Manveer Os:-The Rain Princess..Part II Pg 6

MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awww that was just mind blowing
loved it loads deary...
that witch was cruel
but love is strongest
awesomely written...
and also CONGRATS DEARY
FOR BECOMING DAZZLER
HAVE A GR8 LIFE AHEAD!!!!!!

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Shahista

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Posted: 12 years ago

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FIRSTLY CONGRATS ON BECOMING A DAZZLER PAYEL... HUGS.. MUUAAAH

AND NOW FOR THE UPDATE... ONCE AGAIN I AM LEFT AMAZED AND TOTALLY IN AWE OF YOUR REMARKABLE WRITING. NO WORDS CAN SOME UP HOW MUCH I ENJOY READING YOUR WORK.. AND I DIDNT WANT IT TO END THERE.. THNAK YOU FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY PAYEL...

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Gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

awww...this is such a sweet OS...Payel it is a masterpiece..i can't stop reading it. This is the best fairy tale of all times...So innovative and u have a great imagination!...👏...Kudos to you...fabulous work done sweets. 👏👏

Keep writing such OS😊

and Ya...Congratulations for becoming a dazzler!🥳..may you go more high up the ladder😃

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Humairaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Very well written
Same, felt bad for Manyata 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: dumas
congrats on becoming a dazzler lovedthe ending beautifully done poor manyatha as soon as he the mother showed her truth color amazing update loved her punishment and they got their happy after thanks for the pm

Hey Dumas thankzz again...

You always give nice Manveer pics with your nicer comments 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa
fantastic update...udayveer mother was so cruel...poor manyata...i really loved it...thnx for pm...

Thanx for your support

you are welocome 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ...anju...
payel...beautiful update...👏

loved those poems u added...❤️

manyata left everything for her love...😳

poor manyata had to suffer a lot...😲

loved lover in uday so much...☺️

atlast witch mom got her punishment.she deserved it...😛

and u gave a happy ending...😊

loved it loads.enjoyed d os so much...⭐️

thanxs for such a beautiful os...😳

well done.keep it up...🤗

Thankx for you lovely comment 😊

Its my manveer Fairy tale it must end happily 😃

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30
Very beautiful OS Payel di😃
Great work..
i read both the parts at once and got instantly transported into dream land😛
it was so so good⭐️
loved every bit of it😃

Thanks for the PM😊

and lastly Congo shongo for becoming a dazzler🤗🥳

Thankzzz a loott Vibah 😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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