Manveer Os:-The Rain Princess..Part II Pg 6

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

RES😊. [Will edit it on Thursday Payel Di] BTW ... congrats on becoming a Dazzler 🤗 .

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Firstly , an apology ...

I wasn't well the last few days and had to take sick-leave from work. Being at home for those days , had made me lose track of what day it was. Please do forgive me for NOT EDITTING MY COMMENT ON THE DAY I SAID I'D DO IT!

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Now , coming to the update ...

It was magnificent👏!!!!!!!!!!!!

Every scene was filled with so much of emotion , be it joy or sadness!

The first part was so sweet and romantic😳! I love the country of Spring ... I also want to stay there😆!

Famine was a wicked woman ... and scary too. She got everything she deserved . I knew all that sweetness she showed was just an act! Her cruelty towards Manyata was heart-breaking💔.

Loved the dialogue of Uday , when he said he'll never listen to Manyata again😉. That was cute😳!

All in all ... it was a superb update👍🏼.

Brilliantly written (as always😉).

Most interesting ...

... LOVED IT!!!!!

Thanks for the PM😊.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ...navina...
RES😊. [Will edit it on Thursday Payel Di] BTW ... congrats on becoming a Dazzler 🤗 .

Thankzzz😃

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

congrats on becoming a dazzler lovedthe ending beautifully done poor manyatha as soon as he the mother showed her truth color amazing update loved her punishment and they got their happy after thanks for the pm

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

fantastic update...udayveer mother was so cruel...poor manyata...i really loved it...thnx for pm...

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SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

payel...beautiful update...👏

loved those poems u added...❤️

manyata left everything for her love...😳

poor manyata had to suffer a lot...😲

loved lover in uday so much...☺️

atlast witch mom got her punishment.she deserved it...😛

and u gave a happy ending...😊

loved it loads.enjoyed d os so much...⭐️

thanxs for such a beautiful os...😳

well done.keep it up...🤗

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Very beautiful OS Payel di😃
Great work..
i read both the parts at once and got instantly transported into dream land😛
it was so so good⭐️
loved every bit of it😃

Thanks for the PM😊

and lastly Congo shongo for becoming a dazzler🤗🥳

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Superb just luved it... keep writing such works...

And congrats on becoming dazzler...

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

vry beautiful ending👏
poem is too good⭐️

thanx fr pm

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

it was super good
awn manveer married life
they were so madly in love
hate this witch
but all power are week infront of love
and this story proves that
i nearly cried when i imagined manyata
getting tourtured by the witch
actually the w should be replaced by the b
oh so finally uday realished
thta his mother was wrong
loved the ending
it was perfect
thank you for pm
ps i am eagerly waiting for ur ss the libary princess

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