Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 29

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Whn are u updating part 35 Shona.. me waiting 😛

im just doing the update

Lovely story Shona. Keep it up.me waiting for the next part.

that was fantastic shona loved this part waiting for next part thanx.


hiri

lovely par shona! 👏 👏 👏
it was a bit short or is it me?? 😕 😆
veer and wishwa fighting.. again
omg and this sandhiya, what a moment for come 😆
loved dharam and sia part, very cute 😳
i agree with others members in that veer has to get jealous
keep, posting and writing 👏
just waiting for the next part

ok without further ado...heres the next part

the three Rajkumari's are waiting in the ballroom for Ambika maa

Ambika maa enters all three take her blessings

AM: aaj hum apko nritya sikhane ja rahe hai...ye kala mein apko bohat mehnat karni padehge aur jitni mehnat karenge utna he phal milehga...toh chaliye ab shuru karte hai

She teaches them a few simple steps and asks them to copy
Sia managed to do the steps well and Sandhiya was absolutely brillient

Vishva on the other hand was finding this exceptionally difficult to get her head around the movements...she had never done anything like this before...


after and hour or so later the girls were given a break

the boys on the otherhand had just finished one of their pareeksha's(their Guruji was feeling much better now)
the pareeksha was a 5 km long obstical course which had taken all the energy out of them...what was more was that from now on everyday they wud have to do a small but just as tough course in the morning...the boys were given they rest of teh day off

DV were taking

Veer: ahh..paata nahin ye rajkumariyan itna shoor kyun macha rahi hai

Dharam: arre haan acha unki nriyat siksha shuru hone wali hai

Veer: accha...tab toh badah maza ayega

Dharam: kya

Veer: tum bas dekhte jao

Sia n Vishva were going towards the kitchen to grab a bite when Veer sees this from where he is standing and remarks loudly

Veer: Dharam: tumhe kya lagta hai...Rajkumariyon accha nritya karna chahiya ya nahin?

Dharam: kyun timhe kya lagta hai

Veer gets even louder

Veer: mujhe lagta hai ke har rajkumari ko accha nritya ana he chahiye

Vishva heres this and recalls how Sandhiya is much better than her

on thinking about Veer getting closer to sandhiya Vishva gets scared....she thinks to herself

Vishva: mein usse uske tareeke se sikhaungi



she sees agni and has a plan...Agni on the otherhand sees vishva n think line marne ka waqt sahi hai n is about to move towards her

she lets out a scream in pain

Vishva: ahhh

and she falls to the floor

Agni seeing this runs upto her

Veer sees this

Agni: arre Rajkumari Vishva...ap teekh toh hai

Vishva: nahin...woh humare pehr mein mooch ahgayi...hum andar kaise jayenge

Agni thinks for a second...

Agni: mein apki madat kar deta hoon

he picks her up and is carrying her inside

Veer was looking at all this feeling very annoyed and jealous...he wanted to shout at agni for getting close to Vishva

Veer saw agni put Vishva down

Agni: accha Rajkumari Vishva

Vishva: sirf Vishva kaho...apna lagta hai

Agni looks delighted



Veer looks extremely angry at her behaviour...and he recalls himself flirting with Sandhiya

The late afternoon dance session commenced without Vishva taking part as she was supposedly injured...once Sia n Sandhiya are dismissed AM comes up to Vishva

AM: hum jante hai ke app nritya mein mahir nahin hai par aaj subha apki lagan aur mehnat dekh kar humme pura yakeen hai ap zaroor ye sikh lengi...aur ek baat yaad rakhiye ga...woh jo harane ke liye khelta hai woh hamesha haar jata hai par woh jo jeet ne ke liye khel ta hai woh hamesha jeeta hai....

Vishva thinks about it and says

Vishva: hum Sandhiya ko harane nahin balke Veer ko jeetne ke liye...nritya sikhenge

Later that night when everyone was asleep Vishva was alone learning all the steps AM had taught them...she wasnt having much luck

Veer on the other hand looked depress and thought about his behavious lately and had decided that he shud stop behaving like this with Vishva and talk to her



Veer goes to her gurukul where he saw her trying to dance...he realised just how much she was doing for him...he went over to her

Veer: Vishva...Vishva mujhe..mujhe maaf kardo woh kal aur aaj mera jo badtaw tha...uske liye

Vishva: wah..Rajkumar Veer ne aaj kisi se maafi bhi mangi...

Veer: hmm...ab tumhare pehr kaisa hai?

Vishva: woh zarasal...hum natak kar rahe teh...tumhe ye ehssas de lane ke liye ke tum

Veer: galat hoon...Vishva...

Vishva: Veer hum tumse is waqt shaadi nahin karna chahte...kyunki...veer hum shaadi se pehle...tumse is tara chori chupke milna chahte hai...jis tara oos bar tumhare kamre mein aye teh

Veer: mujhe ye baat kyun pehle samaj mein ayi...Vishva waise tum yahan kya kar rahi thi

Vishva blushes

Vishva: woh..hum nritya ka abhiyaas kar rahe teh

Veer: sirf isliye kyunki meine kaha

Vishva kind of blushes

Veer: mein tumhe sikha ta hoon

He slowly talks right close to her and looks into her eys...he walks around her and is behind her...he shows her the movement by taking her hand and demonstrates where it shud be...

This goes on for a while...Veer is standing behind Vishva with his hands on her waist...he inhales teh sweet smell of her hair...She turns...they are literally millimetres away from one another...



Vishva: veer....

Veer: shhhhhh

he kisses her gently on her lips

Precap:

Nivi is tlking to Arya abt Veer n Vishva's marriage...Arya thinks its a gd idea n send msg to Samar

thx jigs b n hiri

@ archana-thank u
yh i think that was short
yh sandy choose wrong time to enter
yep DS part was cute 😳
i want wanna make veer too jealous...just enough so he realises his mistake

thanks agen for liking my work...hope u like the latest part

that was soooooooooooooooooo romantic thanx


hiri

wooooooooow 😳 all i can say is sigh.. 😳 this was sooo sweet... and it was beautiful all the scenes.. 😳 i am so happy that you have said that you are going to show their marriage.. lagta hai shona.. tumhaare ideas se hi copy kar rahe hain as in the actual serial also they are going to show DV SS in gurukul soon it seems.. 😳

awww shona this part was really gud... 👏
it was full of romance 😳 n jealousy 😆
VEER n dharam teasing da gals...was naughty.. 😆 😆 😆
hw did vishwa bear dat..agni 🤢 🤢 😆
and VEER n vishwa's part was really...☺️
and the precap..was gud
finally nivi talks to arya and he agreed to send ss a sandesh...yayy...!!! 🥳


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

WOW!!!!.... 👏 All I can say.... AWESOME