OS TERE MERE BEECH MEIN! A SONGFIC!

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OS TERE MERE BEECH MEIN! A SONGFIC!

Hi guys! Roopali here! And yes, I am back with another one shot! I know you must be thinking: Phir se aagayi yeh one shot leke! But what can I do? Manveer inspire me so much!

I was listening to this song Tere Mere Beech Mein from Shuddh Desi Romance This shot is based (as usual) in future where manveer are married for a year. Have a look and leave a review!

And please read the song portion while listening to the song as you will enjoy the OS more! If you have never listened to this song, please listen to it, coz it will be tough for you to understand the scene happening as the lyrics of both female and male voice overlap in the song.

It was early morning when manyata came into her and uday's room with a cup of tea in her hand. She had already taken her bath and was already dressed up for the day. This was a routine for her to bring tea for uday every morning. This was not something she did out of wifely duties but because she enjoyed doing this for him. This was the only time in the day when uday did not behave like maharajof the jaighar but like a romantic husband and she chose to enjoy the moment by being close to him as much as possible during that time. Rest of time one or other will be knocking on the door for some kind of help and this was the only time no one disturbed him.

As manyata entered the room, she frowned as she noticed that uday was not on the bed. Generally uday did not wake up till she came up to wake him. But today he was awake and sitting on the bed with his face looking at the wall angrily. He was still dressed in his black vest and black track pant in which he generally slept. Her eyes widened as she realized that he must be annoyed at her. She walked towards him and placed the tea on the table in front of him. He looked away and she pouted. She grabbed her ears in the universal sign of sorry and mumbled, "Sorry!" uday looked back at her and glared, "Aagayi! Abhi bhi kyun aayi? Poora din udhar hi reh jaati! Idhar mere paas aati-ich kaayko hai? Tumhe toh apne pati ki padi nahi hai!" manyata looked at him miserably but uday did not budge. He knew her enough to know that she was emotionally blackmailing him. He had fallen for her miserable expression many times but not today! manyata sighed as she realized that her regular tactics were not working! She whispered softly, "Maaf kar dona! Woh Mummy aur jay itni der saari baatein kar rahe the ki baaton baaton mein main udhar hi so gayi!" uday cut her off with, "Aur apne pati ko bhool gayi! Jo tere baghair so nahi paata! Jisko tujhe baahon mein liye baghair neend nahi aati! Tu use bhool gayi nai?" He folded his arms and glared at her manyata made a crying face and mumbled, "Maaf kar dona!" uday rolled his eyes. She pouted and walked away from there.

After few minutes, uday felt bad. Yeh maine kya kar diya? Bichaari toh bas apne maayke hi gayi thi na! Woh bhi ek raat ke liye! Aur uska maayka bhi toh kaunsa itna door hai! Idhar hi toh hai! Main faltu me gussa ho gaya! Muje us se baat karni chaahiye! But before he could get up he heard someone whistling. He looked around in confusion when his bedroom door opened and out came his wife dressed in jeans pant and his white kurta. She had bought this kurta after their marriage because she thought he would look good in it. He had worn in many times just because she liked it. He looked at her appreciatively. That kurta suited her much more than him. She waa whistling the music of some song. He realized that she had dressed up like this to amuse him and make him forgive her. He acted as if he was still in anger while in truth his anger had gone down when she entered the room dressed like this.

Manyata sat beside him but he ignored her. She rolled up the sleeves of the kurta and nudged him. He did not react. She started singing a song they had heard few days back on radio one night.

Ae...

Sun

Sun Lena

Sun Mera Kehna Tu

He looked at her curiously and she sang further.

Oh...

Ghaflat Mein

Ghaflat Mein Na Rehna Tu

He made a face as if asking oh really'.

Hmmm...

Jo Din Tere Dil Ke Honge

Toh Hogi Meri Raina

He rolled his eyes and she grabbed his vest and pulled him close. He looked at her in shock. She winked at him.

Tu Abhi Bhi Soch Samajhle

Ke Phir Yeh Na Kehna

She left his vest and shrugged her shoulders.

Ke Tere Mere Beech Mein Kya Hai

When he did not say anything, she got up and walked away. Suddenly, she heard him sing.

Yeh Tere Mere Beech Mein Kya Hai

She turned and tapped her cheek as if thinking and then replied.

Hmmm... Chaddar

He shrugged and got up from the bed while singing.

Ho..

Chaddar Khaddar Ki Armaan Hai Resham Ke

He grabbed her by her waist and pulled her close while she placed her hands on his chest. He continued singing.

Chaddar Khaddar Ki Armaan Hai Resham Ke

Both started singing with a smile on their faces while swaying to the song.

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Finally

Chali Hai Meri Love Life

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Literally

Silly Hai Meri Love Life

Both burst out laughing and she nudged him towards the bathroom and handed him the towel. After a while, he came out of his room dressed in his regular jeans and shirt with jacket and marched towards the terrace where he found her staring at the sky. She had changed back to her regular chudidaar! He hugged her from behind, placed his head on her shoulder and started singing.

