||The Punishment|| Chapter 3/Note : Page 19 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sanah12

First one to comment!! Yipee
!!
Awesome update!
Loved it to the core!
Poor jay I'm feeling really bad for her.
Manyata shouldn't behave that way with her.
I think that manyata hates uday from the way she was reacting.
Whose grave was manyata at??
It was beautifully written.
Do continue asap.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Vidhi , Awesome update Dear👏. I felt VERY SORRY for Jai 😔 , I don't know what secrets Manyata has , nor do I know who she was missing so much - what I do know is NOTHING can justify her rudeness😡. It is so obvious how her sister feels about her and our PRINCESS ARROGANCE can't even say 2 sweet words to her🤢. So, UdayVeer is Manyata's fianc . GOOD!

Hope he teaches her a lesson or 4😉😈! But what if he is the prey ? 😉😆

Very interesting part Vidhi,

do continue soon ...😊.

Originally posted by: nishaya...

Very very very interesting start Vidhi!

So Jai is the pitiful princess (but however thats great)

Thankfully Uday is not the dead one (am relaxed )

Will love to read this story (finally i am going to be an early reader of one of your stories)

Do update asap

Originally posted by: annabh

hey dear,
an awesome start to an awesome story
i loved the prologue
and i am loving the chapter even more
OMG i can't believe jai kamini
is the innocent one here
really manyata behaved in a very rude way
but i am happy that uday
is not the one who is dead
i am very eager for their meeting
do update asap
huggs

Originally posted by: shankrishty

Wow the prologue was so good.
LOVED IT.
chapter one was awsome.
beautifully written.
though i missed uday but i really enjoyed the chap.

Originally posted by: san.gar

Please continue soon...

Originally posted by: catty2000

<font size="2">You won't enjoy if i tell you everything now ! Would you ?😉</font>

<font size="2">BTW thank you for this lovely comment😳</font>

Originally posted by: catty2000