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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

"what a waste of beauty. If beauty is something which claims praise in this way from every men, then i despise such beauty and grace. Beauty is something which even in a veil can be recognized it as Beautiful!..." he said to himself..

Artistic lines truely 👍🏼

"Don't be so sarcastic towards beautiful women son. You don't know what Godly beauty can do. If you fall in love with any of the beauties, you are gone for ever. That can be more devastating than even solving a horrible murder mystery. Women bring sorrow as much as she can bring happiness. Never underestimate them..."

These staements are also very true and you have written very cleverly ... good job Gargi 👍🏼

Ever since Uday was a child he would dream about mountains, hills, rivers and he in a mask and a sword, driving the horse like crazy, and a girl, who would scream at the top of her voice, which only irritated him, rather than making him feel bad for her, whom he thought his duty to save, and save himself from her shrill voice which would have definitely deafened his ears in his sleep. Only after he would save her, and kill the demons who must have abducted her, he heaved a sigh of relief!

I started laughing reading his strange dreams 😆

But later it turned horrible

I guess the innocent girl is Manyata...and she is the beautiful deception right!! 😉

Kya precap hain boss!!! 😉

Oh sorry for mentioning late...its great update 👍🏼

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: panchaali
Full updte kore Pm koro...I am sleepy so not displeasing my bed anymore...looking forward to read your story...'😊

Oh one more news...I have seen Asish in Savitri today...in a dark horse and in an ancient era...inan ancient attire...it felt like my dream and your dream came truuu together...😃

Hum dono ne milke use 1000 years back poucha hi diya finally!!!! 😃

pachali,i have a very odd qstn for u,dnt get shocked,r u a bengali?? actualy tumhara ek sentence parke mujhe jst laga,so asking u😊😊

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

"Beauty is something which even in a veil can be recognized it as Beautiful"--- i jst lovedd dis line,its absoltely true,lovedd the knight's sincerity!!! the way he saved the grl,bt who maay be she,kya hoga aage,hmm mysteryy!!! awesomeee updatee!!!!😊😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: pia.raha

pachali,i have a very odd qstn for u,dnt get shocked,r u a bengali?? actualy tumhara ek sentence parke mujhe jst laga,so asking u😊😊

Ha go ami bengali..puro Kokata r bengali 😊

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rockingal09

@rockingal09

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Hey Gargi di
hwz u?
update was superb...👏 beautifully written 👍🏼
bt chotusa update tha ... fir b loved it 😳

"aaahhh ahhhaahhh hheeeaaahhh...bachao humei bachao"

i think this girl is manyata... but is she really innocent??😆

"i don't have a home. My swami left me"...

iska matlab uski shaadi hui hai??😲 ya fir uday ke ghar ghusne k liye ye sab 😆

I guess d beautiful deception is manyata n nw she wants to kill uday isliye usne ye sab plan banaya

Precap sounds interesting...👍🏼 bt m really confusd nw... 😕
ummm...🤔 confusion hi confusion hai solution kuch pata nahi.. 😆
i thnk it will b solvd in nxt chapters so waiting for it... 😳
Update soon n thanx for d PM 😃

Edited by rockingal09 - 12 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: NaughtyDreamGal
first i read prologue it's awsome nice written but bit of confused but nice u describtion is awsum ur style of writiing lovingly n attracting...

chapter one is still rocking uday veer smirkn written updated very nicly uday n all so nice updates awsum please add me in ur pm list.please n whenevr update den pm me

chapter two is amazing aweee...very nice n attracting story intresting n name so nice story name i loved it n story more den attracting n awsom idea thinking writting style colours all very nicly u do it keep it up...

ps:please make index...so it's easy 4 new readers read 4 through index easily...

thank you...😊😊😊

first i read prologue it's awsome nice written but bit of confused but nice u describtion is awsum ur style of writiing lovingly n attracting...---thanks for all the lovely compliments...m elated😳😛...but why are you confused...do ask if you have any doubts

chapter one is still rocking uday veer smirkn written updated very nicly uday n all so nice updates awsum please add me in ur pm list.please n whenevr update den pm me...alright surely ill PM you dear😊

chapter two is amazing aweee...very nice n attracting story intresting n name so nice story name i loved it n story more den attracting n awsom idea thinking writting style colours all very nicly u do it keep it up...---aww...thank you so much...happy that u liked the story title😳

ps:please make index...so it's easy 4 new readers read 4 through index easily...ok...ya u have shared a very imp thing...ill make an index😊

thank you...😊😊😊---your welcome dear🤗

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

wow!! gargi great update...

