The Hearts Want What It Wants ch 1 on pg 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haye everyone ...

#The_Heart_Want_What_It_Wants
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I didn't realize that I...I...I feeling so confident feeling so great about myself and then it just be completely shattered by one thing by something so stupid ... (she start sobbing) but then you make me feel crazy you make me feel like it's my fault I WAS IN PAIN... you breaking me down Every single time ... ( she slowly up her head glaring at his chocolaty brown eyes ) you break my heart you break my soul and then one day you left ME...after a few months i got pregnant ... but you least bother to know that i"m alive or not and now you came back after 5 years want me to get married with you why should i marry you ? (she shouts on him) you never want me you never love me then why should i marry you ?
He smirked at her...she looked at him with hated look... he looked at her big brown eyes no matter what she always surprised him with her attitude he start coming close to her and she taking back steps suddenly her glares down automatically he smirking at her reaction few minutes ago she was yelling at him and now look at her she didn't said a single word in a swift moment she pinned on the wall she can feel his breath on her lips his nearness give her goosebumps on her whole body what so ever she was angry on him or not she can't deny this fact he always affect on her body he glued at her soft pink lips you know Wify (he take her hair behind her ears softly who was resting on her chicks ) and then chucked and said oh I'm sorry EX Wify she look upward a single drop came out in her eyes some where he knows he was hurting her but this is the only way he get her back ...
kritz 😳😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting start ...so this is a fight between love and hatred
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept
I want like if she will forgive that jerk & go back to his life again
After so much pain
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you 😳😳
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thank you 😳😳
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thank you i'm glad you like my concept 😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

interesting start ...so this is a fight between love and hatred

not fight between love or hate this is something else thanks for gain interest in my story 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sure i will 😳😳
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Nice concept

I want like if she will forgive that jerk & go back to his life again
After so much pain
Continue plz

thank you sweetiee well i'M GLAD you're the first person who said this about him even i don't like if she forgive him ... and get back with him ... thank you for the comment i'm sure you like my first chapter ..because i know you always like my stories rather then its good or bad n that's the reason i love you so much 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandjanarai

nice concept. update soon

thank you so much i'm glad you like my concept sure i'll update sure or maybe i'm updating tonight or tomorrow 😳😳

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