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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
I am Nitya
And I read all the parts of your story
They are amazing
It same yet different
I really like the story
And Nishu is so cute
I wonder what will happen next between Monia and Uday
And when will Uday find out about Monia being Manyata
Also without any offence, I'd like to say that the likes and comments are decreasing not because people are not satisfied with your writing but because the no. of people on the form are decreasing
Update soon
And please add me to your PM list.
P.S. I write a story too, if you wanna check it out.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hi

I am Nitya
And I read all the parts of your story
They are amazing
It same yet different
I really like the story
And Nishu is so cute
I wonder what will happen next between Monia and Uday
And when will Uday find out about Monia being Manyata
Also without any offence, I'd like to say that the likes and comments are decreasing not because people are not satisfied with your writing but because the no. of people on the form are decreasing
Update soon
And please add me to your PM list.
P.S. I write a story too, if you wanna check it out.




Hi nitya tnx for reading my work and liking it too yeah bohot kuch qlag hone wala hain bas ek bar meri exams khatam ho jaye phir har do din mein ek update chipka dongi . par Phil hal mera department meri creativity PE kundali Mar ke baitha so I visit this forum just onnce ya twice a week .
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Posted: 9 years ago


It's will be up by Tom. Want a PM ? If yes pls add me to ur buddy list it will be easy for me
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Chapter 5

Uday and moniya followed 8 year old manav in side the cabin where nishu was trying tob switch on the T.v with a A.C remote
" Tumahara T.V bigad gaya hai prince charming dekho isko dabane par bhi scobby doo nahin ata" she showed that A.C remote to uday .
Uday just smiled at her antics when moniya took her in her lap and took that remote away from her hand. " Nishu dosro ki cheezo ko hath nahin lagate sikhaya tha na"

" par prince charming toh apse shadi kar raha hain na aur t.v pe kaha tha shadi hone ke bad ek dooso ki cheese use kar sakte hain." She again started with her shadi rag.

Moniya and uday both looked uncomfortable and looked at manav for his support.

" Nishu monu aur uaday sir abhi shadi nahin kar sakte ." Nishu was on the verge of crying when manav handled the situation " Kyunki...vo abhi wo dono abhi bohot chote hain jab bade ho jayenge toh shadi kar lenge. thek hain yad hai teri principle ne bhi kaha tha ki jab tak tu 6 years ki nahin ho jati tab tak tu 1 std mein nahin padh sakti bas vaise hi ye dono bhi abhi shadi nahin kar sakte"

"Abhi shadi nahin kar skate" Nishu repeated but this time it was question to which all three of them shook their head in no .

" To kab bade hoyenge"nishu crossed her hands stubbornly as she puffed her little face in anger

" sau sal bad pakka " replied moniya.

" promise" nishu asked seriousness written all over her face

"promise" replied all three of them.

" Theek hain monui di chalo brigu aunty ko batate hain ki ap sau sal bad shadi kar rahe ho" nishu jumped out from her lap and started dragging her out whereas uday kept staring at the drama going on in his cabin.

"Wait , hum apke liye car ka intazam karwa dete hain".

"No thanks humare pas hai" replied moniya ,Not wanting to take any help from that arrogant man and moved out of the cabin with nishu and manv who thanked uday before leaving.
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Moniya was still fuming in the ride back home how dare he called her cheap and desperate . Agreed he took good care of kids and that was the sole reason why she din't throwed all colorful words she had learnt in her co -ed school.

" Monu di jaldi chalo mujhe batana hain brigu aunty ko app Prince charming se shadi karoge "
Nishu hoped out of the scooty and drag along moniya with her .

"sun snow white , pls..pls brigu aunty ko mat batana ki tere aur us khado...nisha gave her the best glare she could manage which made moniya change her statement."I mean us sweet se prince charming ke beech kya baat hui theek hai."

Nisha nodded her head with a smile ...a mischievous one and directly ran to her brigu aunty." Brigu aunty...prince charming monu di se shadi karne ke liye man gaya ..." She shouted on the top of her voice.Manav on the other hand went into the kitchen for a popcorn to enjoy the upcoming drama completely.

