Manveer OS---A Special Umbrella

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Moni

@-Moni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hey Gargi!!

Nice OS...for the first time I m reading ur work and must admit you are quite impressive...Its inspired from the back story of The Classic ...beautifully adapted but still I felt it would have been better if you had not made ManVeer into college students..plz don't mind but I love ManVeer as they were in the show ...nice effort look forward to reading more of ur work :)

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome gargi!

Beautifully written!

Loved it!

I hope everyone has a special umbrella in their

Life as well to make their life more special.

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was a beautiful OS.
Hope you write more Os.
Chewing gum as a girlfriend that is so true. LOL

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome os👏...i loved it❤️...this is too romantic☺️...i loved the special umbrella scene...nd thnx for pm🤗...

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athira

@shruti-love

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

sweet and beautiful os

liked it

thanks for pm

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Beautiful OS

Loved it very much ...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

it was awesome
so cutely romantic story
i truly have no words
i think you should give
coz it neither boring nor long
it is just beautiufl and perfect
would love a ss on this
only if you think it suitable
thx for the pm
hugzz
anni

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awww.. it was so romantic luved it keep writing such works...

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Moni-
Hey Gargi!!

Nice OS...for the first time I m reading ur work and must admit you are quite impressive...Its inspired from the back story of The Classic ...beautifully adapted but still I felt it would have been better if you had not made ManVeer into college students..plz don't mind but I love ManVeer as they were in the show ...nice effort look forward to reading more of ur work :)

Nice OS...for the first time I m reading ur work and must admit you are quite impressive---Thanks for the compliments Mun

Its inspired from the back story of The Classic----haha..you caught me😳...Yes its inspired from The Classic...Its my favourite movie and i really think everyone should watch the movie...I love the song that plays in the background in the rain scene...

beautifully adapted but still I felt it would have been better if you had not made ManVeer into college students..plz don't mind but I love ManVeer as they were in the show---Thats alright Mun..but i was a bit bored seeing them everyday in royal avtaar..so thought of making them college studs..😊

Thanks for the lovely comments Mun.🤗.whenever i come across some good ideas ill definitely turn it into a work😊