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Chapter 12

Uday: sshh relax. Its just a movie.
He lightly pecks the side of her head and she leans alittle more into Uday.

Uday smiles and thinks in his mind.

Uday: it feels great having you soo close to me. I hope you accept me so we can remain like this forever.

Meanwhile jagat and jay are having a discussion.

Jay: jagat i hate you 😭

jagat: why sweetheart? what did i do?

jay: thats the problem. You havent done anything. Look at Uday. Hes sooo romantic. Jiji and Uday are far yet soo close. Just look over there. (Jagat looks at Manveer and smiles, jay continues) And one the other hand theres you. a workaholic. Who doesnt know the R of romance.

Jagat moves closer to Jay and caresses her cheeks.

Jagat huskily says: so do you want me to do something baby?

Jay: shutup Jagat 😳

Jagat: aayeinn blushing. I love you jay

Jay: i love you too Jagat.

He pecks her lips and she rests her head on his shoulder. They both look at manveer once again amd start watching the movie.

On the other hand

Un: Dada and Manyata are soo cute na Kabir?

Kabir: yeah very cute. They are made for eachother.

Un: i wish i find someone like dada, who loves unconditionally.

Kabir: main hun na 😉

Un: What? She had her mouth wide open.

Kabir: lol moun band krlo. Makhi chali jaye gi. Im joking 😆

Unnati punches him lightly on his chest.

He smiles and thinks: I love you unnati but i'll confess when the right time comes. I know you are waiting for my confession and i will tell you how much i love you very soon.

Unnati looks at Kabir and thinks: Akhir kya hai tumhare dil main Kabir? You mean more than a friend to me but is it the same for you? I wonder how you feel about me.

The scene shifts to Manveer.

Manyata was getting effected by being soo close to Uday.

Manyata in her mind: God this guy is driving me crazy. Im losing my senses. He looks sooo delicious. I have to pull myself away from him before i do something stupid. I'll go shopping. Uday's busy watching the movie so he wont be anywhere near me. I'll be able to stay in my senses. Wow, good idea, you rock Manyata

Manyata gets up in a hurry. Uday gets worried and confused by her behaviour.

Uday: princess whats wrong?

Manyata: nothing.

And she leaves. Uday gets angry as she leaves alone and is ticked off with her behaviour. He goes behind her.

Manyata goes into a store. Uday comes from behind, graps her arm and takes her inside the changing room

Manyata gets scared due to the sudden pull and is about to scream. Uday keeps his hand on his mouth to stop her from screaming. Seeing Uday she relaxes abit. But gets nervous seeing him angry.

Uday (angrily): What the hell is wrong with you Manyata? Why did you come out alone?

Manyata: i umm i eh didnt want to watch the movie so came for shopping.

Uday in anger: Wow. Amazing. How foolish can you be? Just because you didnt want to watch the movie you came here all alone with no security and none of us. Do you have any idea how dangerous that is? And whats with the attitude? Do you like getting me tensed? I asked you what happened but Yuvrani Manyata didnt bother answering 😡

Manyata gets tears in her eyes thanks to Uday's anger.

She tries walking away from him but he catches her wrist and in a swift pins her to the door.

Uday: Dont even try to ignore me and walk away. 😡

Manyata: Uday leave me (she says lightly)

Uday calms dows abit seeing her tears. He closes his eyes for a brief sec.

Uday: priness im really sorry. I didnt mean to hurt you. I just got worried. You know i love you and im just concerned.

Manyata stares deeply into his eyes.

Manyata: you always make me cry and then you say you love me 😭

Uday: Well thats cos i do. Baby try to understand. We are royals. We cant roam around alone. Theres danger everywhere princess. I cant afford any harm coming your way. I got angry because i care about you.

Manyata smile slightly.

Manyata: you know i would have smacked for using this tone with me if you werent right.

Uday: chalo issi bahane hath toh lgati. 😉

Manyata: God, you're unbelievable.

She moves out of the changing room.

Uday: oye princess wait for me.

Uday catches up with her.

Uday: btw princess you could have asked me to join you if you didnt want to watch the movie. Why did you come alone.

Manyata was busy shopping so without thinking much she bluntly says: Why would i ask you to accompany me when i was running away from you? I was losing my sen.. she stopped midway when she realized wat she said.

Uday smirked and pulled manyata closer to him forgetting that they were at a public place.

Uday caressed Manyata's cheeks and moved closer to her. He huskily whispered to her

Uday: I didnt know i have such a great effect on you.

Manyata shivers.

Manyata: Uday pleaasee' she says in a quivering voice.

