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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wqadf

When will u update u promise to update by today pls we are waiting



I am sorry dear but I won't be able to update today as all my written chapters have been deleted accidentally 😔
But I promise to update tomorrow 😊
Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago
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I am sorry dear but I won't be able to update today as all my written chapters have been deleted accidentally 😔
But I promise to update tomorrow 😊



Aright... 😔 But Long Update... 😃
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal



Aright... 😔 But Long Update... 😃



Oka sis 😊
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CHAPTER 4



Next evening
Jaigarh university

Aryan and his friends
Ram : We have to do something of this Manya.

Sham : I know we have to

Aryan : don't worry guys Today is going to be the worst day of her life... (he smirks)

Ramesh : lets go inside the party is about to begin




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With Unnati, Priya and Manya
Unnati : Manya, Priya you both are looking stunning...

Manya : Even you are looking gorgeous Unnati...


Priya : Manya please remove these glasses of yours

Manya : no never

Unnati : Come on yaar leave it... Lets go inside

Manya : Yes please



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Inside party hall
Almost every student of the university was present there.
Announcer : So every one enjoy the PARTYYY

All : Yayyy

Music is turned on. The DJ is mixing songs. Everyone is dancing.

Aryan and his friends
Ram : Aryan today this manya is looking just like a bomb man

Aryan : I know dude... Today I mean tonight is going to be so much fun...


Uday and Unnati
Uday : Choti are you enjoying the party

Unnati : Completely dada... its amazing

Uday : Btw you are looking very beautiful today..

Unnati : Thanks dada but even you are looking hot

Uday says strictly: Choti...
They burst into laughter


Priya and Manya
Priya : party is amazing isn't it

Manya : Yes it is indeed. ummm excuse me Priya I've to go to the washroom

Priya : ok


Manya leaves. Aryan sees her going and follows her..
On getting a chance he pulls her into an empty room

Manya : oye what are you doing let me go

Aryan : Oh no not so soon

Manya : What

Aryan : First let me tell you the REAL meaning of Ragging

He starts advancing towards her and she starts moving backwards.. This continues till he traps her between the wall and himself..
Aryan : Btw you are looking very Hot today

Manya : You leave me..

She tries to remove his hands but is unable to do so and hence tries to bite him but he saves himself yet again.. He holds both her hands, brings them behind her back in his one hand and traces his finger from her temple to her cheeks and rests them on her lips.
Manya shakes her head to make him remove his hand
Manya : Leave me. I said leave me

Aryan : whats the hurry baby..

He uses his free hand to move her open hair on one side and tries to kiss her on her neck. Manya stamps her high heels on his foot to release herself and it did work. He cried in pain and left her hands. Manya got an opportunity to run away. She ran towards the door but Aryan was faster... He throws her on the floor and she hurt her head as it struck the wall, it started to bleed.
Manya : aaah
Aryan : You b**** now I'll tell you
he starts moving towards her while she is unable to do anything and starts shouting for help...



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Meanwhile Priya was waiting for manya. When she did not come she checked the washroom. Manya was not there. Now she was scared. She went and told this to Unnati who was with Uday...
Unnati : What where did she go?

Uday : Don't worry Choti lets go n look for her.. She might have lost in the party. come

They start looking for her everywhere in all the places. Uday was passing by the corridor when he heard Manya shouting. He tried to open the door but couldn't do it since it was locked. He knocked but none replied. Atlast he had to break the door...
when he entered he saw aryan advancing towards manya with an evil smirk
Uday : ARYAN what are you doing

Manya : please save me please

Aryan : Not today Uday we can talk some other time

Uday : Leave her Aryan

Aryan : let me do my work and just get lost.

Uday starts moving towards him and " Leave aryan "
"No"

That was it. Uday punched him in his face and he was on the floor and was crying in pain
Uday : I always knew you were cheap but I never thought you would do such an act... SECURITY

Security guards come and take Aryan out of the room
Uday to security head : Never let that person enter the university again. I'll talk to the principal

Manya : Thank you for your help. If you hadn't come god knows what could have happened.

Uday : It's ok. You're hurt. You must go to the hospital.

