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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...uday on a horse wow...i think the lady whom he saved is murderer...i hope i m not right...precap is scary...and thanks for pm...


thanks prerna for liking it...well to know more about the lady u have to wait for the updtaes😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oh my that was a great update gargi!!!!.
well uday is really brave
beautifully written..
I doubt the lady UV saved!!
update soon



thanks Mahi😳...Uday has to be brave as he is a knight n saving the citizens is his duty...well lets see who the lady is😊

Thanks for the lovely comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishaya...

Very nice chappy Gargi di but wish,it could be little lengthier.
Eagerly waiting to read next part
Please continue soon




Hi nishaya...thanks for liking the chappy..sorry for the late reply..m replying everyone in installments as net is slow...i know it was short as i was updating late night...ill continue soon and PM you🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...anju...

faboulous gargi...wel written.loved it loads👏

dont u think update was too small.hehehe.compensate in next one gargi.

promo sounds quite confusing.now cant wait.continue soon.n danxs for pm.



thanks anju...😊...i know update was small as i was sleepy n wrote at midnight...next time will try to make it long😆...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

"Beauty is something which even in a veil can be recognized it as Beautiful"--- i jst lovedd dis line,its absoltely true,lovedd the knight's sincerity!!! the way he saved the grl,bt who maay be she,kya hoga aage,hmm mysteryy!!! awesomeee updatee!!!!😊😊



thanks pia...glad u loved those lines..it just came to my mind...knights are supposed to be chivalrious and chaste...aage kya hoga uske liye wait for the upcoming chapter😉..

thanks for the lovely comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


So this time I AM LATE ... 🤣----no prob vidhi...for ur updates m always more than late...so tumhara itna late hona chalta hai🤣 Yeah you are late this time too ! No offence i am just kidding !

I would have commented earlier but i wrote the comment twice and twice the there were power cuts ... 😡
That's irritating ... 🤣---thats hell annoying...i would have given many galis to my lappy and the govt for power cuts🤣🤣 Me too kind of the same !

Anyways,
The update was SUPERB !---ohh thanks dear😳

You wrote it so beautifully !--really?..glad u feel that way😛

Your writing gave that ANCIENT FEELING ... aww i like ancient stories..u know that Yeah i know !
Loved your chapter 😳

Uday on a horse ...
Reminds me of VEER IN SAVITRI ... 😳
He took such a superb entry !----i saw him today in his third episode, but the show seems funny to me..its too much like a setup...😕 Same here !

I am going out of track ... 🤣
The last part was ... nice !-----don't worry ill put everything in order now..that's my job

Precap is scary !
Is someone being murdered ?----if i tell u now what will u read in the next chapter Right !

Waiting to read more !---aww...thats a grt thing for me😛

Continue soon ...-----thanks...i will
Thanks for the PM !----your welcome vidhi🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago


hey vidhi...what new comment did u write?...i didn't get it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gargi i answered your comment in BLACK !

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



hey vidhi...what new comment did u write?...i didn't get it


silly me...now i see the comments😆...we think too much alike Vidhi...bt i really loved the concept of ur FF...intelligent idea👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago


SS----

Chapter 3

The lady went along with Knight Udayveer to his house which was on a hill top. She sat on the horse with him and he galloped the horse towards his place. On the way there were a few jerks which made both of them a bit uncomfortable but Uday tried to keep a distance between them as he himself hesitated to mix with the opposite sex.

As they reached Udayveer showed the woman a guest room. His house was beautiful, but had few things, kept quite neatly, it was a decent house which gave it a feeling of warrior's house. Two swords were hanging at the wall, a big and beautiful flower vase kept in the corner and portraits of his great ancestors who were chivalrous warriors too were hung on the wall. The lady looked at the surroundings from her veil and said

"seems your ancestors were also great fighters like you knight?..." the lady faced towards Uday

Udayveer smiled and said with pride...