Ohh...

She looked back and sang.

Ohh...Tere

He repeated.

Tere

She continued.

Mere

He repeated.

Mere

She sang further.

Tere Mere Tere Beech Mein

He sang the further lines.

Ki Tere Mere Beech Mein

She twisted her neck to look at him and sang.

Mere

Tere

Tere Mere Tere Beech Mein

Tere Mere Beech Mein Kabhi Jo Raaz Ho Koi

Dhoop Mein Chipi Chipi Kahin Jo Raat Ho Koi

He touched his forehead to hers and sang further.

Hooo...

Tere Mere Beech Mein Kabhi Jo Baat Ho Koi

Jeet Mein Chipi Chipi Kahin Pe Maat Ho Koi

He lifted her from behind and swung her around slowly while singing further.

Poochunga Haule Se

Haule Se Hi Jaanunga

Jaanunga Main Haule Se

Tera Har Armaan

He let her down and she turned towards him and sang.

Ahaa

Armaan Khule Hain

Ziddi Bulbule Hain

She grabbed his collar and pulled him close with a mischievous expression on her face.

Armaan Khule Hain

Ziddi Bulbule Hain

Again they smiled and sang together.

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Finally

Chali Hai Meri Love Life

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Literally

Silly Hai Meri Love Life

He grabbed her hand and twirled her around for a while. She bestowed him with one of her smiles. Suddenly, he smiled at her and took a step back. She frowned. He straightened his collar and sang.

Ae...

Sun

Sun Lena

Sun Mera Kehna Tu

She raised an eyebrow as if asking oh really'. He sang further.

Oh...

Ghaflat Mein

Ghaflat Mein Na Rehna Tu

He grabbed her hand and she spun inwards towards him.

Hmmm...

Jo Neend Tu Ne Chheen Li Toh

Toh Main Bhi Loonga Chaina

He spun her outwards and grinned at her.

Tu Abhi Bhi Soch Samajhle

Toh Phir Yeh Na Kehna

He jerked her hand and she slammed into his chest. She looked at him in shock.

Ke Tere Mere Beech Mein Kya Hai

She shrugged and questioned.

Kya Hai

He rolled his eyes and replied.

Tumhein Pata Toh Hai Kya Hai

He sang the question again.

Ke Tere Mere Beech Mein Kya Hai

She frowned for a while and then replied with a smile.

Baatein

He shrugged and tightened his grip on her.

Lambi Baatein Hai Choti Si Raatein Hai

She rolled her eyes and placed her arms on his shoulders and interlocked her hands behind his head.

Lambi Lambi Baatein Hai Choti Si Raatein Hai

Both started singing together again.

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Finally

Chali Hai Meri Love Life

Mili

Mili Hai Jara Khili

Khili Hai Literally

Silly Hai Meri Love Life

He pulled away from her and lifted her up in bridal style. She smiled at him and he sang.

Finally Chali Hai Meri Love Life

He started swaying to the song and she sang in a laughing voice.

Finally Chali Hai Meri Love Life

And this is how uday and manyata spent one of the mornings of their married life; in each others' arms.

THE END

Hope you enjoyed reading the way I enjoyed writing it.

Edited by angleroops - 11 years ago

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HunsraJ thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS. Very romantic😳. I never heard the song before ... ... but after reading the lyrics here; I think I better find it and listen to it😉!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome OS. Very romantic😳. I never heard the song before ... ... but after reading the lyrics here; I think I better find it and listen to it😉!

hey its frm the movie shudh desi romance
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lol my photo editing maine edit esa hi bnai thi bore ho rhi thi or ptha nhi sab ko pasand aa gayi 😉 ... vese its amzing i loved it ... tu ithni achi writer hai mai kya bolu love it ... os ... its so romentic ... i loved it srsly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kritika-

lol my photo editing maine edit esa hi bnai thi bore ho rhi thi or ptha nhi sab ko pasand aa gayi 😉 ... vese its amzing i loved it ... tu ithni achi writer hai mai kya bolu love it ... os ... its so romentic ... i loved it srsly

ha its ur photo eding
its dam good yaar
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woah that was absolutely awesome yar
loved it loads loads loads!!!!
again an awesome writing from you!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waah kya baat hai someone can aslo use song in there os aslo wht a ideal u not only put song but aslo saying in song wht kind of expression they r giving i think that is mind blowing 👏👏really great job and thaxx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome os 👏 Loved it.
Kabhi manveer ko aise sochi nahi thi.
Thanx a lot ki soch ni pari warna itni aschi scene miss karti.
Thanx yaar.is OS ki wajaise ye song pahle sebhi jayada aschi lagne lagi hain.
really You have done a great job.
Edited by shankrishty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS !! Beautifully Written <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, how you? 😊
Awesome os ⭐️
Truly amazing 👏
Loved it loads ❤️
Extremely cute n romantic
Very beautifully written 👍🏼 ⭐️ 😊

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