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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

wowww

really good

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(L)(L)(L)<3

uday nd manayta so cute

nd unati nd aayan so sad ek dusre se nafrat karte hein

uday nd manayta fight scene so cute

seriously loved ur update

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Awesome update after sooo long totally and truly loved it...HAPPY RAMADAN to u too...cont soon

ps. my name is neha

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Awesome, super dooper udate Sarah di 😊
Loved every scene ⭐️
Beautifully written, glad you're back, was really missing you
My name is Humairaa
The updates were too good that i'm left speechless
Loved the manveer ice-cream fight 😆, it was too cute
Thanks for the pm 😊
Ramadaan Mubarak to u too

Edited by humairaa1 - 12 years ago

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Namreen sheikh

@Vishdrmzzz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Gosh wat an update sarah
i m totally in love with ur ff
ice cream fight was too good
ayan n unnati were realy cute
love manveer

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

oh my god 3 update ek sath mai sapna tho nhi dekh rhi i mean 3 update ek sath haye ab mujhe tujhse koi shikayat nhi hai ab tho koi tujhe nhi pitega sachi mai tho kabhi nhi pitungi 😆😆 dil khush kar dita tu 😛😛 mai party orgonize karne wali hu firstly tune story dedi secondly tune 3 update ek sath diye 😃😃😃 maze aa gaye ...

ab now coming ur update (bit serious)

1st chappy ma manyta ithni pareshaan upar se ek or khtarnak channle dekh liya breaking newz chain se sona hai tho jaag jao ek pati ne apni bwi ko jaan se maar diya kyu uski uski kudli mai dosh tha bechari vese uski lagi padi hai or upar esa channles juta maar bechari ki tho ninde udadi haa nhi tho or uper se vo uday ko call kar rhi hai tho mhan insaan phn nhi utha rhe bechari tho soch rhi thi uday uska khoon karke anjali se shadi karega than unnati ke pas jati hai tho ghar mai unnati nhi hai bechari ki lag gayi uper se phn baj rha hai tho phn nhi utha rhi at the last gusse mai uthke gayi vo tho aacha hai manyta ki akhe hai verna umid nhi thi vo phn uthayegi ... chal utha liya ... uthane ke badh jo usne bola na seriously mera haste haste pait dard ho gaya agar mai kiski ko bolti tho agle din uske pass na jati but ek bath hai bandi mai gutz hai cha gayi ... lol kuch bhi khe... suna tho diya pura biwi wala huk jataya hai lol

next part

ds ko tho mai khichke thapad marungi abhi yha love story nhi ban rhi wha use vo ghar bula rhi hai bechari manyta ... than uday ki entry duniya mai ithni gandi bezti kisi ki nhi hui hogi seriously bhagte hue gayi chalta hai but jo usne hug kiya hai na vo sabse funny tha 😆😆 or uspe uday ka reaction bande ne kuch react hi nhi kiya than sabse funny screan manyta coffee leke uday ke rum ke bhar khadi hai or vo jo 124 tha na vo tho awesome manyta 4 se phele 3 ata hai ... seriously love mai banda counting bhi bhul jata hai at the last jab himmat kar ke khatkane jati hai tho sari coffee uday ki shirt pe bas sab se mind blowing sceen tha vo ... bechara uday use tho pura yakin ho gaya meri biwi pagal hai ... vo tho

uski parwha karta hai ki usne use pagal khane nhi bheja ... now ayan i hate him but i love ayan n unnati as a couple n i love damon so u know i alwayz his side 😛😛 samjha karo yr pyaar ka mamla hai den manveer screen aaj tho ptha chal gaya google kis liye use hota hai firstly jab mujhe pyaar hoga mai bhi google se search marungi ... !!!

den ice cream wala screen aww i love that screen mathlab kis angle se vo dono yuvrani n yuvraj lag rhe the seriously n jab uday ne manyta ko kiss kiya haye cutiee mar gayi mai tho 😳😳😳 n at the last manyta ne khe hi diya haye i love u bhi bade mast tarike se bola hai ...

over all i loved it sach maza aa gaya kasam se 👏👏 love u muhaaa ... n tu mujhe kritz bula sakti hai ya kritika as ur wish ... 😉😉

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

WOW!!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!!

WOW!!!!WOW!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!!

WOW!!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!👏

Wow is the word that comes to mind when describing how i felt about this update. OMG!!⭐️ waiting for this update was worth it. Two months i could have waited another 6 months if you gave an update like this AGAIN😛. Where do i start: my excitement knows no bound after reading this update. 🥱

The use of character's emotions, setting, description and everything was just RIGHT!! This was one the best update of ur FF according to me😃😃. While i was reading i continuously smiled because it was so well written😊. I loved each and every part especially Unnathi and Aayan's convo where he tried confronting her.

The ice-cream fight was really good as well, it made me kind of crave ice-cream. 😆 I can't wait for what you have install for your readers next but all i can say is that i will be prepared because even if the coming updates are not lovey dovey i have this update to come back to to reminisce the MANVEER moments😳.

Good luck with your upcoming updates and thanks for the PM (i nearly dropped my phone when i saw ur PM and saw that you updated ur FF😆😆). Please PM me again when you have updated but as i said i am in no hurry, have a great EID, enjoy with your family, rest and then when you have the time UPDATE.

I am like still excited as i am typing this GOD SAVE ME!!!😳😳😳 But anyways, i appreciate your long UPDATE. A BIG BIG THANK YOU!!!!!

P.S> you asked for my real name... is NIBIR (naam to suna hi hoga 😆).

BYE FOR NOW AND WILL BE ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE> CIAO👍🏼👍🏼❤️

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

wowie!!! Triple update
a Huge Thank you for it😛
all of them were just Amazing👏 (i know the word is too small to describe them when they were much more than that)

Loved all the Manveer scenes...Manyata searching google for 'How to fall and Unfall in love' that was damn good!!
and after that Manyata making a total fool of herself when she spills Coffee on Uday that was great...Love often makes a person do crazy things..lol😆 as described by Adi, they're Tom and Jerry indeed😉

And my favorite part in all 3 of them was Ice cream fight...Wonderful, superb, Outstanding (if this were a movie i'd give you a Five on five review)⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

omg Manyata almost confessed to Uday about her true feelings😳 can't wait to see how he reacts...

Thanks for the PM and Update whenever you can😃
and Ramzan Mubarak🤗

(P.S: my name is Vibha😳)

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#428

hey diii the update was fab

specially the ice cream fight

and the confession part was cherry on cake

but y uday is avoiding her i am feeling bad for manyata

actually i want jelous and possessive uday

so he can knoe that he luvs ,manyata

update soon

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

superb update...loved it...i love the manyata of your story...cute, sweet, naughty...google can help person in every way...but unfall in love google cant help in it...the way she tries to get away from uday take her close to uday...loved the icecream fight...manyata hugged uday...loved it...and thanks for pm...my name is prerna...