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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sweetmishthi



Sahi bat hain yar even in learning to love royals my like and comments are I can understand that after writing such a long chappy and spending 1 hour ais very disheartenning

Par atleast jitne padh rahe unke liye toh likho. . I do.


And people if u r reading our update and if U LIKE it pls hit like button and comment not just good or nice a writer feels encouraged when people point s out what they liked or even didn't liked pls dhyan rakho yar
Or else let's all become silent readers. What's say.


Arre Siso Aap Log Churo Mere Updates Check Karho Mahine Main Jab Jab Time Milta Hai I Write Aur Update Karne Keh Liye I Need Atleast 2 to 3 Hrs... Phr Response...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha


Arre Siso Aap Log Churo Mere Updates Check Karho Mahine Main Jab Jab Time Milta Hai I Write Aur Update Karne Keh Liye I Need Atleast 2 to 3 Hrs... Phr Response...

I know and I undersstand. Chal tere liye I'll update. Kal raat ek achi si update karungi and it'll be long too šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha



Arre Siso Aap Log Churo Mere Updates Check Karho Mahine Main Jab Jab Time Milta Hai I Write Aur Update Karne Keh Liye I Need Atleast 2 to 3 Hrs... Phr Response...



I agree twinkle that's why I am saying it's really discouraging.
Specially when reads increase so much then why not likes and comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityatandon

I know and I undersstand. Chal tere liye I'll update. Kal raat ek achi si update karungi and it'll be long too šŸ˜‰


OMG... SACHIII... IM SO EXCITED.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmishthi



I agree twinkle that's why I am saying it's really discouraging.
Specially when reads increase so much then why not likes and comments



Hmmm... But Siso Yeah Bhii Toh Check Karho Humara Forum Silent Sa Hogaya... šŸ˜”
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ana..

Interesting start!

Thanks 😊
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Updating in a few hours
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CHAPTER 1

This post is specially for Alisha who wanted me to update the story really bad. I hope it's big enough šŸ˜‰.

A few hours earlier.

In Uday's room.

Giriraj: Tum usse pyaar karte ho na.

Uday smiles shyly and says

Uday: Kisse dad?

Giri: Wahi jiske sath tum bachpan mein ghar ghar khela karte the.

Uday: Aap bhi na

Giri: Humse nazre mat churao Uday. Hum sab jante hai. Bolo, tum shaadi karna chahte ho na usse?

Uday nods shyly

Giri gets very happy and says

Uday: Hum abhi maa saheb ko bata ke aate hai.

Giri goes downstairs and Uday follows

Giri: Maa Saheb Uday ne shaadi karne ke liye haan kardi hai.

Mrinalini comes forward and caresses Uday's cheek.

Mrinalini: Sach Uday. Aaj aapne humein bahut khush kardia. Sun rahi hai na aap Ragini.

Ragini blushes.

Mrinalini: Arre aap toh sharma gayi. Vasundhara, Komal jaiye kuch meetha laiye aapke bachcho ki shadi tai ho gayi hai

Just as Dadi saheb takes Ragini's name, Uday's face drops.

Uday: Par dadisaheb hum toh

Mrinalini: Kya hua beta aap kya? Dekhiye aapne sabko kitna khush kar dia hai.

Suddenly Manyata and Ravi come.

Brijraj: Arre aaiye aaiye aap dono bhi aaiye.

Ravi: Kya baat hai sab bade khush lag rahe hai

Mrinalini: Arre khushi ki toh baat hai. Uday aur Ragini ki shadi tai ho gayi hai.

Uday: Par dadi saheb hum Manyata (gets cut)

Mrinalini: Arre haan humne Manyata se toh pucha hi nahi. Beta aap khush hai na apne dosto ke liye.

Manyata looks at Uday.
He gives her a look which says Tell-her.
She just nods in a yes.

And in that moment Mrinalini did exactly what she was known for. She knew she had played the right cards. There was only two ways she could get Uday to agree for the marriage. One, if Manyata goes against him and two, he's emotionally blackmailed.

Although she knew this wasn't the end. Uday would still want to talk to her and clear out things. But she'll deal with it.

After everybody was finished with the well wishing and future planning Uday went to Mrinalini's room

Uday: Dadi saheb hum yeh shaadi nahi karna chahte.

Mrinalini: Kyu beta? Ragini aapki bachpan ki dost hai, aapko janti hai, aapko samajhti hai aur woh ek bahut achi ladki hai. Woh is ghar ke liiye perfect bahu hai.

Uday: Wahi toh baat hai. Woh perfect bahu hai is ghar ke liye lekin woh hamare liye perffect nahi hai.

Mrinalini: Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai. Aap hi not Giriraj se kaha na ki aap unse pyaar karte hai.

Uday: Dadi saheb yeh aap bhi janti hai ki hum kisse pyaar karte hai.

Mrinalini calls a servant.

Mrinalini: Jaiye aur Manyata ko bula ke laiye.

Manyata comes.

Manyata: Ji dadi saheb aapne humein bulaya

Mrinalini: Beta hum aap se kuch puchna chahte hai.

Manyata: Ji

Mrinalini: Kya aapko Uday aur ragini ke is rishte se koi aitraaz hai?