Uday ignores her and he rubs his nose to her cheek and moves to her jawline. Manyata is lost in his touch. Suddenly Uday's phone rings. They both break out of the trance and realise where they are. Manyata looks around and notices a few people looking at them and smiling. She gets embarassed and looks away.

On call
Un: dada where are you guys? We're soo worried. You could've told us before going. Do you know how ten...

Uday: Choti relax. You know your friend is a scardy cat. She was about to pass out so i brought her for shopping 😆

Manyata: Uday 😡

Un: Lol dada dont annoy her. Now carry on with your shopping

Uday: why dont you guys join us?

Un: No thanks dada. Humein kabab main haddi nhi bn na. You have fun. We're leaving.

He cuts the call and looks at manyata. She gives him a death glare and leaves

Uday to himself: chalo Uday beta. Manao ab apni jaan ko. Cant you keep your mouth shut man. Ab phir patana parey ga.

Uday goes behind her and they reach near the car.

Uday: Baby...Jaanu... soniye... sweetheart... oye gabbar ruko.

Manyata stops and glares at uday: How dare you call me gabbar? 😡

Uday: you are one thats why i called you a gabbar. Always torturing me 😭

Manyata: i torture you? Your wrong. You torture me.

Uday: really? how?

Manyata stares into his eyes intensly

Manyata: by coming close to me, kissing me and touching me. You make me go weak. Now this is torture.

Uday smile: awwe baby. I never knew i effected you soo badly. 😃

Manyata: God uday. Tum halkat vede ho.

Uday: princess why do you call me a halkat veda?

Manyata: kyun k tum ek halkat vede HO.

Uday: really? he moves closer to her and she moves backward. He smirks when manyata collides with the car.

Uday: baby now where will you go?

Manyata tries to go away but he crushes her with his body. She is stuck between Uday and the car.

Manyata (nervously): Uday please leave me. Chalo. We're getting late.

Uday: who cares. I'd prefer staying like this.

Manyata: Udaayyy.

Uday: manyataaa.

Manyata: dont you have any other thing to do other than romance?

Uday: ab kya karein princess. You're soo sexy that you drive me nuts. Plus pyaar krte hain so i wont leave a chance to romance.

Manyata: It seems like more than me you love me body.

As soon as these words escaped her mouth she regretted. Seeing Uday in pain and anger she was cursing herself. Uday moved away from her.

Uday (sternly): lets go. We're getting late.

Manyata was feeling guilty seeing Uday so hurt.

Manyata: Uday im really sorry. I swear i didnt mean to ... before she could complete Uday interrupted.

Uday: I said lets go. I dont have all day. Jana hai toh chalo otherwise im leaving.
Manyata: Uday please listen to me. Im sorry. I didnt say this intentionally. Im extremly sorry.

Uday didnt pay a heed to her words and went to sit in the driving seat.

Manyata quietly sat in the car. After a while Manyata placed her hand on Uday's free hand. Uday jerked her hand off.

Manyata: Uday please meri baat suno. Why are you behaving like this with me? Stop it please.

Uday applied the breaks and turned towards manyata: WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM? IM SICK AND TIRED OF YOUR BEHAVIOUR MANYATA. ENOUGH IS ENOUGH. YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH ME ROMANCING YOU AND NOW YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH ME STAYING QUITE. AKHIR CHAHTI KYA HO? IM NOT SOME PUPPET WHO YOU'RE PLAYING WITH. IM FED UP. ONE MOMENT YOU COME SOO CLOSE TO ME AND THE OTHER MOMENT YOU PUSH ME AWAY. I CAN BEAR EVERYTHING MANYATA BUT I CANT BEAR YOU ACCUSING MY LOVE. BS AB BHT HOGAYA HAI. You dont want to marry me na? Fine. Hum sare rishte tordein ge. But mere pyaar pe aaj k bad shak mat krna. Do you understand?

Manyata gets tears in her eyes. She gets out of the car as soon as the reach devgarh and rushes in the palace crying bitterly.. Uday closes his eyes for a minute and then leaves. Everyone get shocked seeing her like that. Manyata without saying a word rushed to her room and locked the door.

Everyone went behind her

Komal: Manyata beta please open the door.

Jay: jiji darwaza kholiye. Please. What happened?

Manyata: just leave me alone. Go away.

Ds: Komal let her be. Its not the right time to talk to her.

Mainka: Maa sahab kahi woh kuch ker na le.

Ds: humein apni perwarish pe pura bharosa hai. She wont do anything reckless.

Jay: DS im scared. Jiji was crying soo much. I think something happened between Uday and jiji.