" mar gayi moniya ...bhag "


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UDAY'S POV.

I decided to move towards my cabin after nishu and manvav went away with that girl. As soon as I entered my cabin a person was waiting for me in my cabin . A unexpected person.

" Mr.Desai Ap yaha , please bethiye Na " I just smiled and kept aside a buque he was holding as he took his seat. " Mr. Desai aoko yeh buque vagera ki formality karne ki zarror nahin thi " I said as I admired the buque he had kept aside .

" Yeh meri taraf SE nahin hain yuvraj ye toh apka intazar karte karte is par nazar pad gayi , wase kehna padega apke change walon NE bohot pyare phool bejhe hain " I smirked at his remark but agreed with his thought of buque it was indeed a piece of art different colors of flowers were mixed and matched with each other like a perfect piece of painting.

" Inhe toh hum return gift bhej denge Ap bataiye Ap yaha manali mein I thought Ap rajkumari ko dhondhne mein busy honge "

" No worries yuvraj mein aur meri team already lag chuke is kam mein . Par kuch asi batein smane ayi hain ki ap se milna zarori ho gaya tha. " Mr. Desai looked a little tensed which was unsual for him.
" Kuch bhi kijiye Mr. Desai par yuvrani ka pata unke 22 birthday se pehele pata lagaiye varna devgatdh ki gaddi trust mein chali jayegi aur hum asa kisi bhi kimat par nahin honge . Samaj rahein hain na ap , "
" Isiliye toh yaha aya hun yuvraj darhasal is case ki kabhi theek SE jach padtal Hui hi nahin hain . Mujhe is Muralilal ke bare mein aur information chahiye hogi .kuynki jitni bhi information humein devgardh aur police SE meli hain woh kafi nahin hain ."

" What do u mean theek SE jach nahin Hui ye ek high profile case hai oMr Desai . rajkumari KIDNAP hui thi aur hukum bhojrajsingh aur unki patni mrinalidevi NE khud is police par pressure rahe is bat ka khayal rakha tha .Ap kehna kya chahte hain" I was shocked but also amused with the twist in the game.

" Mr. Singh ye case ab jake Crime branch NE seriously Lena shuru kiya hain wo bhi tab jab is case ko mein handle kar raha hoon . wo toh shukra hain ki Ap NE political pressure dal kar is case ko reopen karwan ke Mujhe is case ke liye appoint karne par zor diya Varna is mamle ki sacchai SHAYAD kabhi samne hi nahin ati bas ek message pohuchta ki itne sal ke bad police bhi royals ki koi madad nahin kar Sakti ."

" App kehna kya chahte hain officer saf saf boliye" I leaned forward.

" Ye hi ki meine kisi bhi missing case mein itni laparwafi nahin Dekhi. Muralilal rajmahal mein 4 salo se mali ka kamm kar raha tha ,legal rules ke mutabik registered tha uska chehra ,contacts sab hote hue bhi rajkumari ke bare abhi tak basic investigation ki report bhi Puri nahin hain pehele ki files mein . Ab ya toh ye murari hum police officers SE zyada chalak hain ya ye police officers ek do kaudi ke Mali SE zyada bewakoof hain "

This revelation was hard to digest for me for sixteen bloody years...we were been fooled."Toh Ap ye kehna chahte hain ki "

" Ki koi hain Jo nahin chahta ki devgardh ko agla varis mile , kyunki jo files app NE Mujhe di hain us mein sirf murari ke Mumbai ke contacts hain. Ye murari Mumbai kab aya kaha SE aya Kyun aya iska koi zikra tak nahin hain jab ki ye sari basic procedure hain asi investigation ki . pehele do saal maharaj aur maharani ko sirf adhi adhuri bate hi batayi gayi hain. I am surprised ke koi royals ke nak ke niche baith kar unki nak daba raha tha vo bhi is kadar ki unhe rajkumari ki gandh ka ehsas tak Na ho "

" Apko kya lagtA hain officer koun ho sakta hain"

" Agar Ap mujhae puchenge toh mein toh yahin kahunga ki har koi including your father Grijraj Singh"

Mr Desai zaban ko itna bhi belagam mat banaiye ki Hume kichni pade ." It was hard for me not to crush his face as soon as the words left his mouth.

