Samyukta 1&2-Dharam and Veer-Story so far - Page 3

Originally posted by: lashy

hee hee personally i wouldnt copy it if it was my own.. i was just writing a brief history-intro of the story that i am setting out to write... and that based on plugging the leaking holes left by the sagars -

so yes they decided to base the history of their story on moses and the testament.. 😆 i just hope to |Lord we dont end up seeing RT in baba waala dresses a stick and parting the seas to save the shramiks..

(P.S. I am not even trying to mock the great saint Moses😳... just that that story wouldnt suit DV)

Hahah! I totally get the non-Moses look for RT, it is very un appropriate..😳😆😆..Once Again..beautifully written! 😛

Technically Shraddy........ it was clear, well-thought out and grammatically and syntactically correct 😳 👏

Abstractically, it was capable of persuading us to feel in a certain way about the characters and situations. ⭐️

It is one thing to share your views about a situation and totally another to pen down a script that makes readers feel the way you do.
You have so effortlesly given us( the readers ) the experience why 'Shramiks' caste is now at the receiving end and also the transition to this end.

👏 👏 👏

This is called the correct use of ur brain! 😆

Another blast Shraddha 😃,

Very very very beautifully written😊 👏Short and sweet and covers all the points, answers all the queries which me, Kai and many tried to answer😆

Hmmmmm Who is bhalla?? ur creation??😉 This was like reading a novel by well-settled and experienced writer 👍🏼 keep updating, loved it.😛

Haila!! dii.... 😲 i'm shocked after reading this 😲
seriously Outstanding WRitten by you 😳 😳
Just speechless wow amazing 👏

Thanx rainii and real sanyogita.. 😊

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Technically Shraddy........ it was clear, well-thought out and grammatically and syntactically correct 😳 👏

Abstractically, it was capable of persuading us to feel in a certain way about the characters and situations. ⭐️

It is one thing to share your views about a situation and totally another to pen down a script that makes readers feel the way you do.
You have so effortlesly given us( the readers ) the experience why 'Shramiks' caste is now at the receiving end and also the transition to this end.

👏 👏 👏

minnoooo omg thank you so much for such detailed analysis 😆 no seriously speaking it so beautiful to see genuine appreciation with thought put into it.. love you hun 😳

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Hmmmmm Who is bhalla?? ur creation??😉 This was like reading a novel by well-settled and experienced writer 👍🏼 keep updating, loved it.😛

awww yes.. i still find it odd that they both live in a bubble with no contemporaries.. atleast Dharam and Veer have each other Agni has no one else other than himself and his dad 😕

Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

Haila!! dii.... 😲 i'm shocked after reading this 😲
seriously Outstanding WRitten by you 😳 😳 Just speechless wow amazing 👏

thanks ishooo 😳

needless to say...it was brilliant!!!
superbb...fantastic...all the accepts beautifully covered...in such a short n simple way!!! 😃
U know wat..seriosuly Lashy...just becum DV's permanant
acrit writer...realli...u will rock!!!
n den go to Baroda...n eheem..ehhemm..kick..."u-know-whom" out!!! 😉

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
absolutely amazing........ 👏 👏 👏
eagerly waitin for the next part....... 😊

thanx aashi.😳..kick someone out ahem ahem who could that be 😛

thanks kunaatanya 😊

Originally posted by: arshitgupta

Why did u write like this???........... ..........
Ur last part was awesome.........but this 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
I cant believe a person who wrote last part so beautifully can write like this!!!! 😵 😵 😵 🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 ....................ok.... i hv put figure on my lips.........
I really feel sad last part coz

you bad bad bad bad bad boy............ 😆 haan seriously daraa diya yaar tumne.. mujhe... 😆 Hai Raam is ladke ka kyaa karoon