.. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Best of luck 4 science paper.
Achhe se exam deke aaram se update karna.
Me 2 busy this week.
Bataana exam kaisa raha.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

hey guys im really sorry-
its my assessment week n i have a science assessment 2morrow n need to prepare so next update will be on saturday

me planning to end Viswaas in 15 more parts


no need to be srry shona😛😛😛
studies r more important...😊😊😊 gudluck for ur assessment👍🏼
ending in just 15 parts 😲 😳 😔 😭
am waiting for saturday's update...!!!!😉😊



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
I havn't commented on ur parts 4 so long..showwie! 😭 But I have been reading them and u r rocking!! 👏👏 very very very very very very very well written! 😃 Enjoyed each and every part! 😛 And don't be sorry .. finish off with ur assessments and then post the next part..will wait 4 it! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry guys for the delay but heres the next part:

Veer comes back to his room soon after...he looks delighted at the fact that him and vishva are together agen....he walks over to the bed and falls on it...smiling while he recalls the moments he had just spent with Vishva



Veer goes over to his window and whistles

Raja comes and perches himself on Veer's hand

Veer: joa aur subha hone se pehle...aise kuch le ao jo Rajkumari Vishva ko mein tofe mein de sakun aur jo usse acha lage...kya kar paoge

Raja pecks veer in indication of yes

on the otherhand Nivi is sitting in Veer's room in teh mehal thinking about Veer and she begins to think about Vishva...Nivi looks around at the mess in Veer's room...there were cloths and ink all in a muddle and there was clothes all in a mess

Rather than getting a dasi to clean it up Nivi decided to do it herself...she wanted to tidy her son's mess like a typical mother

She piled all the spare writing clothes togther which didnt have no writing when she came across one which had writing...she picked it up and read the letter...which was addresses to Vishva

Vishva,
mein tumhe baata nahin sakta ke mein kitna khush hoon... ye jaan kar ke tum mujhese pyarti ho...kal raat ke badh shayad sabh badal gaya hai...

ye soch kar aaj hasi ayi ke das, pandra saal badh jab hum ye yaad karenge tab humme kaisa lage ga

jis tara tum sab sipahiyon se bach kar mere kamre tak poonch gayi aur saaf saaf maafi mang kar pyar ka izhar kiya...meine sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke jab mujhe pyar hoga toh iqraar kuch is tara hoga...par humare riste mein sab ulta he hota hai...shayad...nahin paka yehi humare riste ki takat hai...hum ek dusre se alag hai par phir bhi ek dusre ke bina nahin reh sakte

mein soch raha hoon ke mein maa ko ye paata he doon ke mujhe tum pasand ho...par agar unho ne mana kar diya iss shaadi se toh kya hoga...mein tum mein aur maa mein se kisi ek ko nahin chun sakta...

aacha meri bak bak toh bahat sun liyi ab tum kuch bolo...

arre haan mein baata na toh bhool gaya...meine aaj lal rang ke kapde pehne hai...kaisa dikhta hoon...haan haan janta hoon acha he dikta hoon...isliye toh rajkumariyan Veer ko dekh ne ke liye tarasti hai...

sirf tumhara,

Veer



Nivi glances at the letter agen

Nivi: acha toh in dono mein pehle se he kuch khicadi pak rahi hai....Veer toh mujhse bhi pehle nikal gaya is ghar ki bahu dhoodh na...jo bhi ho ab in dono ki shaadi mein deri nahin honi chahiye...mein kal he bhaiya se baat karke samar se Vishva ka haath mang lungi

she smiles when she thinks about the shock Veer will recieve at hearing about his marriage

the following morning Raja flys in
Dharam wakes up

Dharam: arre Raja kya hua?

Raja indicates towards Veer

Dharam: Veer raja tumhare liye kuch laya hai...otoh

Veer: oohaa...sone do dharam



Dharam: veer Vishva...tumhara intazar kar rahi hai

Veer: kya!!