" Bura mat maniye yuvraj mera kam hi shak karna hain mein apke pitah par ilzam nahin laga raha hoon bas shak kar raha hoon .Ab kya hain apke pitah ki nazar mahasabha par hain ye toh Ap jante hi hain aur salon SE mahasabha par hukumat ka rasta hai evgardh ki GADDi ,ho sakta hain apke pitah NE vo rasta apne pas rakh liya hon . Ap hi bataiye shak hona lazmi hain ya nahin "

" Nahin Mr.Desai agar ASA kuch hota toh humein zarror pata hota voh toh khud tensed hain ki agar agle ek sal mein rajkumari nahin mili toh woh toh kya har koi devgardh ki GADDi SE hath dho bethega . trust mein chalejaygi sari property samaj rahein Na Ap " I calmed my self as his words sounded bitter but still made sensed.

" Chalo man liya . Ap ke dad ko eliminate karte hain is game SE toh bacha devgardh mention aur unke dushman. Agar ghar ki bat karein toh maharaj brijraj aur maharani komal par philhal shak karne ka koi solid reason dikh nahin Mujhe ,aur maharanj bhojrajsingh toh pehele hi apni ladli ko apna Zara rajpath de kar chal base hain.
Unke bad ati hai,Rajkumari uma, shadi shuda zindagi ke char sal ke andar andar wapis ghar beith gayi apne 3 sal ke bache vijayindra singh ke sath .Pati bhi royal nahin tha toh esme apne bete ko devgardh ki gaddi par bithane ke sapne dekhe hi honge. Ya ho sakta hain maharani mrinalidevi NE khud is case ko age Na badhne diya ho

" Ap kya bol rahin apko andaza bhi hain ddadisab ji jan laga rahin manayata ko doodhne mein " I roared .Mr desai is the best crime branch officer till date he had solved the most complicated crimes but right now he was making me doubt my decision

" Yuvraj mene apse kaha Na shak karna mera kam
hain , aur haha SE bhi Mujhe shak karne ki gunjaish dikhti hain mein waha apna phawda leke pouch jata hoon aur tab tak khodta hoon jab tak Mujhe sach duniya ke same rakhne ke liye mil nahin jata chahe us sach ka chehra kitna hi ghinona Kyun Na ho .apka ye rude and impatient behavior mera khodna rukwa sakta hain samjhe Ap " Mr. Desai had never given importance to political pressure while solving the case uday knew that so he composed himself and went back to calm and collected yuvraj people knew.

" Are Desai sahab Ap toh bura man Gaye Ap hi bataiye jhatka toh lagega Na dadisab bhala Kyun apni hi power ko khatre mein dalegi upar SE vo bhi kuch kam pyar nahin karti thi manyata SE . Agar dadasheb ke liye unke jigar ka tookda thi toh dadisaheb ke liye unki ankho ka Tara thi rajkumari. Woh Tara jise woh Pure devgardh mein dekhna chahti thi . ASA mumkin nahin hain officer ".

" Par ASA bhi toh hon sakta hain Na yuvraj ki woh Tara waqt SE pehle hi toot gay hon ya phir chamak hi phiki ho gayi ho . Yuvraj apne 15 sal ke career mein humnein Kai missing cases solve liye hain aur jaha tak humara tajurba bolta hain missing case ko agr 6 machine SE zyada waqt ho jaye toh ya toh victim ki body milti hain ya toh asi jagah SE milti hain jaha SE logo ko humarein duniya so called saf suthri lagti hain. "

" Toh Ap kehe cha rrahein ki agar rajkumari manyata ke sath ASA kuch hua hain toh hukum NE ise chupa ke rakha taki devgardh ki GADDi bachane ke liye unhe manyata ke 22 birthday tak hi sahi time mil sake " dammit he made sense.

