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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Amazing update Gargi👍🏼

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

SUPERB UPDATE GARGI...LOVED IT.

IS DAT GIRL(APSARA) MANYATA.
OMG SHE IS SOOO CRUEL.
GUESS SHE HAD VERY BAD PAST.
AND SHE HAD SUFFERED A LOT.
WILL UDAY B HER NEXT PREY.
ENJOYED CHAPPY SO MUCH.
NOW EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE.

CONTINUE SOON.DANXS FOR PM.

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Awesum update...👏

loved it...👍🏼

Uday is always d Knight in shinning Armour...

precap seems interesting..😉

do cont soon..

n thnks 4 d pm...

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

hey
howz you
"please earth par hi rehna"
awsome update gargi loved it
update soon and conti asap
sorry 4 the late comment
thank you 4 the pm
loved ur concept and writting
lovely pdate soon
finally yo updated loved it
hayee..awsome udayveer !!

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

hi gargi

great update, i really loved it.

sorry for the late reply.

now we get to see the special gargi type story of magic.

when i first heard of that killer, i thought it would be a ordinary lady looking for revenge on men

but now i am sure she is no ordinary lady, she has some very evil magic powers and that is why i like her very much.

i loved how uday held on to his virtues.

when the snake bit her, i thought it would be her trick , but then as you showed all its signs, i thought how did that happen?? she really tried to seduce uday , and i loved it when she failed

now after sometime, she has again started her "old ways"

it was really scary to read about it.

oh, to imagine it, i am still scared.

but then who is she? why is she killing men like that?

what is her story?

looking forward for knowing her truth,

and i hope uday will never fall for her

thanks for the pm gargi, and sorry for the late reply

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz
hey
howz you
"please earth par hi rehna"
awsome update gargi loved it
update soon and conti asap
sorry 4 the late comment
thank you 4 the pm
loved ur concept and writting
lovely pdate soon
finally yo updated loved it
hayee..awsome udayveer !!

Thanks Ayesha...glad u liked it...bohot mehnat karna parta likhne mei...so after that seeing all the comments makes me smile a lot😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: andy.a
hi gargi
great update, i really loved it.

sorry for the late reply.

now we get to see the special gargi type story of magic.

when i first heard of that killer, i thought it would be a ordinary lady looking for revenge on men

but now i am sure she is no ordinary lady, she has some very evil magic powers and that is why i like her very much.

i loved how uday held on to his virtues.

when the snake bit her, i thought it would be her trick , but then as you showed all its signs, i thought how did that happen?? she really tried to seduce uday , and i loved it when she failed

now after sometime, she has again started her "old ways"

it was really scary to read about it.

oh, to imagine it, i am still scared.

but then who is she? why is she killing men like that?

what is her story?

looking forward for knowing her truth,

and i hope uday will never fall for her

thanks for the pm gargi, and sorry for the late reply

hi gargi---Hi andy😊

great update, i really loved it.--aww thank you😳

sorry for the late reply.---thats alright😉

now we get to see the special gargi type story of magic.--really...that's my speciality or u can say my madness😆

when i first heard of that killer, i thought it would be a ordinary lady looking for revenge on men----Do u think i can make an ordinary person so imp in the story😉

but now i am sure she is no ordinary lady, she has some very evil magic powers and that is why i like her very much.---hmmm lets see😊

i loved how uday held on to his virtues.---Yes after all he is a true knight😳

when the snake bit her, i thought it would be her trick , but then as you showed all its signs, i thought how did that happen?? she really tried to seduce uday , and i loved it when she failed

now after sometime, she has again started her "old ways"---Ya that's right..she won't stop her evil ways of trickinbg him..lets see how he saves himself😉

it was really scary to read about it.

oh, to imagine it, i am still scared.---really?..i wanted to frighten bt not so much😲

but then who is she? why is she killing men like that?

what is her story?---hmm its a weird story which ull know soon😳

looking forward for knowing her truth,

and i hope uday will never fall for her----Ltes see whether u are right or wrong😉

thanks for the pm gargi, and sorry for the late reply----aww no probs dear..take ur time to read n reply🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: nature2
Amazing update Gargi👍🏼

thanks dear...😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hey di
How u? 😊
Wow, great, awesome update di 👏
Loved it ⭐️
So beautifully written n long 👍🏼
I have a feeling that the Apsara is Manyata
But I wonder y is she doing all this
If she is Manyata will she fall in love with Uday during this process
Very eager to read next chapter 😃
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon

]Hey di---Hi humaira😊
How u? 😊 --m fine now...how r u?😳

Wow, great, awesome update di 👏
Loved it ⭐️ ----aww pleasure that u loved it dear😃

So beautifully written n long 👍🏼 ---thanks i got tired writing it😆

I have a feeling that the Apsara is Manyata-----hmm u r good in guessing..lets see who is right😳

But I wonder y is she doing all this----well that u will know soon

If she is Manyata will she fall in love with Uday during this process
Very eager to read next chapter 😃
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thanks HUmaira..ull get all ur answers in the coming chaps...keep redaing till then...🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: ...anju...
SUPERB UPDATE GARGI...LOVED IT.

IS DAT GIRL(APSARA) MANYATA.
OMG SHE IS SOOO CRUEL.
GUESS SHE HAD VERY BAD PAST.
AND SHE HAD SUFFERED A LOT.
WILL UDAY B HER NEXT PREY.
ENJOYED CHAPPY SO MUCH.
NOW EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE.

CONTINUE SOON.DANXS FOR PM.

Hi anju...hmm tumhe kya lagta hai?...kaun hogi woh?..lets see..keep guessing ki woh kaun hai😆

Lets see if she can make Uday her prey this time😉