Manya : oh I'll just go

Uday : wait I'll take you

Manya : No I'll manage

Uday : Lets go.

Manya turns to leave and in the process Uday sees a mark on her back. Manya leaves
Uday : Rajkumari Manyata...


Manya goes outside where Priya and Unnati find her

Priya : Manya where were you and OMG you are hurt

Manya : I'll tell you later

Unnati : let me take you to hospital

Uday comes : No choti you aren't going anywhere neither will you priya. I'll talk her

Vijay and Shaurya come and they listen to Uday's last line

Vijay : don't worry uday we'll drop them both home safely

Uday : ok lets go


Uday takes manya to the Devgarh hospital and gets her treated. But only manyata's thought is in his mind. He bribes the doc and asks him to take her blood sample for a dna test with the devgarh royals. After every thing was done Uday drops her home but is shocked to see that she lives in an orphanage. His doubt was redoubled. he goes home



* * * * * * *



A boy and girl are running and playing with plastic swords. They look very happy. The boy accidentally hurts the girl who starts crying.




Uday wakes up from his dream. He is sweating. He drinks water and " Manya are you Manyata" he says



* * * * * * * * * *



After 2 days the dna results arrive. Uday is shocked to see that his doubt was absolutely right. Manya is MANYATA...

Uday : Now no one can save devgarh...
He smirks

Giri comes and asks: What happened Uday?

Uday : Dad see this?
He gives him the dna report. Giri reads this and says: If it is so then...

Uday : Then devgarh is gone.. I'll make them pay for what they did...


FLASHBACK
Jaigarh palace is decorated beautifully for it is the 6th birthday of Yuvraj Udayveer Singh. Vasundra(Uday's mom) is busy in the preparations. Giri asks her to relax and to go and change. She goes to her room.

Party Time
Every one wishes the birthday boy. But Uday is not happy coz his best friend has not come yet. Atlast come the devgarh Family. Uday is very happy on their arrival. The elders after wishing Uday go to talk with giri while Uday, Manyata, Unnati and Anmol start playing.
Suddenly a gunshot is heard...




CHAPTER ENDS

Who do you think is shot?????


Please do Read, Like and Comment 😊

I know its short and I am sorry for it 😔

Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good but make it a little long it's just a request
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Thank You... 😊
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chapter is just awesome... 😃 Ohhh wow uday saved manyata from that evil Aryan... 😃 😳 And OMG Uday found out through dna that she is lost princesss... but don't know why uday is against devgarh abd did said that devgarh is gone... hope u would solve mystery soon... 😊 by the way I felt reading the chap that u did wrote chap in running or fast manner... as u wanted to end chap soon... 😔 whyyy... 😭
and this was very short update... 😔 and about the flashback I guess vassundra was shot inorder to save manyta... that was my thought and rest is up to u... 😊
do update next chapter a longer one and yesss do update it a little bit in detail... 😊
and thank u for pm... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wqadf

Good but make it a little long it's just a request




Thank You... 😊 and I know its short but next one will be veryyy long. I promise 😊
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

chapter is just awesome... 😃 Thank You... 😊 Ohhh wow uday saved manyata from that evil Aryan... 😃 😳 He is the hero after all 😉 And OMG Uday found out through dna that she is lost princesss... He is very smart and won't leave any chance to destroy devgarh but don't know why uday is against devgarh abd did said that devgarh is gone... hope u would solve mystery soon... 😊 I will do in the next chapter 😊 by the way I felt reading the chap that u did wrote chap in running or fast manner... as u wanted to end chap soon... 😔 whyyy... 😭 Let me say the truth, I didn't write THIS Chapter but my sister did and she only posted it... Reason being that I was not in a good mood of writing as my exams result is coming tomorrow and you know I'm very tensed... 😳
and this was very short update... 😔 you know the reason now... but next update is going to be veryyy long and about the flashback I guess vassundra was shot inorder to save manyta... that was my thought and rest is up to u... 😊 You'll know soon 😉
do update next chapter a longer one and yesss do update it a little bit in detail... 😊 Definitely sis 😊
and thank u for pm... 😊 Well I'll give your Thanks to my sister 😉

Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago
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