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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey... Srishty...

I jst read the prolouge, CS, chappy 1, 2 and 3...

And they are all just awesome..

Pata nahi Manyata ko kya hua...

But ps update soon..

And pls.. pls.. PM me..

Edited by nityatandon - 11 years ago

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

hey!
how's u?
sorry dear for late reply
well cmng to the update
i'm in bit confusion
why manyata hates uday ?
what happened to uday, sudden change in his behaviour
i hope it will reveal soon
please dear continue soon
i'm eagerly waiting to read more
& please do pm me, if possible

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

hey

welcome to the forums...

interesting prolouge...

looking forward to read it...

update soon

LOVE ANMOL<3

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

hey
how are you
thanks for the update but
i am hell confushed
i think jai is getting married to raj
coz so that manyata can marry uday
but then why does she hates him
and why did he start loving her
what does she mean that he
can never be like raj
i am so confushed please update
the next chappy now
pleaaseee

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

nice update!
manyata loves Uday
and raj loves manyata
but shaadi j se kar raha hai!.
toh UV kisse pyaar karta hai?
update soon

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Priyanka

@capriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Superb! Excited to know what happened in the past! Thanks for the PM. Continue soon...

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srishty

@shankrishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

CHAPTER 4 part1
In jaigarh palace
Uday is getting ready for the party when a female voice says:party ki saare larkio ko pagal karne ka erada hain kya,dada.
Uday turns and with a smile replies:saare nahi baas ek pagal ho thats enough.
Un:pagal ko kya pagal karna.
U:choti !!
A male voice says:unnati,sahi toh kahrahi hain.
It is griraj.
U:Dad apbhi.
G:haan hum bhi.apko kya lagta hain hume apse jayada devgarh payara hain.
U:choti ap jake taiar ho jayea.
Unnati nods and leaves the place.
U:apko kya ho kya gaya hain.humne kya nahi kia hain devgarh ko pane k leyah.or ab jaabh milraha hain ap...
G:devgarh aapse jayada important nahi hain.
U:i know dad.apbe fikar raia hume pata hain hum kya kar rahaihai,dad.apbe fikar raiya.
G:agar apko pata hain thats good.par apbhi janlijia agar apko kabi bi lage ki apko ye shadi nahi karni ap baifikar hume bata dena.

Uday nods and griraj leaves.

In devgarh palace

Edited by shankrishty - 11 years ago

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srishty

@shankrishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

CHAPTER 4 part 2
J is ready.then she things:challo manyata se mill k atai hain.
On the other hand.manyata is sitting on her bed.she is not ready.sanaya comes in manyats room.manyata stands up.
S:man..oh! you r not ready.
S:hey what happened?Why are you not ready?
M:humara mode nahi hain hume nahi jana party me.
S:que?Nahi jana tum hari tabiyat toh thik hain na?Doctor uncle ko bolao.
M:nahi hume bas nahi jana.
S:que?
M:bas nahi jana.

m:aise kya dekh raha hain.
S:nothing.bas soch rahain ki mujhain laga tha ki j sabse jyada selfish hain.par tum ne toh jai ko bhi pichai chor dia.
M:agar tumhain lagta hain hum tum hari baat sunke apna faisla badlangge to tum galat ho.
S:bho tum hari behan hain.or aj uski jivaan ki saabh se important din hain or tum..
M:tujhain josamajh na hain samajh par hume party me nahi jana.
When J comes in.
J:aap nichai jayea.hume manyata se kuch baat karni hain.
Sanaya nods &leaves.
J:what the hall is wrong with you?
M:what happened?
J:wahi toh kya howa hain.que tumhain party main nahi jana?
M:arai...shadi tumhari hain or tum jarahai ho.hum jaye ya najaye isse kya farak parta hai.
J:farak parta hain.hume farak parta hain.behan hain ap hamari.
J:humari sach batao do you love raj?
Manyata looks at j.
J:bolo.
Manyata nods in a no.
J:then?
M:hum bohat selfish hain.tumhain humse ascha pati milrahahain is liya,i am really very sorry,jiji.please forgive me.
They hug.when they break the hug j says:uday tumse bohaat payar karta hain.tum phersain galti kar rahi ho.
M:jiji,aptoh ready hogaye hain ab humain ready honai do.
J smiles and manyata smiles back.j leaves.
Srishty

Edited by shankrishty - 11 years ago