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Thank you sooo much 😳
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Chapter 10

Uday: Enough 😡 look into my eyes manyata. DEKHO. How can you be soo blind. Dont you see the love i have for you? How the hell can you think soo low of me? I didnt play with your feelings 😡

Manyata: leave me Uday. You're hurting me. 😭

Uday: im hurting you? You're hurting me Manyata 😡 I cant believe you think all that happened between us was bullshit 😔

Uday loses his grip on her and slightly pushes her away from himself.

Manyata: im not the one who lied to you Uday. You hid such a big truth from me. I deserved to know this. What if i say i love someone else? Zabrdsti kro ge humare sath just because our roka was done?

Uday: haan karein ge zabardsti, cos you're mine only. Hum tumhe kissi aur ka nahi hone deinge. Get that fact straight.

Manyata: huh, im not your property Yuvraj Udayveer Singh. Neither do i accept this roka.

Uday: too bad manyata. Tum humare naam ka thappa lga k paida hui ho. You're meant to be mine. You can deny this roka but how will you deny your feelings? Haan? Kehdo abh bhi that your heart doesnt race faster when i come near you and that you dont lose your senses when i touch you.

Manyata: this is what you think. Its not reality. Im least effected by your presence. I dont have feelings for you. Get it? 😡 I HATE YOU.

Uday: Seems like your convincing yourself. I dont care if you accept this roka or not but im making myself very clear manyata. YOU ARE MINE. Hum tumhe kisis aur ka hone hi nahi deinge. I'll make you mine by hook or by crook afterall rajwade hain. 10 days manyata, just 10 days, i'll make you confess your feelings.

Manyata: Fine, you do what you have to do, but in 10 days if you are not able to make me confess, which you wont be able to as i dont love you, you will set me free from this roka.

Uday: ok accepted.

The scene ends here. Its morning. Manyata is in her room, crying. Kabir calls.

Kabir: hey gabbar how are you?

Manyata remains silent.

Kabir: Manyata? Say something, whats wrong?

Manyata: Kabir... Uday 😭

Kabir: what about Uday? is he ok?

Manyata: humara roka ho chuka hai. He hid this from me. I trusted him but he betrayed me 😭

Kabir: Manyata, it was not only Uday who hid this from you, all of us did. Its not only his fault. He didnt betray you. He wanted to tell you before also.

Manyata: he wanted to but he didnt na. Im not upset with the fact that i belong to Uday, neither am i upset that my roka is done. Im upset because the person i started to trust the most didnt bother telling me the truth. Im hurt because Uday was becoming a special part of my life, but he... 😭

Kabir: shhh relax. Uday would never hurt you intentionally. He loves you alot. Everyone except for you has realised this. You're his life Manyata, his reason to breathe. Do you even know what he must be going thru? you're hurt because he hid the truth from you, but what about you? You questioned his love manyata. You doubted him, you doubted his love for you. You called his love bullshit. What do you have to say about that?

Manyata: He doesnt love me 😭
This is all fake. And if he does why hasnt he said it?

Kabir: He doesnt have to tell you this, he has showed it by his actions. Everyone knows this. I just hope you realise how much he loves you before its too late. You're very lucky to have a lover like him, afsos ke tumhe qadar nhi.

Manyata cuts the call and sobs thinking of Kabir's words..

Manyata: why Uday, why are you doing this to me. I cant seem to hate you. But i cant accept this roka either. 😭

At devgarh, Av, Giri, DS, Brijraj and Komal are discusing the matter.

Av: im really tensed Maa sahab. Uday hasnt said a word since yesterday. I just hope everything goes back to normal.

Komal: same is the case with manyata. She has locked herself in her room since ysterday. What should we do Maa sahab?

Ds: they both need some time. Manyata Uday se pyaar krti hain but her ego is coming in between. Shes hurt that he didnt tell her before. Im sure Uday unhein manalein ge. His love isnt soo weak.

Brij: Hes Yuvraj Udayveer Singh. Humein Uday bete pe poora bharosa hai. Manyata has denied to accept this roka as shes angry right now but im sure once her anger melts and she realises how much Uday loves her, she will accept him. At the end of the day, she has started falling for him.

