I am her lover you are God...Shiv and Sati

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"Where have you been all this time?" His soothing voice resonated in the forest sitting in his meditative posture with the moonlight flooding his massive back as it peeped through the giant oak tree under which he sat. His eyes were fixed on the ground sadness had blackened his face
"i had gone to live" came the spiteful answer from his replica, a massive figure leaning on the distant tree with a smiling face. "Tomorrow i am leaving for kailaash with Nandi today we have been requested to halt at this place as guests of Raja Himavant... i have decided to abandon this worldly enatanglements by setting myself to the path of deep meditation i can renounce moha maya of this world" his other half questioned " are you trying to stop me from being who i am Mahadev?" mockery was evident in the other voice "then let me remind you something you are God i am her lover i am a part of you but not under your control" Mahadev just stared at his alter ego who wanted to be separated from him wasn't this he always wanted? Hadn't he repressed the lover in him for so long? Didn't he stop himself from accepting Her for so long? " infact you are my slave at times remember how i dragged you to see her at her palace? how i made you rush to her in times of danger,
i should have never let her go but i listened to you and left everything to destiny, you might be trikaldarshi but i could have bend the road of destiny by stopping her" silence reigned supreme for the time being only the gush of the winds colliding with mammoth trees could be heard...the weather was turbulent and so was his feelings but the yogi Mahadev had found solace on the path of renunciation while the lover Shiv had embarked the journey of recreating the past through imagination but their grief was the same the deep yearning for the same doe eyed princess into the deepest caverns of their divine souls both could give the world to see her warm smile again and to sing those tunes which could move her feet to the moment of divine rapture presenting itself into one of her sensuously divne dance form.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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divine...makes me cry...miss sati...feel so bad for mahadev...His sadness breaking my heart ...
you seem so close to him to be able to write so beautifully ...god bless you my dear!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur the best writer dear...u express his pain so wounderful...Shiv n Sati's love story is extraordinary epic n u explain it so divine...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Superb, awesome, i hav no words to express ...ur writings directly touches our hearts and soul... realy appreciate ur work... god bless u...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great job yarr.really i must say u expressed mahadev's feeling so nicely and it mad me sad remembered dat scene wen sati was just gonna burn herself and mahadev's other part comes and fights wid him and ask to stop sati it really bought tears.
Nicely written:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ana212

divine...makes me cry...miss sati...feel so bad for mahadev...His sadness breaking my heart ...

you seem so close to him to be able to write so beautifully ...god bless you my dear!!

๐Ÿ˜ญ i am weeping with joy dear this is the best compliment i have ever received Om Nama Shiva hope ur words are true and i am close to Mahadev for my sincere prayer to him right now is to bring back Mouni as Ma Parvati...thank you dear friend thank u with all my heart๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur the best writer dear...u express his pain so wounderful...Shiv n Sati's love story is extraordinary epic n u explain it so divine...๐Ÿ‘
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thank u so much for ur appreciating words it means the world to me and i am not a good writer dear just a great Bhakt of Ma Durga and Shivji and of course a great fan of Mohit Mouni...now i am charged up to write more after hearing such kind words from u dear friends
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deboleena.manna

ur the best writer dear...u express his pain so wounderful...Shiv n Sati's love story is extraordinary epic n u explain it so divine...๐Ÿ‘

thank u dear friend for such kind words i am no great writer just a bhakt of Mata and Shivji it's u guys who are great readers who accept such average writings like mine...now i am charged to write more as i have ur appreciation...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukhi...

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Superb, awesome, i hav no words to express ...ur writings directly touches our hearts and soul... realy appreciate ur work... god bless u...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

thank u dear and ur words of kindness touches my heart and soul god bless u too my friend hope to write more..๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: samana17

I am speechless, that's all I can say right now. Oh..my god, its so beautiful. U just take writing to a new level. As always Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

thank u sis for loving it and for ur kind appreciation...in b/w how did u find the season finale of Tvd rocking na? do reply

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