Manyata: Yeh aap kya keh rhi hai dadi saheb humein kyu aitraz hoga.

Mrinalini: Theek hai. Aap jaa sakti hai.

Manyata leaves.

Mrinalini: Humein lagta hai aapko apna jawaab mil gaya hoga Uday.

Uday starts to leave when dadi saheb says

Mrinalini: Uday beta hum hamesha aapka bhala hi sochenge aur
chahenge. Aur hum jante hai ki aap bhi hamesha apne parivar ka acha hi chahenge.

Uday knew what she meant.

After Uday leaves Mrinalini knew she had aimed the dart just right.

As soon as Uday sees Manyata is alone he pulls her by her arm and takes her to his room.

Present

Uday: Woh hum tumhe waqt aane par bataenge. Abhi tum jao aur apni pyaari dost ki khushiya baton

Manyata: Uday please aisa bartav mat karo.

Uday: Manyata just leave.

Manyata leaves. She was scared, really really scared. Not because of what Uday will ask her to do but because she had never seen Uday like this. Atleast not with her.

Manyata goes to Ragini's room and as soon as she gets in Ragini hugs her tightly and is super happy.

Ragini: Manyata Manyata Manyata. Tu nahi janti aaj main kitni khush hun. Uday ne shadi ke liye haan karke mujhe duuniya ki sabse badi khushi di hai. Tu toh janti hai na ki main bachpan se hi usse bahut pyaar karti thi.

Manyata: Haan janti hun.

Ragini: Par ek baat kahu

Manyata: Hmm

Ragini: Mujhe na pata nahi kyu hamesha lagta tha ki tum aur Uday... I mean

Manyata: Ki hum ek doosre ko pasand karte hai?

Ragini: Haan

Suddenly Uday opens the door

Uday: Kyunki aisa hi hai.

Uday takes Manyata's hand and says

Uday: Hum aur Manyata ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai lekin tum hamare beech mein aa gayi.

Both Manyata and Ragini look at Uday with a serious expression.

Uday: Kya hua beauties? Hum toh sirf mazak kar rhe the.

He then goes and sits extremely close to ragini.

Ragini: Waise tum yaha kaise?

Uday puts a strand of hair behind her ear and says

Uday: Kyu ab humein apni honi wali biwi se milne ke liye bhi reason ki zaroorat padegi.

At the mention of 'hone wali biwi' Ragini blushes.

At that moment Manyata remember how Uday used to put the strand of her hair behind her ear in school when she had her hands in paint.

Uday: Waise ek kaam toh tha. Humare sath aaj raat party mein chalogi?

Ragini: Party? Kaunsi party?

Uday: Arre tumhe invitation nahi mila. Vikram ki party.

Ragini: Oh haan. Woh aaj hai?

Uday: Yes

Ragini: Of course Uday. Manyata tum bhi chalo na hamare sath.

Manyata: Main

Ragini: Haan please. Uday tum bolo na.

Uday: Haan Manyata tum bhi cholo.

Uday gets up and says

Uday: Then I'll pick you guys up at 7.

Uday turns to go but then stops and turns around

Uday: Jaan I'll send a dress. Wahi pehenke aana please.

Ragini nods with a blush.

Hope you guys liked it.
Next update after 10 likes.
Send me a buddy request if you want PMs

P.S. You guys must be thinking that I haven't updated the CS and I'm directly updating the first chapter. I have actually planned not to give away the characters and let them unfold the way the story goes. But of course if there will be any confusion which is not sorted out even after the first few chapters then I'll consider writing the CS.

Also I write another story. If you wanna check out, the link's here http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3226209
Edited by nityatandon - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyyy Sis I Just Read The Story.. And At First Aap Ne Toh Sad Hi Kardiya. Pehle Hi Chapter Main DS Ko Evil Bana Diya.. šŸ˜” 😔
Bechari Manyata Phas Gayiii.. Aur I Know Uday Is Hurt He Wanted To Show Her.. To Make Her Jealous And Make Her Feel That What She Wanted Is Wrong. But Then Uday Being Rude To Manyata Making Her Jealous I Like It But Then Sis I'm Worried For Manyata.. I Wished I Wished If Uday Get To Knew DS Is All Doing. And U Know Sis Reading First Chapter My Mind Is Showing Me Flashes Of Film Mujhse Dosti Karhogi.. Where Hrithik Marrying Kareena And Coming Close To Her So That He Could Make Her Jealous And Hurt.. But At The End Everything Was Fine As It Was Suppose To Be.. 😊
So Sis Plzzz Don't Apart ManVeer For Long Time. And Make Ragini Realize That Uday Doesnt Love Her.. And He Only Agrees So That He Could Show Manyata...
And Anyways Thank U Sis For Lovely Chapter.. 😊
And Post Next Part Soon.. 😊
But Siso Do Give Us Character Sketch.. 😊
And Update Next Part Soon ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whooah nice chap yar . I hope manyata have better reason not being mahan just for her friend to hurt our UDAY.

Would love to see jealous UDAY

Manyata better be tigress to handle evil like dadi.

Loved epi . hope manyata mein jaldi akal a jaye.

Ragini seems ummm I don't know I never like third angle characters. Lol

Keep updating.:-)

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