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Posted: 17 years ago

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur the best 👏 i dont have words to tell how gret ur with pen....u rock!!!!!!!!!!!

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Vinisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Wow Lashy Di....I haVnt Read Samyukta before this...reading it for the first time..😛...and found the very first part relli impressive! 👏

The way yew started it, the beginning of the ff, its intro and explaining it was simply great...

Wow dV are jus superb..Lolz VEER is always mischievous...😆....how chweet ! 😳

I Just loved the way yEw referred Dharam as Lord Rama and VEER as Lord Krishna...😛....Owesum...Truully VEER's Character is lyk dat Only...''Natkhat''...😆...MuaaH Lashy di..🤗

wO..😃...dV raciN' and even VEERA agreed to go back...😆....this one's shockiN as VEER is stubbrn n hardly listens to anyone..😆...Phew he agreed!😃

Whoa! what a description...👏....while Dharam ws going towards the three ruffians n da gal..😊
Omg...😲....Dharam Injured...😲....those ruffians were relli disgusting..😡

Wah wah....VEER. is Olways der on d tym.......what an entry...👏....Owesum..😃...Loved the way u described the fight...Wo VEER's anger...😳....bt still wida humour! 😉 One can easily imagine the situation wid ur narration...👏

Awww.....VEER is soOo sweeeettt....😃....He loosened d ropes, got water frm d lake n hugged her..😳 And, nt only this even gave her his robe and wrapped her..aww shO cariN' 😍...Great ! 😛

wO...Loved this One when VEER goes to look at Dharam's wound and Dharam starts tying the cloth on VEER's injured hand instead......Just One para, and it shows clearly how much dey love each other...Superb!! 👏
Lashy di yEw relli describe the situation very well...👏

Lolz...Dharam sayin to VEER dat his wound will get septic and he always wanna show off..😆...and Lol..😆 VEER is always ready wid sum great replies..😆...He want Dharam to thank Him..😉😆

Aww Evn Dharam is taking care of the l'll gal..😊...ahh and d gal is relli afraid of wateva happened..

Lolz...Truly, the gurl is right....Surely, dV shud be the king Of Evry Kingdm..😆😉😃

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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