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@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey!
awesome update
u have written it beautifully
do continue soon
i'm waiting for it
btwn hanks for the pm

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

NICE CHAPPY & CS.
CONTINUE SOON.
DANXS FOR PM.

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

HEY CS AND PART 1 IS FAV

WAITING FOR UDAY TO CUM

AND TAKE MANYATA WITH HIM

WHEN UDAY WILL CUM

YAAR MANYATA IS SO SMALL

PLS CONTNUE SOON

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice update!
oh my 15 years mein koi shaadi tay karta hai kya??
Uday manyata ko bhaga ke le jao he he he!
update soon

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Priyanka

@capriya

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

hai its very nice update..manyata is sleeping till 10am wow!i feel jealous of her...who is raj, sanaya and shivani?pls update their photos...thank you for pm.continue...

Edited by capriya - 12 years ago

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Nice chappy! loved it

Thanx for the pm and do continue soon

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey! Nice Chapter ,it was amazing⭐️😊

Do continue soon...😉 oh and ty for the pm😉

Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 12 years ago

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srishty

@shankrishty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

CHAPTER TWO
Manyata was trying to relax her..
ON THE OTHER HAND ELDERS WERE FIXING HER MARRIAGE WITH YUVRAJ RAJ SINGH.RAJ WAS ALSO THERE.
Ds:to boliye beta aapko manyata apni maharani sikar hain.
raj:ds..ahn..applogo ko jo sahi lagta hain wahi ki jiye.
ds smiled.
raj:waise hum manyata se millsakh te hain.
Ds:sure beta.aibhe koye puchne wali bath hain.
raj:thnx ds.
ds:welcome beta.
Raj leaved from there.
raj entered manyata's room.
m:maners bholgaye ho kya.young or khubhsuraat larkio k knock karna parta hain.
r:nahi bhole.par thora confused hogaya tha.soch raha tha bacho k kamre main gushne se pahle knock karoo ya na karo.
m:agar main bacha hoon toh ek bacha se shadi karne main problem nahi hoge.
raj:toh news agae aap tak.
M:hamara palace hain yuvraj.hame saabh pata hain.
r:toh rokh kue nahi paye.
m:hume fresh hona hai,change karna hain.so aap ja sakhte hain.
r:sure.
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Unnati to uday
un:dada aapko pata hain kaya horaha hain yaha.
manyata ki shadi tay ho gaye hain rajse.
ud:what??
un:dada aap kuch ki jiye nah.
ud:hum karkya saakh te hain.hamare haath kuch nahi hain.
uday left from there.
unnati dialed manyata's number.
un:hello,manyata.
m:haan bolo unnati uday ne kya kaha.
un:aisa kuch nahi jaisa tum soonnah chahte ho.
m:aab hum kya kare??
un:pata nahi.
m:hum rakhte hain koye araha hain.
Jai came.
m:oh tum.bohaat kush ho nah.
j:bohaat jyada.
m:disgusting.
j:oh..manyata raj itnabhi bora nahi hain.
m:really.to tumhi karlo.
j:manya...
M:niklo
j:manyata...sona
m:i said niklo.
jai left and manyata started crying.,
jai dailed raj's number.
j:hello,raj
r:haan bolo jai.
j:manyata ki halat bohaat bori hain.
r:kue? Kya howa manyata ko??
j:bho..darwaja bandh kar k bas rorahi hai.
r:hum arahe hain.
Srishty

Edited by shankrishty - 12 years ago