"Not just fighters but Warriors!...we are known for protecting the people from generations and i uphold that tradition...Its quite late night now..i think you should rest so that tomorrow morning you can go from here as you want that..."

"The lady nodded and replied softly..

"It seems you are in too much hurry for me to leave this place. Why? are you scared that your name will be blotted in black if anyone sees me here?...Is Knight Udayveer so scared of a lady..." she began laughing which irritated him

"Hey I am a Shoorveer Yodha...What people have to say doesn't make any difference to me.I told because its only you who was so conscious before coming to my house in the jungle. you said people in the society will take it wrongly. I only advised you because of that..."


the lady nodded and retreated to the room showed to her, while Udayveer went to his bedroom which was just adjacent to the guest room.He was quite tired after the celebration party and then the fight in jungle and so fell asleep instantly...

IN the middle of the night a sudden scream made Udayveer wake up. At first he thought it was his dream but then when the screams increased he realized it came from the nearby room where the lady was sleeping...

He hurried towards her room to see what happened and found the window open and she was sitting with her right leg spread on the bed. She was continuously wailing which worried Udayveer and forced him to rush to her.

"What happened lady?...why are you crying so much?..."

"Ahhh hh aaa...my leg...i think a snake bit me on my leg...ahhh" she showed the part where it was bitten, just below her knee" her fair milky white skin glowed inspite of the swelled area which was bit by the reptile making Udayveer uncomfortable to look at it and praise it in his mind. He got lost at her legs but after a few minutes regained his composure and turned his face to look to her. Being in the room alone made her remove the ghoonghat and its then he realized why the goons must have been after her. She was definitely a beauty to be praise. Those beautiful big eyes, the petal like lips, all enclosed in that fair milky skin. She was a beautiful portrait who any painter would like to boast upon!..


"Am i going to die now?...ahhh" she started weeping more which brought Uday back to his senses...

"Ohh don't think like that...I am sure it was not a poisonous one as this area doesn't have such reptiles..I have lived here for many years and i know this place quite well...But you need to treat this infected area right now." ...saying this he took her to the bathroom to wash the part before it led to any infection.

He gave her a jug of water and asked her to wash it but she even panicked in seeing the wound as the area became purple and was swelled. Her condition led Uday wash the wound although he felt a bit uncomfortable in doing it, he thought it was his responsibility to heal the lady in pain. He knelt down and asked her to rest her leg on his thigh to which she obeyed as he said. Then he gently lifted up her ghagra till her knee and started washing the wounded area. The water droplets falling on her skin made his heart pound with desires which were unknown to him. That beautiful skin was doing magic to his eyes and to his heart. She had beautiful legs too..

"Ohh God, how can a woman be so flawlessly beautiful. God must have made some mistake in making her?...None of the woman has been able to influence me like this and am thinking here of a married woman...This is wrong, please forgive me God..." while he said this he stared at her soft leg and his fingers caressed her wounded skin...

The woman lifted her ghagra two inch more as some water fell at the end of the ghagra making it wet and her beautiful thigh was half in view and Udayveer's eyes unknowingly traveled to newly found area and admired it...

"Ahhh..beautiful!.."

"Pardon me but what did you say?..." the lady asked as she overheard his words..

"Ohh i mean that was not required to do..." Udayveer replied in a shy manner not able to look at her

"But i thought it will help you to wash my wounds more properly..."she gave a smile to him...

"Its alright we are done with the washing. You need to apply some medicine now. I have some herbal medicines, if you apply it, relief will be seen soon." said Udayveer maintaining a knight's composure

The lady nodded and followed to his bedroom and was handed a bottle contains some herbs n liquid. She looked at it and asked him confusingly

"I don't know what to do with this..Can you apply this on the area please?..."...she told him innocently

"I am sorry but i think you don't need to panic now as the wound is washed. All you need to do is put these herbs and liquid in the affected area and you will see the difference till morning..After that go to sleep as you need some rest." ...saying this he helped her to her room and returned back to his.

