dedicated to shiv and sati - pls see it a poem

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am following my guru reshu's footsteps so forgive me ..i am just trying out writing this poems
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they split for the creation
but now the creation splits them up
daksh doesn't understand that shiv and sati have been together
even before the beginning of time infact they will together forever and ever
he thinks he has won over shiv
but doesnt he know in shiv's heart does sati live
why does sati cry
this time of separation will too pass by
soon she will be with shiv on kailash .holy and high
up in the mountain seated near him almost touching the heavenly sky
daksh doesnt realise that he is living a lie
if sati had to see mahadev crying in the samadhi remembering their separation
she will run away to be with shiv away from daksh's society made of his administration
sati is the essence of devi shakti she is adi shakti herself .made only for mahadev
but maybe she wouldnt understand him so easily..he is mystic and a puzzle himself
may be thats why everyone calls him devo ke dev mahadev !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Diya 🤗am ur guru reshu!!!🤣 Just kidding dear... 😉owh thank u... but i did nothin girl u did it by urself sweety👍🏼. If i can motiviate u and other members then meri jeevan safal hogayi and thank god😍. Its such a good poem that came straight through ur hart😉. I really like it 😊. Keep writing more dear.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls guys dont tell me its that bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kajooo this is Beautiful...Resh-Wa gal ur inspiring ppl...Great away to go yaar..u both ROCK!!⭐️⭐️



@ Poem its Sooo profound in its sheer feel 👏

👏The whole journey of Mahadev n devi Sati in a gist...simply superb pal❤️ ed it to the core!

Keep writing such lovely n straight from the heart poems👏

Aur koi hai jis main HIDDEN Talent chupa hai DKDMians Bahar aajaoo😆

Regards
Sia

Edited by Killer_Shark - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb poem diya...👏👏
beautifully written...👍🏼dre are so many talented and gifted people out here in this forum...😊
aur ek hum hai...weneva i try to write a poem...it ends up being a story...😒😆
keep up the gud work dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Killer_Shark



Kajooo this is Beautiful...Resh-Wa gal ur inspiring ppl...Great away to go yaar..u both ROCK!!⭐️⭐️



@ Poem its Sooo profound in its sheer feel 👏

👏The whole journey of Mahadev n devi Sati in a gist...simply superb pal❤️ ed it to the core!

Keep writing such lovely n straight from the heart poems👏

Aur koi hai jis main HIDDEN Talent chupa hai DKDMians Bahar aajaoo😆

Regards
Sia


thankyouuu thankyou so much you made my day and three cheers for reshama
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rythmdivine

superb poem diya...👏👏
beautifully written...👍🏼dre are so many talented and gifted people out here in this forum...😊
aur ek hum hai...weneva i try to write a poem...it ends up being a story...😒😆
keep up the gud work dear...😊


pls dont say that your posts are so awesome ...and this peom ending up into a story ..it happens to me 99 percent times when i write ..and worse my poems turn to be comedy half the time this is the only one which is good ..thankyou so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: koyal-kajal

pls guys dont tell me its that bad

No dear its very good👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ya nice lines ...

ur fascinating dear ...😆...
humorous , poetic , friendly and lovable person .😳...

ur writings and poem's are super 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankyou guruma 😆 lol ,,,,,,,,...

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