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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope anni get well soon
missintg u lt pls take care of ur self
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

i hope anni get well soon

missintg u lt pls take care of ur self


hey i am back already thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey very nice story... Pls add me to ur pm list...n update soon... Tc
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Posted: 12 years ago

i will try to update
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Originally posted by: saakhi01

Hey very nice story... Pls add me to ur pm list...n update soon... Tc


awn i am glad you liked it you are already added in my pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

*~ A Stolen Beat ~*

He felt himself rooted to the ground , he was unable to move , for the first time he could feel his heart breaking , as he saw her disappearing into the crowd , how badly his arms wanted to take her in his embrace, the thought of another guy in her life prickled his heart , he had no idea why was he so hurt ,after all it was his decision to push her away from his life , but his attention was grabbed on the ayaz guy , he was so envy on him and hated him . uday had no idea why was he behaving like this and at what was he so mad to prevent himself from showering his anger on anyone he marched to his room , locking the door behind he could get nothing to take his anger out , since the very first time they met again she had been irking him by his behavior , since the very day she left he found himself lost and hurt each passing day grew like living hell and now that he got her back he did not want to leave her , he wanted her , he needed her , he lo… he was messed with his own feeling as he lay his head down and the day came to his mind

FLASHBACK

His shirt was unbuttoned as he laid on her , she had always been his best playtime toy , only he was aware how he took out time from his over possessive girl friend and family to be with her , he did not have the slightest guilt of betraying the girl who loved her as to him manyata was more of a chewing gum she never let him go further than a kiss and what good ito keep a girl friend who cannot even fulfill your manly needs well this was what uday thought while his needs were fulfilled by Racheal his classmate , manyata had been totally unaware of this uday affair which had been going since past few months though her father and all her friends had warned her but she ignored as she trusted him but no longer as she stormed inside the chemistry lap to collect her files but the scene she watched shocked her , as he too felt her presence he stood up as her eyes were filled with tears and she lost her balance and crumbled on the floor crying her heart out Racheal understanding the depth of situation sneeked out from there as she continued to cry her sobs irked him as he proceeded towards her and touched her shoulder while she shrugged his hands off and said in a hurtful voice with tears flowing continuiously off her eyes

Why uday ?why did you do this to me?if you did not want me in your life you could simply say me I would have walked out of your life but why did you betray me ?

Her words pierced his heart like stones but instead of appolozising he showered his anger on her as he scolded saying

Oh please we were not even a couple come on grow up manyata we are not living a fairy tale and the truth is I never loved you the only reason I was paired with you as because I pitied you ok so it is OVER

Saying this he left her all alone covered with tears

FLASHBACK OVER

Dusk had fallen heavily over the whole place as He sat there as unknown to him tears fell from his eyes , the thought of another boy in manyata life made his heart ripe apart . now could he fell what manyata had felt the day he ditched her and broke her trust . but this time she had just moved on then why did he hurt so bad as he grabbed the flower vast from the side table and threw it on the floor as it broke into million pieces , he viewed his face in one of the broken pieces and realized how broken his life had become since the time she uttered those words , those beautiful days they spend together came to his mind the very first time he proposed to her and then all crumbled down by her one sentence as he trapped the necklace in his wrist and said with a smile which was from his heart , his entire life he thought from his brain but now finally he was taking a decision from his heart and he was aware he would never regret for it as he said

I had locked my feelings in the ice box for long enough but now it is time I unlock it , since the day you left I realize I lost myself but it is time I get myself back after I found you I am begun to live slowly again . what an effect of your love on me is there in me that now my every beat of heart takes only your name I do not care about you engagement or the world as my heart have already crossed its limit in your love I love you manyata and no matter what you will be mine and only mine

Saying this he tossed on the sides of the bed with a sweet smile playing on his face , a turmoil ran inside his mind , he wanted to tell her , he had already been very late in realizing his feeling now by delaying his love for her he did not want to loose her forever so without even thinking for a singal moment he raced to her room which was vertically opposites to his he flung open the door just to see the love of his life sitting there like an angle with a pink salwar her eyes were indeed alerted by his presence so where the others pair of eyes shocked to one was a man and another a lady as manyata stood and before she could even utter a word uday marched to her and pulled her into his embrace as he finally screamed his heart out to her saying

I love you manyata

All in the room was shocked soon manyata pushed him aside he looked at her alarmed as she turned towards the man who by now was boiling in anger as she managed to part her lips and said

Manav dada this is uday veer singh



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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anni...
Yippeee am first to comment...

Well it's been very long that I have commented and now am breaking the silence lol...

Howz u???
Thank god u r back...

Well the update was fantastic as usual...

Am really happy that uday realized his love for manyata...
Hope its not too late...

God uday just confessed his feelings to manyata in front of all...

Don't know wat will happen...

Do continue soon plz...
And thanx for the pm..
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i think uday deserve this
i hate uday he btrayed her in past
i hope manyata doesnt forgive him so fast
now see how the story moves
thankxxx for pm
and for wonderful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomest update!
Loved it loads!
Uday finally realised his love for manyata but alas its too late.
Poor manyata how uday said that he just pitied her.
I felt like hitting uday.
I just hope uday gets a lesson and iwant him to burn in jealousy.
OMG he went and just told her.
Isn't he an idiot before even asking for forgiveness he just said I love you.
Who's this manav dada?
From the way he was angry looks like uday is getting beaten.
I am eagerly waiting for the next update so do continue asap.
Thnxx for the pm.

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