The beautiful lady was quite taken aback by this gesture of the man who was too much lost in her magical beauty some time back...He was definitely not like the ones who were ready to forget their duty, their virtues to possess a beauty to the full!


A few months back...


A man was sleeping peacefully in his house, which was not less that a small elegant palace. The architecture could evidently tell anyone that he was a wealthy merchant of the Nagar. It was a full moon night and the nagar was completely silent as it was late midnight, but this man had to be awake suddenly as he heard a knock on his door. At first he didn't pay much heed to it, thinking no one could come at this hour of the night, but later when the knock turned to a bang, he got worried and opened the door. Little did he realize that he would be taken by surprise mixed with shock at such an odd time...A lady in a pink ghagra and white choli which was done in gold embroidery was waiting at his doorsteps. She was in ghoonghat but the veil could not cover her beautiful pink lips that were so prominent even in the moonlight. The man looked at her beautiful milky skin, her divine feet which were kissed by a golden heavy anklet and hands covered with several pink bangles. Her lips twisted a bit, which made him realize that she was either worried or bothered by something.

After a few minutes of continuous silence, the girl replied...

"I have lost my way while going to my town. Its very late night and am scared to proceed further. Can you be kind enough to give me shelter for the night. I will leave early morning."

The man instantly agreed to take her in. Denying such a beautiful creature was just not in his set of rules!..But he was also cunning...

"But i don't let anyone rest freely in my house. What if you are an intruder or a thief?...i can' t take the risk..." he said with a cunning smile..

"Ahh...how do i make you believe my condition. I am not a thief, but come from a very well being family. i don't need to rob someone when i have plenty..." the lady replied helplessly to him.

"Ohh you don't have to do much for that. Just show me your face once so that i can identify who you are..." he said with a mild grin

"But how can i do that..This is against our custom...You are a stranger to me, and showing my face to you is against the culture. What will people say?..." she replied helplessly..

"Hahaha...don't worry about the people. No one will know about it. If you can stay in a stranger's house, then why not show your face to this stranger?..Besides i am doing this for my security and its my demand and not a request..." He said in a harsh tone this time

The girl thought for some moment and then lifted up her ghoonghat to show her face to the man.

"Wow girl i must say you are quite beautiful and no less than any enchantress. How does God make someone flawlessly beautiful?...I am amazed at such a wonderful creation!"

The girl felt uncomfortable and quickly lowered her ghoonghat and covered her face..

"I think i have done my duty of giving my identity, now will you be merciful in offering me shelter at your house please?..."

The man nodded and showed her a room where she could spend the night and told her to call him if she needed any help

The beauty that he had witnessed some while ago was not ready to leave his mind, and he tossed in his bed. He could not believe that
the girl was sleeping just some distances away in his own house but he could not see her again. No he could definitely not let that happen. His wife had gone to her maternal home and he was all alone with this girl and it was the best opportunity to see her again whether she wanted or not!...

he quietly entered the room and stood amazed looking at her peacefully sleeping. She looked more beautiful asleep.

"Shh don't worry its me, be quiet, i could not resist your beautiful body so please pardon me for this action..." the man said huskily as the girl woke up in bed...

"Hmm..you all men act in the same way seeing me. Well i am used to this kind of behavior, after all apsaras are meant to be beautiful and enchanting!..." said the girl with a shy smile

"Ohh so you were acting for so long to a pious in front of me?.." said the man a bit shocked..

"No not at all, i did forget my way to home, but now as i can see you have no good intentions, then why do i remain quiet and bring a loss to me?.." she said getting up from the bed.

"What?...What do you mean?.." said the man who looked confused...

she walked slowly but in a seductive way with the sound of her payal ringing with her every walk

"If you want some pleasure i need some pleasure too!..you will give me half of your wealth and in turn i will give you all the love that you have only craved for in so many years!"...she replied confidently...

