(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Wow that was a fabulous work 👏
Back with bang again
Pls navi give update today or tomorrow ...pls it's a request ...jus cant wait to see manveer again

Congrates for ur new thread😊 am happy for u
Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🥳Congratulations on the new thread Navina 🥳

Superb prologue 👏
Loved it !
Please update soon !
Can't wait till Friday !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

PROLOGUE :
As the rain poured down ... Uday stood by his bedroom window. So much has changed in this few days , he thought to himself. But I'm back where I belong - THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS! So glad that Uday is back !!!
He turned to go to bed , he felt a sense of loneliness as he stared at the empty bed. Yet another night , that Manyata chose to stay away from him. But it was understandable ... in the 1 year that he was away from her ... she had made many adjustments. And now that he was back - she was finding a bit of difficulty in readjusting.
Or maybe , because of the year-long "seperation" , Uday had become a stranger to her. We'd have to get to know each other again ... before we can be 1 , once more , he concluded. Manveer falling in love all over again...
Through the baby-monitor , he heard his daughter cry , he raced to the nursery. He pushed the door & entered ; only to see Manyata breast-feeding their child. Megha's eyes rolled upwards and followed her father's movements , till he sat down beside her.Little Megha recognises her father ... awww
He just raised his hand to touch his baby's cheek , when Manyata pulled her shirt over ... covering her bosom and the child's head. Uday apologised and left the room , and Manyata cursed herself for doing what she did. But she , herself; was unsure of why she did it.
Talk to me Princess - what's wrong? What's changed between us?
The truth was , when Uday "DIED" ; Manyata mourned for him ... she longed for him to love her again ... she pined for him to return ... she ached for him to be by her side again! BUT , 1 STRONG EMOTION GOT SUPPRESSED. Now , that Uday was back ... that emotion had come to the surface. The ANGER that had built inside her ; was about to spurt out like a volcano.
I'm so angry with you Uday. I can't control it at all. I KNOW I SHOULDN'T BE ... as it was not your fault ... BUT I AM!!!
You left me Uday ... U left me ALL ALONE ... U left me to manage your empire by myself ... U left me to deal with our riyasat matters by my lonesome ... U left me ALONE AND PREGNANT ... U left me to raise our child by myself ... U left me , even after U PROMISED NOT TO LEAVE ME!!!
U were not there when DS was forcing me to remarry. U were not there when I misbalanced and nearly fell down the stairs when I was 8 months pregnant. U were not there when I felt like having chocolate-milkshake in the dead of the night. U were not there when our baby was born. U were not there when she cried in the middle of the night. U WERE NOT THERE WHEN I NEEDED U THE MOST!
I hate you for NOT BEING HERE FOR THE LAST YEAR! I hate Akash for TAKING YOU AWAY FROM ME! And finally; I hate myself for HAVING THESE NEGATIVE FEELINGS ABOUT YOU!
Poor M she seems to have had a lot of pent up suppressed anger . But She understands that she shouldnt be having negative feelings and feels bad that she has them...
She broke down in tears and Uday enclosed her in his arms. He , too; cried silently with her. If I could redo the past , Princess ... I would! But I can't!!! But 1 thing I can do , is make a fresh start.
The past is the past no one can change it ... fresh start great 😃
He got down on 1 knee , took Manyata's hands in his and kissed it. Princess - will u marry me? ... AGAIN?
Awww...
this end part made me swoon...
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That's it people! Do leave back your LIKEs and comments. I look forward to hearing from you'll😃.
BTW ... chapter 1 will pick-up from where book 2 ended.
Thanks for reading😊. Chapter 1 will be updated on Friday at midnight.
Will be waiting for friday ...


Awesome prologue Navi
u expressed M 's emotiond very well
Eager for chapter 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Many many congratulations for Book 3👏👏👏👏

Superb prologue Clap
Please update soon !
Edited by saneha85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue!!!!!!! Navina plz update the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!:):):):):p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb prologue Navi...loved it...bt i didn't understand 1 thing...what was that strong emotion which u wrote in CAPS which Manyata started feeling?...

anways congrats for a new thread and book 3.👏..I think you should call it an FF now instead of an SS...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii navi i know i had not comment but i will comment after my board exam got over i will
i know i have to comment for 2 chappy and upcoming chappy also 😆
exam me paper likhne ke bad kuch appreciate karni ka dimag ke ghoda nahi dodte issliya after 21 i will comment till then jamke update karo chappter 3 4 then i will comment on all 🤣
Edited by angelina6 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hailla mera IP theek hogyaa...
i feel like jumping!! & i literally am
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue Navina👏

Manyata backing off makes a sense & some where she is right, but neither its uday's fault...it wasn't under his control...! all thanks to Akash😡

Finally the Family will rejoin, that's the best thing...one more thing is to resolve that uday will get back his lost memory🤔

Awww,,,,, i loved the last line
😳
Princess, will u marry me ...AGAIN??

Update Soon Love

&
Thanks 4 the PM.



P.S: My commenting style has changed 😉
Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🥳Woah Navi a heartily congrats...u made it to book 3 👏👏👏

Your story is a blockbuster hit huh 😉🥳

And prologue is fantastic and so heart touching

U know what i loved was Manayta's reaction...that was so understandable and u penned it beautifully

It really showed her craving and need when he wasnt around to support her...it was beyond fabulous⭐️⭐️⭐️

Really looking forward to FAMILY REUNION😉

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