VB: they were fine till the afternoon. Infact they were shopping together. I wonder what went wrong.

Ds: we'll get to know soon. Lets just leave her alone for now.

They all glance at the door once and leave.

The next morning
jaigarh family comes over for breakfast. They all greet eachother.

Ds: Uday beta are you ok? You seem lost and look tired.

Uday: im fine ds.

Manyata comes down. She looks pale and fragile. He eyes are swollen. Manveer have a small eye contact but Uday looks away. He feels terrible seeing Manyata's state. He felt like hugging and kissing her. But his ego came in between.

Manyata: good morning everyone.

All say good morning to her. She keeps staring at Uday but he is avoiding her.

Ds: manyata are you ok?

Manyata: yes ds

Vs: manyata beta kya hua? You look so pale and weak. Neend nhi puri hui kya?

Manyata: aisi baat nhi aunty. Im ok.

Giri: my dear,you dont look ok. What happened?

Manyata: nothing uncle giri. She continues to stare at Uday but he doesnt pay any attention to her.

Jay whispers to Vijay: Look how jiji is staring at Uday. Lagta hai bht bari larayi hui hai.

VB: yeah Jay bhai. This is the frst time Uday is avoiding Manyata.

Jay: God these two are u believable.

VB: I tell you.

Uday: umm i need to tell all of you something. Manyata and i have made a decision.

Manyata looks at Uday all confused.

Ds: boliye Uday beta

Uday: actually its about the roka. Im sorry ds but i cant continue with this relationship. Manyata and I are just not meant to be. Hum yeh rishta nhi nibha sakte. Neither do i want to force manyata. She doesnt love me toh is zabrdsti k rishte ka kya faida.

Vs: Uday yeh aap kya keh rhe hain?

Uday: im not saying anything wrong mom. Pyaar main zor hai zabrdsti nhi. So from now everthing is over between the both of us. Uday excused him himself and left.

Manyata went behind him.

Everyone except ds got shocked.

Ds: relax all you. Uday ne jo bhi kaha gussey main kaha. He loves manyata. he can never give up on her. They probably had a fight. Uday ko kisi baat se tehs pohanchi hai. They'll sort it out. Manyata unse pyaar krti hain tbhi unke peeche gayi hain. Everything will be alright.

Uday is about to leave but manyata comes infront of his car.

Manyata: Uday i need to talk to you. Gari se bahir niklo.

Uday opens his window and says: i dont have time. Im busy. Move out of my way.

Manyata: Im not moving till you dont talk to me. Jana hai toh run me over.

Uday accepts defeat and comes out of the car.

Uday: im giving you 5 mins. Jo bolna hai jldi bolo. I really dont have time for your useless shit.

Manyata: Uday please. Stop doing this to me. How could you break your ties with me? 😭

Uday: Thats what you wanted na Rajkumari Manyata. Humne tumhari yeh khwahish puri krdi. Now why are yoo soo bothered?

Manyata holds Uday's face in her hands: Uday please pehle jaise ho jao. I cant hold your anger. Im sorry. Please dont push me away from you.

She caressed his face with love. Uday melts seeing the love in her eyes but he remembers what she said yesterday and moves away from her.

Uday: enough manyata. Dont come close to me then again you'll be like that i love your body. You never accepted this roka at the frst place. Now you're free. I wont come near you. You are no more bound to me. Im going away from your life. Ho jao khush. I regret falling in love with you.

He leaves and manyata falls to the ground crying bitterly.

Manyata: Uday dont go. Please dont leave me.

Unnati who heard the convo had tears in her eyes. She went up to manyata seeing her in a broken state. She lightly placed her hand on Manyata's shoulder. Manyata looked at Unnati and hugged her tightly.

Manyata (sobbing): Unnati tell uday to come back to me na. He cant leave me. Main mar jaon gi uske beghair. I didnt mean to hurt him. Hes soo mad at me. Woh mujhe aise kaise chor k jaa sakta hai. He broke all ties with me. Unnati tell him na that hes my life. I love him alot. Agr woh wapis na aya toh hum apni jaan de dein ge. Uday please wapis ajao. I love you.
wohi yehi sunna chahta tha na unnati. Look im saying i love him but hes not coming 😭

Unnati: manyata ssshhh. Please calm down. Dada can never leave you. He loves you soo much. He'll come back to you. Woh gusse main hain. But as soon as his anger melts he'll come running to you. If he doesnt toh tum unke paas jao. You've hurt him na. So now its your turn. He proved his love now you do it. Go to dada's personal suite. He'll be there. Tell him how much you love him. He'll forget everything. Go. As soon as he hears what he has been waiting for since years he'll embrace you and his anger will vanish. Go now bhabi sa.