"How how do you know about my private life?..." he was more than shocked now...

"Why am i wrong?...don't deviate from the topic now...Do you want to have a memorable night or you want me to leave your place?" she asked while removing her aachal from her body leaving her blouse and ghagra to exposure

That was it and he forgot what he was talking and his action spoke every word...

He started kissing her passionately, while she returned his every kiss with equal intensity which amazed him. Women were so shy in returning the kiss but this lady was one of a kind! Now he wanted to master her, as he knew if he didn't take the lead she could outsmart him and he would be dominated in the bed...He threw her in the bed and jumped above her..

"Ahhh..easy Mahashay (gentleman) i am not going anywhere.. Take it easy.." she replied with a laugh...

"Don't dare to give me orders again understand!..." the man ordered in a demanding voice and almost tore her blouse and ghagra was removed in a minute...

But his demanding voice was not much likeable by her as he saw some fireballs in her eyes and her face became horrible for a fraction of seconds which took him aback...

"Wha what was that?..." he asked with a shock..

"Nothing...don't you want to continue...I will not let you stop again..that's my promise..." the girl replied and got over him in an instant

She tore of his vest and his dhoti that he was wearing for the night and began biting him all over his chest...

"Ahhh" his screams turned her more but to soothe his pain she planted wet kisses in all the sore area.

"aahhh..ohhh...you apsaras can be so good at times. Oh my God, i can't believe this. At this moment its hard to imagine who is the actual warrior in action. You or me...hahaha.."

"Its me LOVE..." she replied with a crooked smile...

"Ohh really?..i see...You have not seen me in action till now then.." the men got challenged and turned her over this time...Their battle as in who was the master continued and the surrounding became quite steamy and intense with their mourns of pleasure.

They start smooching each other and wildly kneading each other's body when it becomes suffocating, uncontrollable, but still very intense and desirable...his hands almost smashing her soft tender body, while she almost about to crush his manly abs like a PULP!!

"Ahhh...you are too strong looking at your tender and slender body...No one can imagine a tigress in the veil of a cow..."

"Whatever you see is not always the reality my Love and you will know this today..." the girl replied with a laugh and ripped of his chest with her nails like a hungry tigress..

"Ahhh..what is gone wrong with you..wait this is paining..." the man started to stop..

"Why? aren't you enjoying?...Am trying to bring the man out of you?...when you pound on poor helpless girls like this then do you think how much are they in pain?..." she replied with a roaring tone...

"What what have got on you?...please no i don't want to make love to you..stop this please..." he tried to beg with fear now seeing her madness but it seemed she was in no mood to stop her actions...

"But i am not done yet...this will be the most memorable night ever for you..You wanted to make one huh?...hahaaha" she laughed hysterically and he looked at her helplessly

She pounced more on him until blood oozed out of his body. Seeing his tears and his helpless screams made her more evil Her face became horrific and it was no longer beautiful. She twisted his legs and hands and cut each part of his body into parts with an axe that she produced magically. The room now looked no longer passionate but bloody and horrific and as her work was done she robbed all his possessions, wealth and jewelry and turned back to admire one last time at her work...

"You man only deserve such a death and no mercy at all!..."

she smiled cunningly and disappeared in the air!...

Present:

Udayveer was a different personality all together and could not be easily attracted by any external attractions. He was more bounded by duty and moralities. While he was sleeping quietly in his room someone was not able to breathe properly and for the first time she found her task so challenging.

"He seems to be too proud of his virtues!..I will see how long you can stop yourself from being attracted to me. Only then can i kill you till my pleasure!.."




Phewww...Done with the chapter guys..This was too long and i promise never to write so much again it took all my energy which was already not much in my body due to my illness...So please like and comment guys..It would be really appreciated...My appeal also goes to the silent members of the forum...

Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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