ma first poem ahem ahem

.Reshama.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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This is my first short English poem in English of Shivji and Sati.😍

Forgive me for my weak English.😳

There are 2 divine persons in such pain. In their mind an hart exist a lot of pain. They have sacrefised themselves for mankind. Why are the others so unkind.Shivji and Sati(Shakti) loved eachother form the start. Nobody is gonna tear their love apart.In the end they gonna be together. Will this love union be forever??

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Asmita

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hey reshu good one

m adding it in media gallery 😊

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.Reshama.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --asmita--
hey reshu good one
m adding it in media gallery 😊

thanks u sweety...

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sia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Resh-Waa..that poem is Divine...pure ...LOvelyyy
Gal ur suppa talented.👏👏..so post it on Twitter lets see what would be Mohit-wa's Pratikriyaa😆

Keep it up dear...Write more
Loved it very much!!!⭐️

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sohini

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Its a very cute and good one dear keep it up would love to read more😊

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A.hemalatha.kini

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Lovely Reshu That was such a sweet & earnest try.👏.God Bless ..Keep doing such efforts..it will give you lot of happiness being creative..!!👍🏼

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pooji2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Resh,

Great job!!!👍🏼

A sincere effort!!!!

Thanks dearie🤗

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koyal-kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i love this poem so much .saari situation kitne ache se capture kar li...roona shuru kar dia yaar ..humari insaani duniya kitni mean hai .they always tear true love apart and shiv shakti are the first example in the list then comes heer ranjha etc etc and p.s. i will never include romeo juliet in the list ..it was plain teen infactuation ..juliet is 14 and romeo 16 ...coming back to poem

I LOVE UR POEM ...AM YOUR FAN ...

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

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Sweet24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Reshama.
This is my first short English poem in English of Shivji and Sati.😍
Forgive me for my weak English.😳

There are 2 divine persons in such pain. In their mind an hart exist a lot of pain. They have sacrefised themselves for mankind. Why are the others so unkind.Shivji and Sati(Shakti) loved eachother form the start. Nobody is gonna tear their love apart.In the end they gonna be together. Will this love union be forever??

nice dr

dont worry as said mahadev ki mahima aparampar hai.!

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