Manveer Os:-The Rain Princess..Part II Pg 6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: annabh

it was super good
awn manveer married life
they were so madly in love
hate this witch
but all power are week infront of love
and this story proves that
i nearly cried when i imagined manyata
getting tourtured by the witch
actually the w should be replaced by the b
oh so finally uday realished
thta his mother was wrong
loved the ending
it was perfect
thank you for pm
ps i am eagerly waiting for ur ss the libary princess

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awww that was just mind blowing
loved it loads deary...
that witch was cruel
but love is strongest
awesomely written...
and also CONGRATS DEARY
FOR BECOMING DAZZLER
HAVE A GR8 LIFE AHEAD!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Shahista01

FIRSTLY CONGRATS ON BECOMING A DAZZLER PAYEL... HUGS.. MUUAAAH

AND NOW FOR THE UPDATE... ONCE AGAIN I AM LEFT AMAZED AND TOTALLY IN AWE OF YOUR REMARKABLE WRITING. NO WORDS CAN SOME UP HOW MUCH I ENJOY READING YOUR WORK.. AND I DIDNT WANT IT TO END THERE.. THNAK YOU FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL STORY PAYEL...

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

awww...this is such a sweet OS...Payel it is a masterpiece..i can't stop reading it. This is the best fairy tale of all times...So innovative and u have a great imagination!...👏...Kudos to you...fabulous work done sweets. 👏👏

Keep writing such OS😊

and Ya...Congratulations for becoming a dazzler!🥳..may you go more high up the ladder😃

Hi , comment edited pg7. THANX😊.

...dear😃

...4 pming me...😃

ur update sweety..😃

u done a dear...👏

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics

Originally posted by: ...navina...

RES😊. [Will edit it on Thursday Payel Di] BTW ... congrats on becoming a Dazzler 🤗 .

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Firstly , an apology ...

I wasn't well the last few days and had to take sick-leave from work. Being at home for those days , had made me lose track of what day it was. Please do forgive me for NOT EDITTING MY COMMENT ON THE DAY I SAID I'D DO IT!

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Now , coming to the update ...

It was magnificent👏!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every scene was filled with so much of emotion , be it joy or sadness!

The first part was so sweet and romantic😳! I love the country of Spring ... I also want to stay there😆!

Famine was a wicked woman ... and scary too. She got everything she deserved . I knew all that sweetness she showed was just an act! Her cruelty towards Manyata was heart-breaking💔.

Loved the dialogue of Uday , when he said he'll never listen to Manyata again😉. That was cute😳!

All in all ... it was a superb update👍🏼.

Brilliantly written (as always😉).

Most interesting ...

... LOVED IT!!!!!

Thanks for the PM😊.