MANVEER FF:A STRANGE LOVE STORY

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Nishaya

@Nash..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice prologue nd cs

Do continue soon!

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angleroops

@angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hey nice cs

pls continue soon

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

first of all sorry for late reply
and as concerned with update!
cs is fantastic!!
continue soon

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Priyanka

@capriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

continue ...superb concept...love to read it...

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srishty

@shankrishty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

CHAPTER 0NE
In devgardh palace
15years old manyata is sleeping peacefully in her bed.j came in her room and saw her.
j to herself:i really don't know what should i do with her.j shouted
j:manyata...manyata utho.manyata.
Manyata in a sleepy tone:kya howa hain?itne subha subha kue chikh rahi ho.
j:kue ki jise aap itne subha kahrahe ho bho itne bhi subha nahi hain.10 baaj rahai hain.
m:toh.ajtoh holiday hain.
j:toh??
m:toh aap hume sone dijeya.
j:aah..f9 am leaving pher badh me nahi kahna ki hum ne bolaya nahi.
m:nahi kahengge.
j left and manyata again fell in sleep.
After some time princess shivani came in manyata's room.
s:oh shit.
she shaked manyata's body and She shouted:manyata utho.bahar raj ka parivar aya hain.
M:toh?
s:toh..matlab?bahar raj or tumare shadi ke barain me baath horahi hain.
m:what??how could they do this to me??they know i love uday.
s:so??
m:so ka kya matlab hain.
s:so ka yea matlab hain ki tum uday se payar karti ho bho nahi.
m:mujhain pata hain bho bhi ek din jaroor kare ga.
s:i don't think so.
m:shut up.mujhai abhi jana parega or subh kuch rookh na parega.
she was about to go out side when shivani stopped her by saying this:fine jao.paar yadh rakhna bahaar poora mahasabha hain.tum hare kisi bhi prakar ki galti tumhari pori pari bhar ko melaige.
m:toh main kya karoon.
S:i dont know.baas itna kahsakhti hoon jobhi karna hai badh me soch samajh k karna.
saying this she left.
manyata was hell confused.she then dialed her best friend sanaya's number.
Sanaya in a sleepy tone:hello.
m:meri needh urgaye hain or to waha soo rahi hain
s:kya howa baby.
m:margae.
s:acha toh me kya teri atma se baath karrahi hoo🤣🤣
m:toh hash rahii hain.pata hain humarai sath kya horaha hain.
s:kya?
m:humari shadi tai ho choki hain obhi raj se.
s:kya shadi tay ho choki par kaise.matlab abhi toh serf 15 saal ki hain.
m:saadhi tay ho choki hain howa nahi hain.jaabh hum bari honge taabh hogi.par tooh main point pe focus kar humari shaadi raj se tai howa hain.
s:haanh toh??
m:areyy toh hum kya kare??
s:relax manyata.tonahi toh kaha shaadi jaabh toh bari hogi taabh hogi.aabh bari hone main abhi bohaat waqt time hain.or taabh taakh kuch na kuch hohi jaye ga.so relax.
m:sure nah??
s:yes i am.aabh phone rakh.
M:bye
s:bye.
manyata felt relax.
finally i updated.feel really good.sorry for the late update.actully i m veryy busy in this days.so again sorry.
Srishty

Edited by shankrishty - 12 years ago

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srishty

@shankrishty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

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