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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ok I will not thank you.. 😉 U don't have to!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey sis, how you? 😊 I am fine sis, U tell😊

Sorry for the late reply Its ok sis, I can understand

Lol, loved how she thinks 😆 LOL yeah!!😆

"He is so full of himself! I mean mujhe kaise pta chalega ki wo apne bare mein baat kar raha hai ya hum dono ke bare mein. Har waqt Hum Hum to karta rehta hai jaise hum 21st century mein nhi 11th century mein reh rahe hon."

Lol, I think that he might just change his statement if she reacted... Hehe, She is funny, Isnt she?

Hehe, she has fallen for the same arrogant prince Yeah! Unfortunately😛 😉

The way she is fighting with her thoughts, show that she likes him but it also shows that she regrets the fact that she does like him... She is sis, but she knows Uday nd doesnt want to fall for a playboy,, even though she has😉

Lol, love how Priya was asking her about who she was thinking about and how Uday joined her...

"Kahin tum Kiss..."

And how she to quickly cover up He wont leave a single chance to irritate her😉😆

Shaurya doesn't seem so bad now but I still have my doubts on him Dont worry sis, he is clean😊

Lol, loved how Manya guessed what Uday was thinking...

"Humari baat nhi sunne ki yahi punishment hai" it was too cute 😆 Aww thank you soo much😃

Lol, Vijay and his sense of humour is too good... You know Vijay is Vijay!😉😛😆

"Ye lo... Ramayan khatam bhi ho gyi aur ye puch rahi hai srupnakha kothi... I tell you" lol😆

I'm happy that Manya can see that Vijay likes if not loves Unnati 😃 but it's sad that she doesn't want to help him confess his love U see sis, she doesnt want to interfere in their personal life, but she might say something to Unnati😊

Lol, Uday likes to tease Manya in front of everyone but she covers up... Yeah! After all he is Yuvraj Udayveer Singh😉

"So how do we do it?" Priya asked. She is like an ever ready battery ((thanks for the Idea Humairaa sis))

Hehe, 😳 glad you liked it and I'm so obliged that you used it in your story 😉 Nah sis, I am very grateful for this idea of yours😊

Lol, Vijay is too cute Vijay is Vijay! lol😆

"And boys will choose!!" This can be expected only from Vijay'

"No girls will! Don't you know ladies are first.. ?" Priya said offended by what he said'

Aww, that's probably the first time someone was offended by what Vijay said... If Vijay is Vijay then Priya is Priya😛😉😆

"Ok ok I don't want to fight, but mind you bro and sis in one team is not allowed" love how Vijay's mind works 😃 Glad You do!😃

I actually thought that Priya was going to choose Uday because of the way she admired him and his looks but she choose Shaurya and I felt so bad for Manya because she didn't want to be with Uday but she was left with no choice... But I guess it's best because I don't think that it wouldn't be a manveer story if they didn't go together... Umm sis, she might have a plan for ... Why dont u guess😉

I honestly hope that Uday develops a soft spot for her in his heart (hope he falls in love with her in the process) Only if he hasnt yet😉

Love how your mind works sis...Salute 😊 Aww thank you soo much sis😃

Lol, I guess that Vijay must be over the moon to be paired up with Unnati Lol yeah! he is!

Love Manyata's thoughts

"Let's get going then" ------------------- Thanxx again😊

Love how Vijay's mind works, it is truly amazing...the idea of going in different directions to find their way...I think that he's probably hoping to get lost with Unnati so that they get to spend more time together but then again, who knows except for you sis 😉 Right😉 You will know soon😊

Lol, Uday is a little cheater but I'm glad that Manya isn't and she decided to play fair unless she has a small hope of getting lost with him lol, Maybe THAT is her plan😉

Love how Uday teased Manya about the kiss when they were alone... I too love it 😳

Was Uday actually hurt when Manya said that she didn't like the kiss? He could be.. Sorry sis, I cant tell.. You will have to read the story😛😉

It seems like Uday's plan might work but she's not going to be the only one to fall in love...he's going to fall in love with her in the process 😲 My secret is out! 😆 There will be much more than that😉

I don't think that he was disgusted with her but with himself and I feel that he's ego is hurt because she said that she didn't like the kiss hehe, Big headed, arrogant Prince😆

Wow, they both have nick names for each other...big headed, arrogant Prince and bitch...although his one is extremely rude Lol, nick names! He might change it in near future😉

As I said earlier, Uday is a cheater because he used the GPS even after Manya told him not to, well, unless they were lost... He doesnt listen to anyone else, Does he?

Aww, love how he says that she's an angel, I sense a change in him...😃 Many more changes on the way!😉

Thanks for the pm 😊 U r welcome, sis😊

Keep up the good work👍🏼 I will try😊


Thank you soo much sis, for replying... Even though I could not reply any earlier coz of my schools and studies!😳

Thanks a lot ... again😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simi.k.