" Jaisa ki meine kaha yuvraj philhal mein sirf shak kar raha hoon . ASA bhi ho sakta hain mehel ke bahar ka koi dushman isein involve ho . "
" Ap mujhse kya chahte hain ?"
" Devgardh aur jaygardh ke ddushmanon ki kundali dekhtein hain kiska rajyog khatam ho gaya hain ".He smirked so did I .

" mil jayegi "...


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"UDAY humein koi aur rasta nikalna padega koun .JANE WOH ZINDA BHI YA MAR GAYI AUR AGAR ZINDA BHI HAIN TOH HUMEIN NAHIN LAGTA WOH HUMARI BAHU BANNE KE LAYAK BHI HOGI AB TAK " giriraj got tensed as uday informed what Mr . Desai had said



DON'T WOORY DAD AGAR WOH MAR BHI GAYI HAIN TOH YE BAAT PEHEL SIRF HUMAIN PATA LAGEGI AUR HUM TAK HI RAHEGI APP...
He said with a smirk as if this small truth can come between him and power of mahasabha.
...

Moniya was wide awake staring at the moon which somehow looked bigger at the middle of the night . Nothing but the sound of his drunk baba's mumbling was audible. It's OK she mind it atleast he was home.

She didn't knew why but she was not able to sleep even after such a crazy day.
She turned on her left side to get a better view of the moon and didn't stopped the replay of day in her mind.

All day along she was teased with a person she had barely met . Everyone called her Cinderella and apparently nishu was the fairy God mother of the story . she didn't even liked Cinderella story for crying out loud.

Rukmani and brigu aunty was constantly kept questions him how he looked . Obviously she couldn't have said handsome so she ended the discussion by replying " Just a self centered and arrogant guy brigu aunty really " And made her way in kitchen to prepare Chinese noodles she had promised kids .

But that self centered arrogant guy took care of kids didn't he ? Her consious argued . manav had told moniya that he kept on listning to nishu even though she kept on blabbering about how she loves brigu aunty her monu di and then suddenly started why she doesn't like milk

He listened to all very patiently strange
Not only that he even ordered nishu's and manav's favorite ice cream

Her eyelids covered the beautiful moon infront her before she can agrue back to prove her consious wrong.
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Uday looked at the buque .For the first time he had brought a buque with him in his room ,greeting card says it's from his manger but it also had information on where it had made from
' Children's home ' same orphanage manav had mentioned when he had asked about their where abouts . Strange kid manav was he was nothing like eight years old.he Thought
He didn't knew why he instantly felf connection with tthat small girl nisha . He wanted to meet her again . Her soft black eyes reminded him of someone very close to him but cannot put his finger on . Maybe tomorrow he can visit that orphanage and donate some money to that orphanage and also meet nisha there.

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Edited by sweetmishthi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whatt THE END... 😲 Was It Last Chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

Whatt THE END...😲Was It Last Chapter...



Hell no just the chapter I will edit it if creating confusion sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmishthi



Hell no just the chapter I will edit it if creating confusion sorry



OHHH THANK U I WAS SO SHOCK..
BUT IM HAPPY IT ISNT ENDING... 😊😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha




OHHH THANK U I WAS SO SHOCK..
BUT IM HAPPY IT ISNT ENDING...😊😃



. wase tune comment kar kar ke ye kiya . ye bata chappy kesa laga ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful chapter
Loll nisha again start her sadhi rag
She was hell bent on marrying manveer so cute baby
Loll moniya said she & uday will marry after 100 yrs I couldn't stop my laugh
Poor baby nisha also agree
I like Mr desai he is not afraid of anything
But look like uday trying to find manyata just to get power
On the other hand manyata got so many questions from rukmani & brigu auntie
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
How can be uday related to nishu?? Thats confusing😳

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