Dharam: ohh hummari galti ho gayi...vishva nahin Raja tumhara intazar kar raha hai

Veer: Raja...kya laya hai

Veer sees that raja has bought a load of pink roses

Veer thinks about it for a second and then realises that Vishva likes pink roses

He thanks Raja who takes off and looks at Dharam who has a "Veer-what-u-up-to-now"look

Veer: kya

Dharam: ah veer tum kal raat kahan gaye teh

Veer: woh..mein...tehalne

Dharam: tumhe nahin lagta ke tum aajkal bohat tehal te ho...aur waise bhi Rajkumariyon ke gurukul mein tehal ne kyun gaye teh

Veer: nahin aise koi baat nahin...woh mein dekhne gaya tha ke meri bhabhi...ke tabyat kaisi hai

Dharam: kyon kya hua Sia ko...veer woh teekh toh hai

Veer laughs

Veer: kyun itna daar hayi...mein wahan isliye gaya tha kyunki...Rajkumari Vishva ko nritya sikhane...

he blushes

Dharam: Veer tumhe nahin lagta ke um log Shaadi se...nahin mera matlap hai tumhe shaadi karleni chahiye

Veer: mujhe se badeh tum ho...pehle tumhari bari aur waise bhi agar shaadi ho jaye gi toh aise chup ke milne ka maza thooda milehga

The boys joke around before getting ready and leaving...today was saturday
DV's guruji went to a hanuman mandir every saturday so on Saturdays DV only had to learn life skills from Ambika Maa...things like cooking and stuff...that wud be in use to them if they ever needed to

it was early in teh morning and while Dharam went to meet Sia and do the pooja with her Veer went to find Vishva

She was doing morning Tulsi puja
he looked on at her...again in his mind thinking about how beautiful she looked

then she went to the mandir to do puja and so did he

She didnt know he was there...her eyes were closed see


Vishva: hai maa humme ashirwad do ek hum ek adar beti aur rajkumari ban sake...jaise apne pichle kuch dino mein humari madat ke hai ye sab rajkumari ban ne ke tor tarike sikh ne mein waise hi...

Veer: aur maa hamesha is ki raksha karna...isse har dukh se bachan...dard toh mein apne uppar le lunga...aur maa isse buri nazar se bachana...woh kya haina ke ye in dino bohat khoobsurat lagti hai aur isse kisi ke bhi nazar lag sakti hai

Vishva: veer kudh ke liye kuch nahin mangoh ge

Veer: mangoon ga par Devi maa se nahin...tumse

Vishva: humse...kya chahiye tumhe

Veer: aaj tumhari bari hai humme kuch sikha ne ki...

Vishva: hum is waqt kaise...tum jante ho kal ke liye humme tayari bhi karni hai...Ambika maa ke

She caughs

Veer: tum teekh ho?

Vishva: haan...aacha hum tumhe sikhayenge

Sandhiya sees this and gets angry...

Sandy: mein bhi dekh ti hoon kaise....rajkumar Veer sirf humara hai...sirf humara


on the otherhand Nivi coems to meet Arya

Arya: kya baat hai nivriti

Nivi: woh bhaiya...apko samar ke beti Vishva kaisi lagi...mera matlap...woh kya rajkumari ban payegi

Arya: tum ye kyun pooch rahi ho

Nivi: woh bhaiya mein soch rahi thi ke Veer ke liye Vishva kaisi rahegi

Arya: ye toh bahat he achi baat hai...waise bhi vishva sundar hai...dil ki saaf hai aur woh rajkumari ban ne ke sari siksha le rahi hai...tumhe jald se jald samar se baat karni chahiye


Nivi looks delighted

Nivriti sends a letter to samar about the proposal

on the otherhand Vishva seems to have a bad cough and high temperature too

Sia: Ambika maa...Vishva ko bohat teez bukar hai...par woh davai leh he nahin rahi

AM comes and examines Vishva.... she looks stern...


Precap:Sia n Dharam are going to a nearby village and it starts raining heavily also Veer telling Vishva to take care of herself ...he is looking after her at night wen he falls asleep....

Shona


Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was really good and oh no vishwa got high temprature thats saaaaaaadddddddd 😭 😭 😭 .


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Posted: 17 years ago
@eshathank u...yh vishva has a temperature but the outcome will be a cute scene of VV-btw veer will not turn into a vaid here

@anishaumarthank u

@ sharadha dithank u...yh i wanna see DV n SS at a GK in the show too

vinishathanks...sirf shaadi ke baat ho rahi hai...shaadi mein abhi der hai

@ jigs_b-thank u

@ neerithank u...wow u think its getting better each time..o thought its the sme...thanks for compliment

@meghayh theyw ill definately blush wen they learn abt their marriage

@shrujathx...yh defo u wudnt see that on the show...there will be so many problems over the one scene taht they wont rather show it...yh i finally bothered with using more pix...im glad u like em also credit goes to Vinisha who provides me with pix

@spanditathank u...im flattered...omg...im glad Visvaas makes ur day...there u go in todays part i added a dharam pic 😳

@ ekta-thanks

@ archana-thx yh defo there is a contrast between both couples

@snowprincessthanks...i guess Visvaas is addictive 😆 😳

Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago

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