Thank you soo much sis, for replying... Even though I could not reply any earlier coz of my schools and studies!😳I totally understand

Thanks a lot ... again😊

Thanks for replying to my comment sis😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey simi im happy u started a ff,.. though i didnt read any of the parts till now as i had exams and my seond grandma had passed away... and also had some problem... but now i gone start reading it and will comment as soon as i finish reach all the parts.

loved the concept something different and it seems interesting

loved part 1 it was lovely...sad that manya is an orphan though i think there is more to her identity... happy that she became friend with someone on her first day...so aryann called manya he seems annoying already...thank god the teach came over poor manya...loved how manya was speaking to herself...manya is really naughty...aww loved how giriraj cared for his kids and how uday is protective about unnati really loved this first part

coming to chapter 2 it was awesome...loved the convo and bond between unnati and uday...loved uday and manya scene... made me laugh... im sure unnati will become friends with manya...loved the scnen between unnati, manya and priya and already started to like their friendship...loved how unnati and priya and manya decided to teach aryan a lesson ... loved how three of the guys were screaming and running seeing the snake.. i wonder wt happened between brij and giriraj that they became enemies...omg dont say that jagat is manyata would be husband no way...

loved chapter 3... uday is a sweet brother who wanted to throw a welcome party for his sister... and even unnati and priya are such a sweethearts for taking manya for shopping she can get something to wear and loved unnati ideadof telling uday and his friends to come with them... manya and uday will defo be together in the future but i have a feeling unnati priya, vijay and sharuya will get together soon...y do uday and giri want to destroy devgarh family.really curious to know...

chapter 4 was awesome...ughh just hate aryann and his friends...aryann is seriously disgusting just hate the way he was treating manya...thankg god priya noticed manya hadnt come back and told unnati... happy uday found manya and beat the hell out of that aryan... glad uday see the mark on manyata back and how he said rajkumari manyata...im happy though uday decided to go with manya to the hospital.. though it feels like he is going with her for his motives now...hehe i was right he actually wanted tp find out if manya is manyata... damn so uday now knows manya is manyata...omg dont say vasu got shot..

loved chapter 5...in the fb scene giri and brij got along so well .. i wonder who that unknown person is that shot giri...nooo vasu went in coma and this unknown person is trying to break devgarh and jaigharh... in fact he has... i hope giri finds out soon that devgarh family didnt do anything thing all those years ago and the culprit was someone else...

part 6 was amazing loved it to the core...i actually love anmol...loved how uday pointed at manyata and said you too...lol loved it when priya said attack guys and vijay said aakramannn... loved how anmol and jagat met manyata... but uday was watching all this from far away... i just hope uday and giri know devgarh was not behind all the mishaps...liked how shaurya and vijay noticed that something is cokking in udays mind as he told the girls to join them...liked how uday helped manyata choose clothes...for a second uday actually got lost seeing manyata in those clothes...

chapter 7: it was mind blowing i just loved it...the way u described about the hike i actually felt i was there like i could see everything with my own eyes...uggh poor manyata i knew uday would give a task to her and i hope she is able to fully it...

chapter 8 was awesome...i liked manveer arguing...and the idea of spending a night together thanks for the darkness...loved how manyata asked uday questions...i liked how uday was trying to advance her...omg manveer kissed i thought uday was only going to tease her but they actually kissed...loved how uday teased manyata and became friends with her but i hope that was not part of his plan...hehe thanks to the wolf manyata went close to uday and hugged him. and liked how he put his arms around her waist...liked how manyata was sleeping on udays laps and how he was putting her hair behind her ears but then the revenge in uday woke up...haha when uday was addressing both of them as hum to everyone and how manyata was repeating thinking uday is only talking about himself...

loved chapter 9...manyata in her thoughts and her thinking about uday's features and how she was trying to stop herself...how uday was trying to mention about that kis and manyata covered it up god uday never leave a chance to tease her... lol vijay seriously makes me laugh... like the idea of three teams...poor manyata didnt want to be paired with uday... poor manyata uday knows how to get things out of her ...hehe uday hanged the glasses in dabang style...god im blushing at manveer closeness...was uday actually hurt that manyata said no for another kiss i hope he was uday is falling for but denying it..omg he called her a bi*tch nooo way...loved the song manyata was singing...omg simi i cant believe the part ended and now i cant wait for the next part r a beautful writer and really loved all the chapters do update soon and thanks for the pm


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Posted: 10 years ago
UPDATE PLZZZ SISSS...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice :) am a new reader plzz update and pm me when u will update awesome👏 story hope uday will also fall in love with manyata :) 😊😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for update dear
its been 3 month

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