Manveer OS---A Special Umbrella

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I luv rainy stories & this one is lovely.the title itself is catchy.1st the umbrella was his coat.they both under it was so romantic.then umbrella as a luv gift.confession in d rain...then d wet kiss was so hot.beautiful os

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -Zina-
Firstly, why didn't you put it in the contest!!😡
it was wonderful yar😭 but now you've posted it already so no need to cry😆.

Wow!! your first One Shot and so amazing,👏 it would have to be as you are a very awesome writer.👍🏼 you write so beautifully.😳The OS was Amazing!! 😛a very cute one.😳

Oh This rishika😡even came here, but you did good justice to her🤣. I know why you choose this name. lol😆. we sale in the same boat🤣

Oh, The special umbrella of Udayveer it was soo romantic☺️ and the confession aww, so dreamy and cute, i wish i was there instead of manyata😆.
she was rite, Udayveer and Manyata sounds wonderful.😳 Very cute OS gargi. do write more, I really love your work!!😃 Thanks for the PM.🤗

Firstly, why didn't you put it in the contest!!😡

it was wonderful yar😭 but now you've posted it already so no need to cry😆.--------Yes Zina i didn't post it as i was too excited about writing for the contest n wrote 3 OS instead of 2😆😆...so then i got confused as to which one to post for the contest, but later dropped this one from the contest, thinking other 2 to be more appropriate😊...don't know, fingers crossed...

Wow!! your first One Shot and so amazing,👏 it would have to be as you are a very awesome writer.👍🏼 you write so beautifully.😳The OS was Amazing!! 😛a very cute one.😳----aww..thanks Zina..it was inspired from The Classic a Korean movie😊

Oh This rishika😡even came here, but you did good justice to her🤣. I know why you choose this name. lol😆. we sale in the same boat🤣----Yes baby ur right...i wanted to take out all my anger n frustration n Chewing gum was therefore my way of showing it out🤣🤣

Oh, The special umbrella of Udayveer it was soo romantic☺️ and the confession aww, so dreamy and cute, i wish i was there instead of manyata😆.---glad you liked it..don't worry someone grt like UV will defo propose you in such a dreamy way

she was rite, Udayveer and Manyata sounds wonderful.😳 Very cute OS gargi. do write more, I really love your work!!😃 Thanks for the PM.🤗----Thanks Zina baby...whenever such a thought comes to my mind which is different, ill definitely post again

Thanks for the wonderful comments🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
I luv rainy stories & this one is lovely.the title itself is catchy.1st the umbrella was his coat.they both under it was so romantic.then umbrella as a luv gift.confession in d rain...then d wet kiss was so hot.beautiful os

Thanks Jasmine...glad u liked it dear😊..yes umbrella scene is never been written here..so i wanted to try something like that

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

thanks payel dear...none of the OS can be better than ur fairy tale OS😊...its OK about the PM😳

Hey now I too am blushing 😳

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

That was a wonderful update.

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

such a cute OS , loved it ❤️

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Loved it Gargi di.

Udayveer…Manyata…the name sounds incomplete without each other.

*Aww* Uday leaving his umbrella purposefully to be with Manyata was so cute.

Special umbrella…huh?? Loved the concept.

Rishika chudail..chewing gum..Aarghh I hate her more after reading your OS 🤣

Thanks for the pm.

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Loved it Gargi di.

Udayveer'Manyata'the name sounds incomplete without each other.

*Aww* Uday leaving his umbrella purposefully to be with Manyata was so cute.

Special umbrella'huh?? Loved the concept.

Rishika chudail..chewing gum..Aarghh I hate her more after reading your OS 🤣

Thanks for the pm.

Thanks Hina..glad u liked it...Yes i hate rishika n will hate her in every way...so took her name n made her chewing gum😆😆...