Manyata: abhi se hi bhabi sa? Pehle tumhare bhai ko toh manalun.

Unnati: dont worry. Dada man jayein ge.

Manyata hugs unnati tightly

Manyata: i love you sooo much unnati. Thank you.

Unnati: i love you too. Now go fast. He's probably broken. Only you can make him normal with your love.

Manyata makes her way to Uday Niwas.

Manyata in her mind: I know i hurt you alot Uday. You wanted me to confess na i will today. Now i'll see how you remain angry with me.

This is it for chapter 12. I hope you guys liked it. Please leave your likes and comments. Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love it. All the ups and downs in Maveers' relationship is all part of the process of accepting each others love. Their love is everlasting. I hope that one day there will be Dek 2.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Comment edited fr chapter 10 on page 20 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 11 was amazing ! 👏 what a strt to the chapter with such an intense scene ⭐️
Manayata has proven yet again how much she loves UV yet she tries so hard to hide her feelings 😳 but UV knows her better 😉
Omg that was the cutest s new of th FF when M and UV were saying 'I love you' and 'I hate you' 😉
Omg I actually thought she was about to confess then but manyata and her stubbornness 🥱
Loved jai, vijay and unnatis plan 😃
Lol, so now Manayata will torment UV 😆 this is gna be fun 🥳 🤪
Seriously ! UV knows M better than she knws herself 😉
The last scene was totally mind blowing 👏 👏 after a long time I read an FF like this and I'm loving t !! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read 3 chapters in a row 😉

It was awesome ! ⭐️
Jai and Jagat r so cute 😳 I wish their relationship had a real ending in th show
I guess after manveer it's unnati and kabirs turn fr confession 😛
Manayata is crazy 😆 and an angry UV once again 😉 but obviously his anger is not above Manyata 😳
LOL I think it's high time M thinks before opening her mouth 😆
Omg UV is just never misses a chance to come close to M. 😳
Now at last M is wanting to talk to UV rather than uday wanting to go by M 😛
But I really didn't expect UV to break all ties with M 😲
Eagerly waiting fr next chapter, it's gonna be too good! 😉
And will try to be the first commenter 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
roshu really loved this part yaar to good... but yes it did make me a little emotional and i kind of controlled my self... jagat and j scene was really lovely really like that bit... and kabir and unnati cant wait for them to confess their love for each other... loved how manyata thought of going to do shopping so she can ignore uday uday makes manyata go senseless when he is near her... loved the changing room scene especially uday concern... and then how manyata by accidentally told uday y she came to do shopping alone haha uday got a chance to romance with her and that also in front of many people but thank god the phone rang... ooops manyata and her thoughts without thinking she said something she shouldnt have which hurt uday... did feel sorry for manyata the way uday was behaving with her but at the end he was hurt because of her words... omg didnt expect uday to tell everyone about breaking the relationship i thought manveer would have sorted it out before that but i guess not... really loved how unnati was with manyata and guided manyata telling her that its her turn to tell how much she loves uday and no i hope our angry young man cools down and forgives his princess do update soon and thank u for the pm love u
Edited by preya_radev - 10 years ago
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beautiful update
wow manveer already got engaged 🥳 🥳
uday was in love with manyata
only she don't know anything abt it
loll uday ne manyata ko kya bebakuf banaya waiter ban ke 🤣 🤣
god how much uday tease manyata 😆 😆
manyata start falling for uday 😃 😃
oh hell that karan how dare he to force to manyata 😡 😡
thank god uday came on time to save her 🤗 🤗
loll uday feel jealous when karib was close to manyata 😉 😉
wow uday arrange beautiful date for manyata
oh no manyata heard uday & jagat convo & misunderstood him 😒 😒
she was hurt & blam uday for it 🤪 🤪
oh uday shower her will his love
finally after her convo with her mom she realize how much uday love her 👏 👏
awe in cinema hall manveer was so close manyata already loosing her sense
so she went for shopping
uday was really angry that she left without any bodyguard or them
oh no by mistake manyata's word hurt uday very badly 🥺 🥺
she ask forgiveness but still he was hurt
OMG uday broke their engagement 😲 😲
manyata try to talk but uday didn't listen
unnati came to console her & told her to go to him
all the families r worried for manveer hoping they will b together
plz jaldi se update dona
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Plzzz Updateee.. Seriously Its A Wonderful Story...

PLEASEEE

Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god
This was awesome
I Read all 12 parts in one go
Plzz update soon

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