TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27 - Page 8

Originally posted by: princessSonia

yaayy..🥳😉

me first.. 😆

hope i can res...😉

unresd... Thanks for unres

Awesum update...👏👏 thank you sonia...

Loved it...👍🏼 glad you did

loved Dadi n maya's convo...👏 that was the just of chapter 1

Do cont soon... will do

n thnks 4 d pm... you welcome

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Superb update😃 thank you hina
Loved Dadi's concern for Manyata me too😉
So Saab's the reason why Manyata is not accepting her love for Udayveer😡 yes he is the reason
In every lovestory,there is a villain and I guess Saab's the villain of this story lol.. you got that right
Brijraj seems to be a perfect father unlike the show😆 yes i gave him a make over.. lol😆
Thanks for the pm and update soon😊 you welome.. will update later or tomorrow

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update yar... thanks mahi
poor Maya struggling through so much... haan... bechari
veer must be so angry... boiling point angry😡
and dadisaab she must be heart broken... she is even though she doesnt know the truth
oh this Saab...lol😉😆
loved it loads

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm shah sahab is a ba****d for sure i hate him thankss fr pm

Originally posted by: ...anju...

hai shahi hey anju😉

update was so emotional.beautiful.loved it to core sha. aww thanks anju, glad you enjoyed

loved veers daadi so much. me too😉

i hate giri.how can he speak like dat about a girl.
sahab is like that.. every story has a meanie. he is mine 😆😉
loved daadi manyata conversation. glad you did

felt bad for brijraj.poor father. yes he is a brilliant dad...who had to hear terrible things

manyata wid family going to mumbai away from veer. M is staying in their old house alone, everyone else has leftto mumbai, she is waiting for brij to get back and then leave with him

hope manveer meet soon. they will. this is a ss so no delays...

well written shahi.keep it up. thank you anju
lved it to d core. glad you did

try to continue soon.now cant wait to know wat twist story takes. lol.. soon enough

and thanks for pm. u welcome

tc🤗 u 2 anju

anju

Originally posted by: ricna

👏👏👏Wooohooo. Always makes my day seeing a pm from you sha

and as usual you never fail to live up to your standard. supafantablous😉👏 and ricna it always makes my day reading your lovely comments. Thank you

I loved it.. set about to be a very intense and deep story.. it will be intense and deep my middle name...

So now we get to know that maya was made to write that letter to veer

and to get him to leave her.. yes

Love dadi... positive warm and a veer maya supporter well she seems to know what maya really feels for veer. yes she is a positive character...

What an arrogant ass%^$# that sahab is.. lol thats putting it mildly ricna

HIS SONS ARE YOUNG AND HOT BLOODED AND BOTH SISTERS ARE THERE TO SEE TO THEIR NEEDS??? 😆 lol not that i would mind seeing to veers needs... 😳 i know i know i have taken my mind out of the gutter... lol ricna you are just too much😆

So maya is a servant. some sort of maid? and brijraj is not her father? and why did he call the sisters dirty blood? yes she is a maid.. kind off no brijraj is not her biological father... all will be revealed

I can only imagine what will happen when veer comes to know... and from the prologue if the letter got him so furious imagine knowing this.. and he is on his way right?? yes he is, probably just arrived... 😆

he has to stop her, i hope she is not gone when he gets back but whatever it is i am sure he will find her.. rest assured ricna you know veer very well hey😆

You have woven another web of emotions and intensity in a new story that i already love... aww thank you ricna..

continue soon.. cant wait .. tora sabar kar ricna...😉 next chap is full veer

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Heya Shahi Didi hey anu

Wonderful Update thank you

love it very much glad you did

as always beautifully written aww thanks

The concept is very strong and good thanks glad you think so

Love between a servant girl and a high class Boy yes always drew me to it

And the boys parent trying to separate them lol anu like clockwork

A classic Story I tell U ... lol.. i tell you😆😉

Maya and J arent Brijraj's daughter ?? no they are not

are the adopted r something ? something like that

hmm Well personally I think Veer's dad is pretty rude yes he is...

Dadi seems like a positive character and I m guessing she might

help veer to find HIS maya ... I like her dadi is brilliant, always loves her veer and maya together

sad to hear that this promising story will have only six parts 😕 haan kya kare.. just an idea that came to mind. will keep it short and simple😉

anyways continue ASAP surely anu...

thanks you for updating and also for PM you welcome and thanks for the comment.

Take Care U 2

Hugs RIGHT BACK AT YA

Originally posted by: preya_radev

omg chapter one was awesome poor maya has to scarifies her love and I just cant wait for veer entry please update the next part soon and thanks for the pm