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Aww... look at Mahadev! SO sad and forlorn!

Narayan Narayan..!! *naradmuni style* 😆

Very nice..Arunita.. 😊

thanks rajsri , arijit , surya , sia , diyadi and tina

Diyadi its itself challenging to take up this storyline because in this particular tale Mahadev is shown in poor light

so my greatest challenge is to write a story..

without changing a word of basic storyline

without letting anyone of Shiva , Parvati or Vishnu even Lakshmi down
and without hurting anyone's belief

without changing the nature of any mythological character

showing the glory of my aradhyaa Devi Shakti

making the story enjoyable to readers
hence adding imagination but within limit which will enhance my story but won't change a word from scripture

hope my Ma Durga and Ma Saraswati will help me to maintain above condition and yet win the challenge

Wow aru just read couple of updates together and u have touched on harihara whom we know are very close to your heart and something u wanted to always express. This is wonderful. ❤️

The Hari Hara interaction Will look awesome on screen with this cast.
Likevin Kk..we can still imagine though...

it is simply wonderful...😃

Originally posted by: FairyDreams

"My lord I don't have words to apologize you"...Narayan painfully glared at Mahadev's almost uncovered figure..
"I am ready to face every punishment for whatever happened" lord continued.

" No Narayan why will i held you responsible , when we both know that whatever is happening is pre-destined , part of the Leela of Almighty Force? rather i should thank you for leading to create the opportunity to prove my unattachment in true sense, I realized now to be called as Anasakta i have to let go every single object that was with me whether its my trident or my tiger skin, i possess absolutely nothing."
but Mahadev's words seemed to Narayana not coming from his heart

"Even after so many years Mahadev tends to forget that he is not hermit any more..Anasakta Shiva is Asakata to Asakti herself" thinks Vishnu..

"Narayan , my disturbed mind got calmed with your divine glance , now i can peacefully concentrate on my meditation"...grinned Shiva

Narayan hopelessly shook his head observing Bholenath's never changing innocence..

"but My Lord what about my disturbed state of mind?how can I stay in peace until i can see my Mahadev in his familiar form?" eclaimed Narayan grabbing Mahadev's elbow firmly, prohibiting him from taking seat for meditation..

"Narayan you are forgetting I have lost all that belongs to mine to your sister"..Mahadev's sadness was not suppressed any more

"then you must win those back Mahadev"..Narayan's lips parted with a mischievous grin

"No Narayan , if i wish to play dice for wining back what i lost it will prove my sense of possessions and my philosophy of Anasakti doesn't allow me to claim anything as mine no matter even if I am holding those for eternity"..sighed Mahadev

"Mahadev you are forgetting you possess the possession herself, my sister Parvati" .Narayan didnt brought his thought to his tongue because it was not right time to indulge into the debate regarding asakti and anasakti.he had to act in some other way..

"Hari desires to see his Hara in his familiar attire can Hara stay without fulfilling his Hari's wish?"..Narayan sounded emotional

"Narayana but"..Mahadev was unable to find immediate response to Narayana's emotional blackmail

"My lord. if you have decided to take solitude for eternity , i have also decided not to go back to Vaikunth until you agree to return back on Kailash and play dice again , no matter if i have to do penance for that for eons i will keep waiting for you here"..Narayan's word broke Mahadev's all effort to continue his solitude..

"how can Hara disobey Hari's words?? your wish will be fulfilled my lord..but .."paused Mahadev

"but what??" asked Narayan

"there is no denial to the fact that Parvati is better in dice although i introduced the game to her , winning over her that too continuously..."
Mahadev left his sentence unfinished with a tensed tone

Narayan's shining deep eyes were flashed into a mischievous expression. He stretched his palm and closed his eyes.in a moment or two something appeared on his palm with flashing light , Vishnu took Shiva's palm and placed the object there.. an astonished Shiva found a dice on his palm..

"Mahadev my all good wishes for you are stored in this dice , I want you to play the game with this dice only , will you keep my words my lord?

Narayan gazed straightly at Mahadev's eyes..a silent message was conveyed between two supreme souls, the calm smirk again adorned Mahadev's divine face..

"as you wish Narayana" uttered Shiva

disappeared Vishnu by getting his job of convincing Shiva done. Mahadev left for Kailash to continue the next step of divine Leela..

only we could see morabh like that...😭

This can be very easily adapted on screen. Such a wonderful read. Loving it aru. 😛

Wow! Superb narrative!! But I hate these pauses...eagerly waiting forr the next update!!