Giri: But maa sahab even after this if she doesnt accept this roka, its better if we dont force her. Hum manyata ki khushi chahte hain. I dont want to force her into anything. Shes like my daughter and i want her to be happy.

Av: yup Ma sahab, Mahraj is right. No one will force manyata. I know Uday manyata ko mana lein ge. But if he isnt able to, we will accept what Manyata wants and not force her.

All nod their heads. And the scene shifts to Uday and Jagat.

Jagat: Uday chill man, tu kyun romeo bana hua?

Uday: what else do you expect from me? My love life is a total mess right now. I love manyata and cant live without her and on the other hand shes really angry with me and doesnt even want to see my face.

Jagat: Have some faith on your love man. You challenged her. Instead of sitting here like a roadside romeo, focus on how you're gonna get her to confess. You're Yuvraj Udayveer Singh, who never accepts defeat. You can do anything. Socho what everyone will say when they find out that the efficient yuvraj is not able to woo his lady love 😆 bring the tiger out and make her yours. You shouldnt even be wasting time since you know she loves you.

Uday: exactly. Hum toh Udayveer Singh hain. Hum dar se nahi dar humse bhagta hai. I've never learnt to lose. I'm gonna win this challenge because losing it means losing my life jo humein manzoor nhi. Thanks man.

Jagat: now thats the spirit. Good luck. Bye.

Jagat leaves and Uday smirks to himself.

Uday to himself: so manyata baby, be ready to bow down infront of me. I'll shower you with sooo much love that you'll be forced to confess. I know you're hurt but i'll tame my tigress.

He smiles and leaves to devgarh palace.

At devgarh: Uday goes straight to manyata's room and closes the door.

Uday: hey princess

Manyata: dont you have any manners? You're suppose to knock when you enter someones room. 😡

Uday: i didnt enter "someones" room. I entered my to be wifes room.

Manyata: wife? Dream on. Just leave.

Uday: Nope.

He lays comfortably on the bed.

Manyata: Haaw get off my bed Uday. 😡 Kutte kamine, uth.

Uday: baby, have some respect. Im your future hubby. Wives dont talk to their hubbies like this. Either you be quite on your own or i'd love to do the honours 😉

Manyata: you are sooo stubborn. It seems like you dont have something called a brain. I can talk to however i want. I dont have to respect you.

Uday: awwee meri jaan. Lol yes you can talk to me however you want as im all yours. Neither do you have to respect me as ghar wali baat hai with you. Im no stranger. So carry on 😃

Manyata: GO DIE. To hell with you. 😡

Manyata turns around to leave angrily but bumps into a couch. She loses her balance and falls on top of Uday. Manyata has her hands on top of Uday's barechest as the buttons of his shirt are open from the top while Uday has his hands on her waist. Both get lost into eachothers eyes. Uday caresses manyatas cheeks with the back of his hand. Manyata shivers at his touch. Uday swiftly turns around. Now manyata is below him and Uday is on top. Manyata stares deeply into Uday's eyes while Uday on the other hand isnt able to control himself. He starts placing wet kisses from her forehead, to her cheeks, to her chin and then on manyata's neck. Manyata feels butterflies in her stomach. Shes lost in his touch but thoughts start coming in her mind. He then looks into her eyes for permission whether he can kiss her on the lips. But manyata remains silent. She look at him and is thinking.

Manyata in her mind: Am i really falling for you Uday? And do you actually love me? or was this all fake? God, what should i do? If he loves me he wouldnt keep me in the dark, he would tell me the truth. He wouldnt break my trust, but he did, he betrayed me. He broke my heart. But then what is all this? and why am i not able to stop myself? Im losing myself to him. I cant fight with Uday anymore. Hes making me go weak.

Uday is staring at her. He knows she is lost somewhere. Manyata gets tears in her eyes while thinking about all this. Uday gets worried.

Uday: princess, whats wrong?

Manyata doesnt say a word. She looks away from Uday.

Manyata: Uday please go away. I dont have the energy left to fight with you.

Uday: Then dont fight with me manyata. Accept me. Accept your feelings princess.

Manyata: Uday please 😭

Uday: shh princess. If you want me to leave, i'll go right now. But please dont cry. I cant see you like this. It hurts.