read the first part as soon as you scraped me, and read the remaining today morning as soon as i got up...

just lovely

loved how uday never lowered his guard even after the murders stopped... thats our brave uday

uday at the party too was great, in modern world he could have been a criminal investigator... he has all the qualities, just intelligent

i agree with what the king said to him about women

his dream just got me captured - saving a damsel in distress and finally that damsel itself killing him, it sounded as a premonition of the events to follow...

now who was that damsel in distress??? was it our "villian"are those bandits her people, was that a set up? a lot of questions are troubling me...

the promo was very good... cant wait to see what happens next

do update soon gargi

and thanks for the scraps and pms

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: panchaali
"what a waste of beauty. If beauty is something which claims praise in this way from every men, then i despise such beauty and grace. Beauty is something which even in a veil can be recognized it as Beautiful!..." he said to himself..

Artistic lines truely 👍🏼

"Don't be so sarcastic towards beautiful women son. You don't know what Godly beauty can do. If you fall in love with any of the beauties, you are gone for ever. That can be more devastating than even solving a horrible murder mystery. Women bring sorrow as much as she can bring happiness. Never underestimate them..."

These staements are also very true and you have written very cleverly ... good job Gargi 👍🏼

Ever since Uday was a child he would dream about mountains, hills, rivers and he in a mask and a sword, driving the horse like crazy, and a girl, who would scream at the top of her voice, which only irritated him, rather than making him feel bad for her, whom he thought his duty to save, and save himself from her shrill voice which would have definitely deafened his ears in his sleep. Only after he would save her, and kill the demons who must have abducted her, he heaved a sigh of relief!

I started laughing reading his strange dreams 😆
But later it turned horrible
I guess the innocent girl is Manyata...and she is the beautiful deception right!! 😉
Kya precap hain boss!!! 😉

Oh sorry for mentioning late...its great update 👍🏼

Originally posted by: panchaali
"what a waste of beauty. If beauty is something which claims praise in this way from every men, then i despise such beauty and grace. Beauty is something which even in a veil can be recognized it as Beautiful!..." he said to himself..

Artistic lines truely 👍🏼

thanks payel...that just came to me...i was writing on the middle of the night as u must have realized, and i decided to do that as a creepy story like this would be well done, with a lot of dreamy imagination😆...n so even the lines might sound too much at times😆

"Don't be so sarcastic towards beautiful women son. You don't know what Godly beauty can do. If you fall in love with any of the beauties, you are gone for ever. That can be more devastating than even solving a horrible murder mystery. Women bring sorrow as much as she can bring happiness. Never underestimate them..."

These staements are also very true and you have written very cleverly ... good job Gargi 👍🏼

aww...thanks payel...😳...Women are the biggest mystery ever acc to me😉

Ever since Uday was a child he would dream about mountains, hills, rivers and he in a mask and a sword, driving the horse like crazy, and a girl, who would scream at the top of her voice, which only irritated him, rather than making him feel bad for her, whom he thought his duty to save, and save himself from her shrill voice which would have definitely deafened his ears in his sleep. Only after he would save her, and kill the demons who must have abducted her, he heaved a sigh of relief!

I started laughing reading his strange dreams 😆---i laughed too while writing...😆

But later it turned horrible---all thanks to my sleep which told me to make it scary after funny

I guess the innocent girl is Manyata...and she is the beautiful deception right!! 😉---ohh you never know who the person is...don't think much from now onwards

Kya precap hain boss!!! 😉---u liked the precap..i see...lets see hwat you have to say after u read it

Oh sorry for mentioning late...its great update 👍🏼---i already got it from ur praises...thanks dear😃

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: panchaali

Ha go ami bengali..puro Kokata r bengali 😊

ya i jst thought so!!😊😊 tomar 1st line ta pore jkhne tumi "KORE,KORO" ei wrds duto use korecho,then only i thought j these wrds r used by bengalis 😉😉 i am also kolkata's bengali🤗