Manyata pushes him away and gets up from the bed.

Manyata: its funny how you're saying this. You are the reason for my tears Uday.

Uday: Try to understand Manyata. I didnt hide this willingly neither did i hurt you intentionally. I would never do that to you.

Manyata: huh all this doesnt suit you Udayveer. You're meant to break hearts. Thats it. No ones tears matter to you. 😡

Uday gets pissed off and angrily says

Uday: You're not "no one" for me. You're tears matter to me. Get it?

Manyata: why?

Uday: Because I LOVE YOU DAMMIT.

So this was it for chapter 10. I hope you guys liked it. Please leave your likes and comments. Thank you. 😊
Edited by roshni101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

WOW!! fantastic update...loved it dear...

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roshu mind blowing girl this update was the best i just didnt even know when it finished... as soon i started reading udays first line was sixer and kept going on and on... both r really stubborn though loved how uday said manyata is his from the day she was born also loved the way how he said he will get her by hook or crook and also how she is his only... well i know manyata should have known and she is hurt that uday hid this as she started trusting him and all but im on udays team with this 10 day challenge i want him to win it and make manyata confesses because she is being stubborn even when kabir explained it to her,... loved the elder scene... liked how uday cake to devgarh palace and went to manyata room just loved the room scene espeically the few minutes manveer romance bit...although loved how uday admitted at the end that he loved her and hope manyata agrees soon that even she also loves uday please update soon and thanks for the pm now i really cant wait
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Fantastic...Fab...!! 👏 iam eagerly waitng for next update ..love it ..keep it up and update SoOn 😊
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I know that I'm editing my comment really late but I've been very busy so didn't get enough time to read through it sorry. 🥱
continued reading it after so long that I had to look back at chapter 9 to understand what's going on 😆
Chapter 10 was great 👏 I so love the angry UV ❤️ loved ManVeers scene 😳 so M has a challenge from UV and we all know who's gonna win 😛 if Manyata has started to develop feelings for UV then why dose not she just accept him 😡 but then we all know how stubborn she is 🥱
Wow ! I'm loving Giriraj in here 😛 never expected him to be so supportive towards manyata
UVs one-liners are so good 😉
Manyatas gaaliyan only excited UV so much more 😳
Love it when he calls M 'baby' and now it's 'Jaan' as wel
And a hot romantic scene yet again ❤️ 🥳
UV has finally confessed his love now hopefully by next chapter Manayata will also 😉

Edited by Ashvikian_AK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whn u update dear
pls update na nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanghita0000


WOW!! fantastic update...loved it dear...


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Awwee thank you soo much 😳
It means alot
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Originally posted by: preya_radev

roshu mind blowing girl this update was the best i just didnt even know when it finished... as soon i started reading udays first line was sixer and kept going on and on... both r really stubborn though loved how uday said manyata is his from the day she was born also loved the way how he said he will get her by hook or crook and also how she is his only... well i know manyata should have known and she is hurt that uday hid this as she started trusting him and all but im on udays team with this 10 day challenge i want him to win it and make manyata confesses because she is being stubborn even when kabir explained it to her,... loved the elder scene... liked how uday cake to devgarh palace and went to manyata room just loved the room scene espeically the few minutes manveer romance bit...although loved how uday admitted at the end that he loved her and hope manyata agrees soon that even she also loves uday please update soon and thanks for the pm now i really cant wait


Awwee thank you sooo much dear. 😳
It truly means alot.
Im glad you liked the update.
Lol yup very stubborn. They are a competition for eachother.
Awwe happy you liked that line 😊
Thanks again.
Wee its true that shes only his and uday isnt scared of claiming what us his 😉
Haha we all are on Uday's team.
Manyata is jut upset but she'll met. Who wouldnt when they have a sexy prince pacifying them
Lol you know how stubborn manyata is. She knows Uday is right but is always in denial mode.
But uday is no less.
Kabir is cupid, poor guy will have a lot of explaining to do 😆
Uday sees no one other than manyata so went straight to her room 😉
This is love 😃
Awwe im flattered. Really glad that you loved that scene.
Im updating in a few mins.
And you're welcome 😊
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good update..👍🏼


Thank you so much 😊

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